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Etherians of the Great City
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Five citizens of the Great City, one of the largest metropolises on Etheria.
About this creation
Odakr: The Police

He walks the streets in night and day,
criminals must all give way.

He'll stop the robbers, killers, and the thieves

Dead in their tracks before they take their leave.




Bornak: The Boulder

Though strong and quiet,
this one is not such a brute as he appears

But pensive, thoughtful, wiser by his many years.




Kulars: The Cook

A jovial man, he loves to eat, he loves all kinds of food!...

As evidenced by his rotund stature, and always-hungry mood.

His cleaver (to prepare the finest dishes),
Can, in a pinch, defend him, if he wishes.




Ynur: The Defender

A guard outside the City's walls
ensures that no innocent falls

To the vile beastly things, lurking just outside;
her shield will hold, it must hold, against this tide.




Ezis: The Savage

An unknown outcast from so long ago,

returns to the city the others call home.

He lashes out, not sitting idly by
For the Savage is really...

EZ.15: The Pretender
...a Sidron spy.



WOOHOO, POETRY

Etherians always go better with poetry.
(... feel free to quote me on that)

I'd say the Cook has the most personality, the Boulder has the most unique build, the Police has the best build overall, and the Defender and Savage... hmm. I don't know.

Thanks, Marko, for most of the names- as you can see I changed and rearranged them to who I saw fit better.

Ynur is dark green, Odakr has a bunch of blue Technic pieces (intentional, it's part of the color scheme), and Kulars is not pink.

Clearly an entry for the BCBS December contest. Good luck to everyone entering!



L.A. you liar! You said you made up Etherians! Go on, anyone, google search the word "etheria" and see how many results you get. :P
No hard feelings, just joking around... but seriously, that's a cliche name.



Comments

 I made it 
  January 10, 2013
Quoting Cody G
I personally prefer free verse.
  January 8, 2013
I read your poetry on BZpower, and it's pretty good! One tip though (and you don't have to pay much attention to it because I have virtually no experience in poetry), but following a poetry form or creating some sort of pattern with syllables would make your poems flow a bit better. Here's an example of what I mean: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limerick_%28poetry%29
 I like it 
  December 16, 2012
Cute little guys Chro. Glad to see you joined flickr :) Now you need Minecraft :P
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting John-117 Gonzalez I love these guys! Can you please make instructions on the bodies. I will give credit .
I can produce instructions for Ynur or Bornak. All the others have been scrapped.
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting Coconut Fanatic That does make sense, and you have a good point. It's just a crazy dream...
Dude, that's fine, I'm not mad or anything. I just felt like pointlessly ranting, I guess, haha. Write what you want, I'm not one to stop you! :)
  December 15, 2012
That does make sense, and you have a good point. It's just a crazy dream...
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  December 15, 2012
I love these guys! Can you please make instructions on the bodies. I will give credit .
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  December 15, 2012
I love these guys! Can you please make instructions on the bodies. I will give credit .
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
*sigh*
Quoting Coconut Fanatic
Okay, this won't deter you, but I've got to say that Greg confirmed that Bionicle is not connected to humans or our dimension in any way at all. Not even the Great Beings have any connection to humans. I don't really know what to say. The idea of humans in Bionicle is one that I am strongly against not only because it is officially stated to not be true, but because there would be so much wrong there... for starters, we've got a robot that is about as large as the planet Earth, sent into space from a colossal planet that has been split into three by fighting over glowy silver water (and on these parts, beings still somehow impossibly survive, by the way), filled with millions of child-sized cyborgs which speak programming language and are accidentally self-aware, which is knocked unconscious by a virus spread through his brain by a gaseous shadowy traitor that pulls slugs out of his abdomen. And then you've got humans? No. Sorry Terilis. I'm not even going to get into the whole "blood is acid" thing, because even by Bionicle physics (sometimes this can be different from real world physics), that makes no sense. Again, sorry, no hard feelings, I'm just explaining my side, LOL.
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Sorry to disappoint, but only the first portion of the story involves humanity, afterwards, it is almost exclusively Spherus Magnan races. Yeesh, that was a lot of spoilers just in these two comments.
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  December 15, 2012
Well... It's for the most part just me, because so often I imagine myself becoming Terilis, and I even DREAM about it, so I needed to write it down... And if you think about it, it is possible that BIONICLE isn't some other dimension completely seperate from ours, likely in fact. But, as the original story, is, in "The Time Before Time," this happens in the far future, approx. 170,000 years from the reformation of Spherus Magna. Turaga Vakama's dying words, his final vision, "The Light from the Dark, the Blessed Shadow... the Dark Angel cometh..."
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting ChrisOtron ~ A bunch of Awesome little guys!
Thank you. :D
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting Coconut Fanatic (reply to your comment on J'darqui) Actually, it was confirmed by the Big Man that Spherus Magnan's have blood. But J'darqui's cannon utilizes airborn elements of Human Blood, including Plasma, thus making it so dangerous. And again, thank you for making a sidron :D
Spherus Magnans do have blood, yes, but I meant MU inhabitants. Blood doesn't have an acidic affect in Bionciel, for the record. Please tell me you aren't including humans in your story, I'll be disappointed.
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
A bunch of Awesome little guys!
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting Toa Infernum Wow!Great collection! Love Bornak, Odakr, and Kulars! I just didn't have time to make an entry. :(. There's always next month...
Quoting Johann Dakitsch Really cool group. The builds are nice and the designs interesting. I really like the first three ones, specially the Cook.
Thanks guys. :D
  December 15, 2012
(reply to your comment on J'darqui) Actually, it was confirmed by the Big Man that Spherus Magnan's have blood. But J'darqui's cannon utilizes airborn elements of Human Blood, including Plasma, thus making it so dangerous. And again, thank you for making a sidron :D
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting Cody G Nice stuff! Although your builds are a bit better than your poetry. ;)
Haha, yeah- it's usually a lot better, I just decided to throw it in there at the lest minute.
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Nice stuff! Although your builds are a bit better than your poetry. ;)
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Really cool group. The builds are nice and the designs interesting. I really like the first three ones, specially the Cook.
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Wow!Great collection! Love Bornak, Odakr, and Kulars! I just didn't have time to make an entry. :(. There's always next month...
 I made it 
  December 15, 2012
Quoting Leaith Flex Really good but in my opinion Bornak and EZ15 are the only solid looking entries the rest look a bit sloppy and over thought. But in general it's quite a good entry all together, good luck!
Bornak's good, yes, but honestly I put the least effort into Ezis. The transformation thing was an accident. Anyway, thanks, I guess...
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Really good but in my opinion Bornak and EZ15 are the only solid looking entries the rest look a bit sloppy and over thought. But in general it's quite a good entry all together, good luck!
 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Cool dude! I like the designs on these dudes :P
[ Chro  ]
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Pure Epicness
  December 14, 2012
That last little paragraph mate me use google translate on etheria. in greek it means essential, and in latin it means heaven. two or three other languages translate it to simply ether (which has various meanings. look it up in a dictionary.) anyways, These are some awesome etherians. I always imagined that the ehterians that had a HF armor head were of a different race than those with a ball joint head.
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting A. Jones So many etharians on the pages, I like Bornak, what set did the white gear on Odkar come from?
Thanks Jonesy. Not sure, maybe Takanuva?
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
Nice!
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
So many etharians on the pages, I like Bornak, what set did the white gear on Odkar come from?
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting Coconut Fanatic Oh... my brick... You're last Etherian is a Sidron Spy... I think I love you. In a friendly way.
Mwahahaha, the army grows. Er, I mean, thanks man, of course.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
Oh... my brick... You're last Etherian is a Sidron Spy... I think I love you. In a friendly way.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
The poetry was the perfect accent! And, they are all great characters, but, yes... Cooky is the best! Lotsa Luck! :)
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting MCLegoboy ! I really like Bornak. The squashed approach for cycloptic beings is just so enjoyable. Then Kulars, I really like for the parts, especially the way you gave him a bit of a gut and the the use of the Hockey Stick as a Cleaver was great.
Thanks MC. Kulars and Bornak are two of my favorites from this group too, LOL.
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting Kraata Face(Strakk) Etherian is spy!
You are so small! Is funny to me!
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
I really like Bornak. The squashed approach for cycloptic beings is just so enjoyable. Then Kulars, I really like for the parts, especially the way you gave him a bit of a gut and the the use of the Hockey Stick as a Cleaver was great.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
Etherian is spy!
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting Pure Epicness That last little paragraph mate me use google translate on etheria. in greek it means essential, and in latin it means heaven. two or three other languages translate it to simply ether (which has various meanings. look it up in a dictionary.) anyways, These are some awesome etherians. I always imagined that the ehterians that had a HF armor head were of a different race than those with a ball joint head.
Not google translate, per se, but just a normal google search... seriously, there are a lot of results. Interesting idea about the different varieties, as well.
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope Great collection of entries here. All well built with fantastic designs. The poetry was nice too, and yeah, you're right, Etherians and poetry do go together nicely. Great work Chro, and good luck! :)
Haha, so true. Thanks Gale! Good luck to you as well.
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda Don't remind me the cliché of the name. I thought it was original when I made it )= But however I like it, LIKE YOUR ENTRIES!! Oh my God, what a wonderful group of entries! The first three are my favourites. The police looks awesome, with a futuristic design and color scheme! I love the overall design of the boulder a lot, and the cook? Who cares about the Etherian don't need to eat, it's perfect! I never thought of that armor piece as an apron! The other two look great too, but however they doesn't 'impress' me as the first three! Marvelous, my dear, thanks a lot for this! That's definitely one of my best days of this year xD Good luck!
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, Ynur and Ezis were the weaker of the five builds, for sure. Good luck to you, too!
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
Great collection of entries here. All well built with fantastic designs. The poetry was nice too, and yeah, you're right, Etherians and poetry do go together nicely. Great work Chro, and good luck! :)
  December 14, 2012
Lolz
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting AuRon ~ "The Boulder feels conflicted about fighting a young, blind girl." Now to make a young, blind, Etherian girl for the Boulder to fight! I really like all of them, except for the savage. I know he technically isn't Etherian, but I just don't think he fits...
"The Boulder take issue with that comment!" Heheheh, I knew someone was going to reference that. Yeah, Ezis wasn't supposed to fit- that's the point. Anyway, thanks Auron! :D
 I made it 
  December 14, 2012
Quoting Jeremy S. Don't let him hit Pirai with his baton!
That honestly sounds like a line out of a Lego product magazine set description.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
Don't remind me the cliché of the name. I thought it was original when I made it )= But however I like it, LIKE YOUR ENTRIES!! Oh my God, what a wonderful group of entries! The first three are my favourites. The police looks awesome, with a futuristic design and color scheme! I love the overall design of the boulder a lot, and the cook? Who cares about the Etherian don't need to eat, it's perfect! I never thought of that armor piece as an apron! The other two look great too, but however they doesn't 'impress' me as the first three! Marvelous, my dear, thanks a lot for this! That's definitely one of my best days of this year xD Good luck!
 I like it 
  December 14, 2012
"The Boulder feels conflicted about fighting a young, blind girl." Now to make a young, blind, Etherian girl for the Boulder to fight! I really like all of them, except for the savage. I know he technically isn't Etherian, but I just don't think he fits...
  December 14, 2012
Nice, not bad at all. My favorites are the cook and the police. Don't let him hit Pirai with his baton!
 
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