This is a very good moc,never think otherwise.He is tall, but so are many good mocs,even Demonon was taller than most of my mocs(still is taller than everyone but Remon)You did a good job in everything(He doesnot have thin arms).I'm gonna build this guy (for some reason he reminds me of a moc i have seen before)Also who is Clever Crowe

Not bad, I see that you tried to make cutom things, and I think that, the thighs are great and the torso's upper part is good too, but not the best. It's too skinny, you should make him bulkier, and it's too tall. You should reduce his height. And If you have black, three long pins, replace the blue ones with them. The same with the red little parts. I think you are becoming better. 4/5 And to the photography. You should rotate your camera with 90° to make tall photos. I think you can rotate them to put them in standing position (?). If you know, what I mean. Sorry for this long comment, Maybe this one is my longest here on the mocpages :D