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The Clone Wars: A broken trust
As the Clone Wars rage through the galaxy many peaceful worlds are attacked. On the Ocean World of Tera Generals Lucas and Jackson and Harash Soru and Na'z are fighting off General Grevious's Droid Army. On the dock where the Republic set up their FCP Lucas and Jaxson moniter the battle while Na'z and Soru lead the attacks.
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Lucas stood over the holo table watching the tiny blips that represented Republic Forces. Over the comms frequent chatter could be heard. To his left stood his good friend Jackson. They had grown up at the temple together. His right hand man Commander Pod was talking.
Pod: ..the left flank and send a squad of aqua gunships to destroy there fortifactions.

There was a bubbling noise the broke the voice of Pod. A SS-mk5(submersable speeder mark 5) emerged from the water.

An Orange ARC trooper stepped out onto the dock and walked to the holo table.
ARC trooper: Generals my designation is ARC-1515 the call me Rambo though. I'm under General Soru. He requires reincorcments as the battle for the left flank is going poorly.
Lucas: We were just about to dispatch a squad of LAAT/Is.

A figure walks onto the dock. He carries a lightsaber and is dressed in black.
Figure: Greetings Lucas...

Jackson gasps: Master Na'z
Lucas asks in a cold blooded voice: Please explain to me why you are here Master and not with your troops? I thought better of you than this.

Na'z: My troops are dead.
He activates his saber decapitating the head of the clone standing next to him.
Na'z: As you soon shall be

In a mad flurry Pod sprints for his blaster and helmet. General Grevious and a Magna Guard appear from nowhere and enter the fray.


Na'z force pushes Lucas sending him flying and battering Clones and equpiment alike. Rambo dived out of the way.

Grevious broke away from Jackson and charges Pod and Rambo who dive into the water. Lucas stops himself from flying into the water with his sabers.

Grevious continues his charge at Lucas who blocks the furious blows. Jackson blocks a slash from Na'z behind his back and flips over him.

Na'z: GRRRR

Grevious: Soon the Republic will fall!
Lucas: In your wildest dreams!

Na'z charges and Jackson lifts a supply crate

And hurls it into Na'z and Grevious
Lucas: Let's Go!


The Jedi put aqua breathers and dive in the ocean.



Comments

 I like it 
  December 15, 2012
Thanks (and sorry for the late reply) I'd like to be a Jedi.
 I made it 
  November 29, 2012
Quoting Jackson Williams Cool build and to make things clear the character named Jackson is me right?
Correct :) And thanks al forthe comments
 I like it 
  November 29, 2012
Cool build and to make things clear the character named Jackson is me right?
{JOG} Josh  O.
 I like it 
Admiral Varkov
  November 28, 2012
Fantastic story! The build itself and scenery are great as well!
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Neato!
 I made it 
  November 28, 2012
Quoting Michael Kringe If you could add me to your SW series, that would be really awesome! I highly appretiace it!
Do you want a Jedi or a Clone?
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Awesome story!
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Nice one, Josh!
 I made it 
  November 28, 2012
Quoting 'Essence of Randomness Great, that's really good. Are you putting people in?
Only good friends @ the moment but if you continue to follow faithfully you might get in.
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Great, that's really good. Are you putting people in?
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
If you could add me to your SW series, that would be really awesome! I highly appretiace it!
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Another awesome MOC! I like the wavy water!
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Nice work Josh!
 I like it 
  November 28, 2012
Great start Josh!
 
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