Hmm.. well I'll give you some details in the absence of any from Iad'. I must say I would mark similarly, although not quite as harsh. Anyway. You've captured the action, the figs of you and Iadsgb are good and I like the fire and dead troop. However the bridge looks nothing like the one in the series and the photography is a bit blurry in some places. Not too bad though. Iad' has your marks as you've read.