I respect you Dark Crusader for saying what truly needed to be said.You could work on designs and making it a bit more you know practical (armour-wise).Though, overall it is alright.And yes, I have the guts to say it is not 'up to par'.I hope you can take in this critique and respect my very-so honest opinions.
Honestly anyone that thinks this MOC is anything less then perfection is completely wrong. I mean, look at how it looks, the simplicity is striking to say the least. It speaks volumes without using highly complex designs. Everyone should aspire to be like you Bruno. This inspires me, honestly, it does. It is perfection incarnate, vastly superior to the majority of MOCs on this site, rivaled only by your other creations. To say that this MOC is flawless would be an understatement. Its concept is so fantastic, just like its real build. Personally, I feel like you deserve more publicity. This is more then worthy of being put on display in a museum, and I mean that. Keep building, you god in MOCist form you.
How do I put this, it is not necessarily a bad moc, but it is a bit substandard. My only advice is to keep MOCing and trying new building techniques. Also, try studying some of the popular MOCs, you can draw some great inspiration from them(I know I do).
Akara, don't lie to the poor kid. Tabaris is completely right. Unfortunately, none of this is going to end well. Because, unlike other MOCing communties on the Internet, MOCpages is probably the one place where criticism is frowned upon. Nobody here is willing to say a bad MOC is bad.And, if you do have the guts to say it, well then, may the gods have mercy on your soul...
I'm very sorry but I quite honestly think this is a rather bad and uninspired moc. I'm rather sorry if I offended you in any way or if anyone here considers me a mean dude but i'm tired of this and I just want to be honest. Technomaster, please try to improve, both your moccing and your spelling, that is.