Quoting L.A. Miranda
GRANDIOZZO FINALE! My false italian and me are very pleased with this ending, we really like it. I found ver interesting the fact the three newcomers have Inika designs instead of the Metru/Nuva ones... You're doing a great job, mister, but I think you might have some troubles including so many self-MOCs... Like amounts and amounts of questions style:'Can my self-MOC take part?' xD Well, here I'm waiting for next part, dear.
Oh yes, there was already one, but I'm not including any more self-MoCs, it's hard to get the ones I already have into the story :D! Glad you liked it! There will be the character presentation for the second part, soon :)
Quoting Wertman 8
Looking good Vorred. But I thought that the surviving characters would be upgraded into Inika designs, instead of just introducing Inika characters. Still, a great chapter. Also, what happened to the Bohrok/Toa Person? Was there something in the last one I didn't pick up on?
Well, the power of the mask changed Vorred because of reasons we don't know yet, but the others were just revived, not transformed. And Xafri, the Bohrok/Toa, used the mask and gave her life for it, similar how Matoro did. But it will also be explained in the next part!
Quoting Avron warrior of time
do you think avron could be in the next one?
Like I said, no new self-MoCs anymore.
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
Sounds cool! Am I dead? :P
Sure, because the mask revived everyone but you :P
No, you're still alive.
Quoting Ahpolki Ihu
Who's ze guy w/ the yellow Kiril?
Yes, Chro was right. It's Andron, Andrew Mayfield's self-MoC.
