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Lenfald Seashore Outpost
Moc-off with Mark Murphy. Another quick build before I start building for the MocOlympics.
About this creation
A free build for Lenfald. A link to my worthy opponents page, Mark Murphy!

Again, I am sorry for some blurry pictures, I am still figuring lighting out.

C&C Always welcome!

Enjoy!








I am proud to say that my rock work is improving, bit by bit!















A Lenfel archer



The weapons rack, and a blurry picture!



Hello there!



















I tried to add some feel to the water, using different colors as it gets closer the the rock wall. The dark green cheese slopes represent seaweed.



















The outpost without minifigs







The axe bin, and blurry picture.








The Lenfel soldiers.


Thanks for viewing!


Soli Deo Gloria!


-Matthew-



Comments

 I like it 
  July 3, 2013
Personally, i really like this. The rocks are not particularly realistic, but they have a nice style and aesthetic feel to them. I like all the mortar pieces you used, and the water coloration is nice. Excellent work!
 I like it 
  October 11, 2012
On topic: 1/1, new score = 15.5
  October 10, 2012
Creativity: 7/10 Great castle design! Bricks/building techniques: 4/5 There's also some good building techniques on that castle! Visual Elements, brick colors, Photography Skill: 3.5/4 Your camera isn't focusing on some of the important things. Your total score = 14.5. Good work, Matthew!
 I like it 
  October 5, 2012
Creativity: 6/10; This was a very generic build for the castle theme so not much interest to that. Bricks/Building Techniques: 3/5; While Mark's build was original, you had the cleaner MOC. The only problems I'd have with this MOC are the rockwork and the detail on the castle. The rockwork is too unnatural, it has the same pattern of rock layering over and over again. The castle detail is probably because of the brick texture brick; I think you used too much of it. You should've just put one of those somewhere and another one of those in a different spot so that they're not connected together. Just because you have alot of the brick texture brick, doesn't mean you have to use it! Visual elements, brick colors, and photography skills: 4/4; I have to agree with what Halhi said about this part. On topic: 1/1 Total: 14
 I like it 
  October 4, 2012
Creativity: 8/10 The idea of a castle on water is a generic theme, but the weapons were excellent, and the castle has some creative bits. Bricks/Building Techniques: 3/5 - The castle looks excellent, but the water could be better - try not to use round plates here, as you can see the slight gaps between them. Also, try making the rockwork a bit less plain - it seems too bland. Visual Elements, brick colors, photography skills: 4/4 - Excellent photos, a nice clean build, great color scheme. On Topic: 1/1 Total: 16/20
 I like it 
  September 30, 2012
You're welcome.
 I like it 
  September 30, 2012
That's a sweet little build. Personally I like the orderly-looking rocks and I think the symmetry of the brickwork pieces suits this creation. Nice work.
 I like it 
  September 29, 2012
Very well done Matthew!
 I made it 
  September 28, 2012
Quoting micah burgin it is very well done, but I do have these criteques: your rockwork is definatly good, but there is room for inprovment. it is sort of a pattern now, but it should be completely spontanious. as in, the caltle needs to be on platforms in some places. also, the castle is a succesfull design, but it is simple. A curve, a ledge, something.... Also, your use of the texture pieces is very nice, but they need to be randomly spread amongst normal bricks to get the right feel. Also, I belive that this is near the ocean, or in a bay, so there should be waves. a cheese serves very well for waves in a bay-harbor. ( I live near one so I know what the waves look like.) also, the axe buket, I feel, is in the wrong place. it should be on top, where it is seen and used the most. After all, why go downstairs to get something to throw at your attackers, when you could have the bucket O' axes right by you? (note. this criteque is chok-full-O' constructive criticism. it is not rude. just helpfull.)
Thanks for the suggestions Micah!
 I like it 
  September 28, 2012
it is very well done, but I do have these criteques: your rockwork is definatly good, but there is room for inprovment. it is sort of a pattern now, but it should be completely spontanious. as in, the caltle needs to be on platforms in some places. also, the castle is a succesfull design, but it is simple. A curve, a ledge, something.... Also, your use of the texture pieces is very nice, but they need to be randomly spread amongst normal bricks to get the right feel. Also, I belive that this is near the ocean, or in a bay, so there should be waves. a cheese serves very well for waves in a bay-harbor. ( I live near one so I know what the waves look like.) also, the axe buket, I feel, is in the wrong place. it should be on top, where it is seen and used the most. After all, why go downstairs to get something to throw at your attackers, when you could have the bucket O' axes right by you? (note. this criteque is chok-full-O' constructive criticism. it is not rude. just helpfull.)
 I like it 
  September 15, 2012
This build is very good, the rockwork is superb, and so are the minifigures! Another great MOC from you!
 I like it 
  September 13, 2012
Great job.
 I like it 
  September 13, 2012
Nice Cliff!
 I like it 
  September 13, 2012
Man this build is awesome the rock work is great
 I like it 
  September 12, 2012
Nice work, I especially like the tower. While the rockwork is great at the top, I feel that the middle and bottom could use a bit of work. Try mixing the three-high 1x2 slopes with one-high 1x2 slopes and other types of slopes to make it less even. (At least, that's how I like rockwork.) Still, very good job!
 I made it 
  September 12, 2012
Thank you everyone, it means a lot! :D
 I like it 
  September 12, 2012
NIce job!
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Rock work looks pretty cool, but I think it needs a bit more randomness. (Makes it look more like natural rocks)
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Wonderful vig and good luck in the moc-off! BTW, love the rock work! This is definitely one of your best yet!
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Great work!
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Wonderful cliff!
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Great job Matthew! :)
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Again, the rocks look wonderful
 I like it 
  September 11, 2012
Very pretty and simple MOC! great job man ;)
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
Awesome work!
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
Neat tower outpost, Matthew! Good luck with the MOC-Off:)
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
Nice! Your building skills are improving! How about you build a castle MOC by a cliff with a waterfall?
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
That's awesome! I love your brick technique!
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
rockwork is great, cool castle, but too many pics, and the water is way too simple.
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
this is amazing .
 I like it 
  September 10, 2012
And he does it again! This is even better than the other two. Well done...again!
 
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