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The Great Force War, Mission 17a: Secrets
"Log 17 - Jedi Order" -- Our spies tell us that the Sith have discovered a Star Map on Kuat, and believe that it may contain the co-ordinates of Mortis. We can only hope that this is true, as a being has recently fallen into the pool of knowledge. This being has been running wild, destroying everything in its path. If this is true, the Sith may hold the only key to stopping this poor creature, as they can only be killed by the Dagger of Mortis, a mysterious artifact on the lost planet Mortis. We must not let this being continue its rampage, we MUST beat the Sith to Mortis. -- "End Log"
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Log of Jedi Padawan Callum Leroc:
" The Sith have discovered a Star Map on Kuat, and believe that it may contain the co-ordinates of Mortis. I have been selected to be part of the Jedi Strike team to infilrate the Kuat Drive Yards compound, where the Star Map is held and collect the map data. My role is to to allow my masters to get into the compound without being followed by the Sith. Basically, be a distraction."



Callum Leroc duelling with a Sith Lord and beheading his Apprentice



The Sith Lord fighting with Callum Leroc



The Other Jedi heading into the compound to continue the mission



Another Sith coming to stop the Jedi




The Whole Battlefield



Comments

Elite Brigadier Callum (Darth Jovan)
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John Smith
  September 2, 2012
Nice MOC Callum, I really like how you showed the facility as well as the moors alike chain. You can make it as big as you like but I think Harry meant that since half the facility was used for figs and speeders you didn't need the other half... So you may not of needed it that big, same with the outside.
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  September 2, 2012
Quoting John Smith Nice MOC Callum, I really like how you showed the facility as well as the moors alike chain. You can make it as big as you like but I think Harry meant that since half the facility was used for figs and speeders you didn't need the other half... So you may not of needed it that big, same with the outside.
Ok, that's because I as meant to go to the Lego shop on Friday to get stuff for that area but the trip was reset to today, so i just put that. I still went to the Lego Shop (Great Place)!!
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  September 2, 2012
Excellent job, Callum! This is a great entry, although I have to agree with Harry. This moc is extremely big! If you could have trimmed it down a bit, taking off all of that extra space on the outside and inside, making it a VERY detailed smaller moc. Now I know that sometimes you can't trim down because of a base plate, but remember that you don't need to use a base plate unless you need it. Anyways, I love all of the figs! Creating a minifig that is easy on the eyes is not an easy task, but you managed to create a superb line of Jedi AND Sith! I do suggest next time that you don't mix yellow and skin colored heads next time, though, because it throws everything off balance, but other than that, great job! You got an 8/10!
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  September 2, 2012
No I'm not saying you've gone over the size limit. What I mean is larger MOCs tend to either look really over crowded or lacking in detail. For this MOC and the details you have used it just feels as though it would have looked a little better if it was a bit smaller
 I made it 
  September 2, 2012
You said that there is no size limit
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  September 2, 2012
Very nice Callum. My only problem is is that its a little too big I think. FOr a MOC this size it could have done with a bit more detail but overall I really liked it. 7/10
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  September 2, 2012
Nice work Callum, shame I couldn't get one in for this mission. Now I'm off to judge your FIS/URS moc.
 
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