Here is the second version of my self-moc. I used the critique from my previous version to make this.
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I might be able to start on the poster today. I just need to be able to use the other computer because this one can't run what I use. I've figured out what I'm doing for the background, now I just need to find out what is the best font to use. |
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Btw, I can make it as a poster for you! What kind of general background would you like? I also have several kinds of awesome fonts for the name! [Matoran alphabet, Voya Nui, {Unreal Tournament- lots of epic spikes}, and infected. However those are only a few of the many kinds that I have! I'm going to make a complete example of each one today!]
Here is an example of my work - http://mocpages.com/moc.php/338807 Although it wasn't my best because the original picture quality was quite sucky so I had to do a ton of stuff just to make it be of good quality. |
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August 30, 2012 |
MOST IMPRESSIVE- VADER
But seriously, this is pretty awesome! I like the way you armored him especially! |
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August 29, 2012 |
Quoting Chronos Omega
Looks cool! I really like the use of the Vahki pieces on the legs. Those secret links just lead back to this same page, and to be honest, one of them really isn't all that hidden. :P
One of them does work. Two of them aren't supposed to do anything, and the obvious one is supposed to bring you to the beginning of the page again. If this is to annoying, let me know. Thanks for the comment. |
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August 29, 2012 |
Looks cool! I really like the use of the Vahki pieces on the legs. Those secret links just lead back to this same page, and to be honest, one of them really isn't all that hidden. :P |
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August 28, 2012 |
Awesome! |
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August 28, 2012 |
Looks like a really good self moc! |
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August 28, 2012 |
Pretty sweet! I like the new, refreshing designs in this. Great work! |
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August 28, 2012 |
Wow, this is quite a cool moc! :D Only thing I might think of doing would be beefing up the legs a tad and possibly shaping the the lower body so it widens as towards the whole chest. It looks like a somewhat thin lower body and a really buff upper body, so widening the lower body a tad might help. But still, this is fantastic! Keep it up, Alan! :D |
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August 28, 2012 |
Much better than the first one! Keep up the good work! |
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August 28, 2012 |
Much better than the first one! Keep up the good work! |
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August 28, 2012 |
Wow this is awesome I like the turbine thing on his back. |
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August 28, 2012 |
He's a really great self-MoC, and I like the part usages he has, like that rotor-piece on his back and the Vahki "eye/head"-pieces on his legs! I also like your small idea of the Toa of Phonics :D |
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August 28, 2012 |
Two words - epic moc :) |
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August 28, 2012 |
Nice. |
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August 27, 2012 |
The lower legs could use some filling up. Love the torso and the trans blue! Great job! |
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August 27, 2012 |
I wish I had some type of bio building skills. This is really cool. By the way, nice fire bird thingy. |
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August 27, 2012 |
Genius part usage! I love those blue streaks. Excellent work, keep it up! ;) |
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August 27, 2012 |
Quoting Bob the inconceivably invincible
Wow, that is excellent! I suggest you use a white backdrop for photographing, but I can see nothing to fix in the MOC.
Thanks. I tried the white backdrop first, but the silver on him made it hard to edit. |
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August 27, 2012 |
Wow, that is excellent! I suggest you use a white backdrop for photographing, but I can see nothing to fix in the MOC. |
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August 27, 2012 |
Wow I have to say this moc is really cool! I really love what you did to the chest design and the color scheme looks great! Now I'm not sure about the back wheel, but still is very impressive! |
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August 27, 2012 |
Wow. That's perfect. I love the way this looks, so much better than the first. Well done Alan. Good luck with school, I know it's a pain. |
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August 27, 2012 |
He looks pretty cool but the I think the feet has to be a bit bigger. |
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