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Makuta Talonmagic, The Nightmare

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My entry to the alternate self MOC contest, category dark toa/makuta. This MOC was reposted to due spamming Enjoy!

About this creation

*NOTE: This is just an alternate version of Talon, not my actual Self-MOC*
Name: Talonmagic
Gender: Male
Species: Le-matoran (formerly), makuta
Element: Air, shadow
Title(s): Talonmagic, Talon, Monster, Makuta, leader
Mask: Kanohi Ulahi (mutated), mask of mind manipulation: allows user to control, read, or place thoughts in another mind
Weapon(s): Spear, claws
Story: In an alternate universe, Talonmagic applied for an experiment in which a toa could gain control over shadow using the venom found in shadow leeches, but in small doses. Unfortunately, the experiment went horribly wrong. Talonmagic was turned into a bloodthirsty monster, that demolished an entire toa outpost in less than an hour. After destroying the outpost, Talon realized what he had done, and exiled himself in the
deserts of spherus magna. When the new brotherhood of makuta got word of this, they quickly found Talon, captured him, and offered him membership in the new brotherhood. Feeling hopeless and depressed, Talon accepted. The makuta then began experimenting on him, finding out how a perfectly loyal toa turned into a cruel monster. They found that it was the venom in the shadow leeches that did it, in which they began preforming the procedure on other toa prisoners. The results were the same, and eventually they had enough to create a team, Talon being the leader. The makuta put them through training to control when and how they used their "blood-lust rage", in which no toa or matoran could hope to survive. After the training, the team was formally named "The Makuta Hraxus". They began laying waste to Spherus Magna, and now the Toa order must quickly find a way to stop this monstrous group from destroying the entire planet..

See yah!

As you can see, this MOC was spammed and had to be reposted. The Spammer has indeed been reported to Sean and is being dealt with.

Well, that was fun. My MOCing block has been rather vicious lately, allowing no new ideas to flow from my small collection of peices. Luckely, I was able to come up with a new torso design, which led to this. Credit goes to Legofreak2444 for the spider-leg-wings. I think I did rather good on this, and I hope you guys like him! C&C Appreciated! Till next time my frineds

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that crazy kansan taylor snowden

December 11, 2012

As always talonmagic looks great. Also would you mind looking at my sm he was recently compared to yours and I want to know what you think. I DID NOT INTEND TO USE THE SAME MASK.

I like it

sniperray213 Ultimate Sniper

August 22, 2012

THIS IS AWESOME :D

I like it

Bob the inconceivably invincible

August 19, 2012

Great work!

I like it

The Texan Bionicle Builder

August 18, 2012

Great work! Love the colors!

I like it

Lego Obsessionist

August 16, 2012

Nice PU on the torso! It looks great!

I like it

Toa Jaton

August 16, 2012

Nice,again.As I said before,excelent job 10/10

I like it

Wertman 8

August 16, 2012

Awesome! I like this MOC, (Insert thing i wrote on the spammed Version) blah blah wings blah blah spear, anyway, I'm sorry you got spammed...

I like it

Legofreak2444 ~

August 15, 2012

Very nice, again. ;) Shame it got spammed, but as Chro, said the Mods could probably have delete with the spam.

I like it

Chronos Omega

August 15, 2012

Well, that's too bad. Nice to see this again though. Next time, maybe just report it in the MOCpages Help Group spam thread, so that the mods can remove all the spammed likes and comments.