Captain Chopper: Hey, Griffin,
Captain Chopper: You've been acting suspicious lately, can you tell us why?
Griffin: I shouldn't...
Caleb: Just tell us.
Griffin takes out something from inside his pocket, it was the coordinates to Earth.
Ben: Is that-
Griffin: Yes Ben, it is.
Captain Chopper: The coordinates to...here.
Griffin: Yes, now here's how it all happened:
Griffin: I was a Spartan in the UNSC, I had armor just like Skullface's. I had two other Spartans with me. My mission was to deliver "The Package" to another Spartan. We were being chased on the beaches of Reach, by the Covenant.
Griffin: We held up against anything, from Grunts to Elites.
Griffin: But one of my men was killed by an Elite. We defeated it, and I delivered "The Package" to the Spartan. He got on the ship, and we were about to be escorted back to our base.
Griffin: But a Corvette destroyed the ship that had the Coordinates to Earth, and the Covenant claimed it. My other Spartan was killed, me injured. The person who salvaged me, was Skullface, the other Spartan. He said that the ship was destroyed, and he escaped with the coordinates. But the Covenant managed to capture us, get the coordinates, and eventually set us free.
Griffin: We both had gone rogue, especially sense we never got back to base. We both headed back to Earth, knowing what was coming. We were warning everyone. And we warned you guys, and we became the team, The Resistance.
Caleb: That's how they figured out where Earth was?
Caleb: Strange, the coordinates in just one little bottle.
Suddenly, Chopper was attacked by an alien.
Captain Chopper gasped for air.
Griffin: Quickly, Ben, Caleb, kill that thing while I check Chopper's pulse!
Caleb: We're on it sir!
Ben and Caleb finally killed it, and asked Griffin if Chopper was okay.
Griffin: He'll make it, we just need a medic, Ben, call one.
Suddenly, the brigade burst with an explosion.
Slash: Get down!
Griffin: Chain, Caleb, and Bruce, get the scientists! They probably have more weapons ready!
Chain: Sir, the scientists were left at the facility.
Griffin: What?! Who's responsible?
Bruce Thompson: Sir, we all forgot about the scientists!
Griffin: Okay, you 3 are gonna have to recover them while we fend off the aliens. Remember, the Covenant have probably already made it to The Facility, so be careful and stealthy.
Meanwhile, at The Facility.
Bruce Thompson: What's the plan?
Caleb: I don't know.
Alright, the choices are for Mister Mysterious, Caleb Anju, and Commander Chain.
A: Assassinate the Elite using Active Camouflage
B: Assassinate the Grunts using Active Camouflage
C: Full on charge at all of them
D: Wait until they're gone. (Not recommended)
Zor, don't worry your guy will be just fine. I only injured you because first, all the pics were taken and I was planning for you to die because you didn't comment for a while. By the way sorry for the short episode guys. Hopefully the next will be longer.
The usual and more. I don't even remember the characters names, but at one point 2 people are trying to get an answer out of another. The dialogue was just basically "Hey tell whats up" "I shouldn't" "You should" "well Okay"... I would think someone who had something heavy on his mind would take a little more convincing. In addition, why was Griffin carrying coordinates to earth? Wouldn't that something every starship would need to know? Kind of like how everyone knows the general location of california, and if need be, could figure out a way to get there. sure, the aliens might not know, but all of the humans should, making a secret mission to carry coordinates to get to earth sort of obsolete? Just pointing that out.
Otherwise, you're improving.