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the great force war mission 11 factory

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I am a padawan. the first photo shows my main sig fig. He is Krili. He defected from the sith because he couldn't take their cruelty. By the way he is the one holding the red lightsaber. He likes the design of his lightsaber. Not because he's evil. the other pictures are my MOC. A different view of my MOC. and reactors that were all my design. Hope its not too late to enter. also,I entered previously...It wold be great if you wouldn't count that on and count this one instead...then again I just joined so I guess mistakes will be a long the road. Once again I am a padawan.

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zebra ankle

July 15, 2012

Quoting Fell Skyhawk Great build, but you shouldn't have all your text in the introduction, some of it should be in the description. The walls should be going same direction in relation to the room, not the camera. Overall, a solid good build.

Thanks man! Now I know what to do better!

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Fell Skyhawk

July 15, 2012

Great build, but you shouldn't have all your text in the introduction, some of it should be in the description. The walls should be going same direction in relation to the room, not the camera. Overall, a solid good build.

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zebra ankle

July 15, 2012

Quoting Harry 863 Pretty good first attempt. Try adding the description under each photo next time you add a MOC. Also break it up into paragraphs so that it looks nicer to read. The build is pretty good though :) 5/10

Thanks for the tips! I will enjoy making my next creation with those guide lines. Since I amnew to your group,I thought that my creation would look bad. Thanks for calling my first attempt "pretty good"! You really made my day! thanks a million! =) sincrerely zebraankle. P.S.since I am new to MOC pages,how do I put a description under each photo and how do I seperate the main description into paragraphs?

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Harry 863

July 15, 2012

Pretty good first attempt. Try adding the description under each photo next time you add a MOC. Also break it up into paragraphs so that it looks nicer to read. The build is pretty good though :) 5/10

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