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Potu's, my selfMOC's story (Part 1)

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In an alternate bionicle universe...

About this creation

Hello, I am Potu. I want to tell you my story.

It started a few days after Makuta has fallen. I was walking alone, I wanted to discover Spherus Magna. I was on a desert area, when a colorful, strange circle appeared opposite me, on the ground. A few moments later most of the colors has disappeared, just the cyclamen, purple, and a crystalline white remained. Then an arm with a weapon reached out from the circle. I saw this weapon somewhere. Then the owner of the hand has appeared. I dropped my hammer and I had to shout:
- Pohatu!

- We have no time for talking, a murderer is in your world. In our world he killed most of the toa, take this stone! Take it! ā�� I toke it. ā�� At any moment can disappear the dimension gate, Brutaka...
In an unexpected moment, the gate has closed, and Pohatuā��s upper body left behind our world.
- Show the stone to O...O... Onewa. - he said with a lot of groaming. His heartlight started to flick, and a few moments later, Pohatu died.
- You mustn't die, you mustn't - I was crying, but I knew, His, my hero's heartlight wasn't lighting.
I toke his Kakama Nuva, and I started to run to Onewa Turaga and show him the stone. The stone was lightning.

- Onewa Turaga! Onewa Turaga!
- What? Whatā��s the problem, Potu?
- I need to tell you a story.
After I told my story, Onewa Turagaā��s eyes were open wide. He could not say nothing. I showed him Pohatu's mask.
- And he give me a stone, and he said, I must show to you. - And I toke out the object from my haversack.
- But, this is aā�¦ Toa stone!
Then the stone started to light more stronger, and I felt, I am transforming to a Toa. But suddenly the light has gone, a strange creature has stolen the stone from my hands, and I stopped in the transforming. I became a half matoran, half toa. I am not too tall, not too strong. But my hammer began bigger...

The little monster started to run, and I followed him. But not for a long time. The creature entrenched itself into the sand.

Sorry for possible spelling mistakes.

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Kondoki of Le-Koro

July 22, 2012

You are a good writer and great builder. I enjoyed reading the story and looking at your MOCs.

I like it

Alan C

July 21, 2012

Great self-moc. I like the idea of a half-toa and that hammer.

I like it

The Texan Bionicle Builder

July 16, 2012

Dude, awesome! Im not so sure about the name and the arms, he could use some more armor later, Great job on him!

I made it

Potu, the half Toa

July 16, 2012

Quoting Strakk The Glatorian Dude you make awesome mocs but you need to get your story straight...are you Matau, Midak, or Potu?

I think, this is my definitive character :)

I like it

Vorred 03

July 16, 2012

So this is your real self-MoC now? Cool! I liked the story and the idea that he only turned into a half-toa! The whole structure of him reminds me of Pohatu Mata himself, but Potu looks much more cooler! Great work!