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Potu's, my selfMOC's story (Part 1)
In an alternate bionicle universe...
About this creation
Hello, I am Potu. I want to tell you my story.

It started a few days after Makuta has fallen. I was walking alone, I wanted to discover Spherus Magna. I was on a desert area, when a colorful, strange circle appeared opposite me, on the ground. A few moments later most of the colors has disappeared, just the cyclamen, purple, and a crystalline white remained. Then an arm with a weapon reached out from the circle. I saw this weapon somewhere. Then the owner of the hand has appeared. I dropped my hammer and I had to shout:
- Pohatu!

- We have no time for talking, a murderer is in your world. In our world he killed most of the toa, take this stone! Take it! ‚�� I toke it. ‚�� At any moment can disappear the dimension gate, Brutaka...
In an unexpected moment, the gate has closed, and Pohatu‚��s upper body left behind our world.
- Show the stone to O...O... Onewa. - he said with a lot of groaming. His heartlight started to flick, and a few moments later, Pohatu died.
- You mustn't die, you mustn't - I was crying, but I knew, His, my hero's heartlight wasn't lighting.
I toke his Kakama Nuva, and I started to run to Onewa Turaga and show him the stone. The stone was lightning.


- Onewa Turaga! Onewa Turaga!
- What? What‚��s the problem, Potu?
- I need to tell you a story.
After I told my story, Onewa Turaga‚��s eyes were open wide. He could not say nothing. I showed him Pohatu's mask.
- And he give me a stone, and he said, I must show to you. - And I toke out the object from my haversack.
- But, this is a‚�¶ Toa stone!
Then the stone started to light more stronger, and I felt, I am transforming to a Toa. But suddenly the light has gone, a strange creature has stolen the stone from my hands, and I stopped in the transforming. I became a half matoran, half toa. I am not too tall, not too strong. But my hammer began bigger...

The little monster started to run, and I followed him. But not for a long time. The creature entrenched itself into the sand.

Sorry for possible spelling mistakes.




















Comments

  July 22, 2012
You are a good writer and great builder. I enjoyed reading the story and looking at your MOCs.
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  July 21, 2012
Great self-moc. I like the idea of a half-toa and that hammer.
Potu,  the half Toa
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  July 16, 2012
Dude, awesome! Im not so sure about the name and the arms, he could use some more armor later, Great job on him!
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  July 16, 2012
Quoting Strakk The Glatorian Dude you make awesome mocs but you need to get your story straight...are you Matau, Midak, or Potu?
I think, this is my definitive character :)
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  July 16, 2012
So this is your real self-MoC now? Cool! I liked the story and the idea that he only turned into a half-toa! The whole structure of him reminds me of Pohatu Mata himself, but Potu looks much more cooler! Great work!
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  July 16, 2012
Dude you make awesome mocs but you need to get your story straight...are you Matau, Midak, or Potu?
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  July 15, 2012
Nice!
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  July 15, 2012
Small yet cool!
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  July 15, 2012
very nice! both are awesome, but the arms on the Half-Toa could use something
 
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