Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
Interesting, but kinda disjointed. I didn't get anything out of this chapter. I think you could have made it longer and put more information in it. Anyway, can't wait to see what'll happen next!
Well if I skipped to the next chapter, it would've been confuesing, so I had to put this chapter in(I suppose I could have made it more interesting). =)