Hello peeps, I'm being Overactive again with Another MOC! This time it's a revamp, of Cilla, the Toa of Water. This one also features a complete Bio, which I have not had yet for this MOC! Enjoy!
About this creation
Tools: Water spear, Kanohi Faxon; mask of kindred
Personality: Cilla, In truth, was never ment for battle. She is polite and considerate, but she is inexperienced.
History: As a Matoran, Cilla could rely on her family to bring in things like food or money. However, her family was killed in a BoM Enforcer invasion, and Cilla was forced to fend for herself.
One day, whilst going about her daily rutine, she met a slim and tall Makuta. She could tell the Makuta was not like the others, for the Makuta said she was being hunted by a Dark Hunter sent to kill her. Cilla let the Makuta hide in her hut as the Hunter searched Ga Racta. The Makuta was thankful. She said her name was Rugaki. She gave Cilla a "Present", and then left.
The "Present", which was infact a Toa Stone, Transformed Cilla into a Toa. Cilla later searched for Rugaki and found her. Rugaki offered to train Cilla, and she accepted. During her time with Rugaki, She had met another renagade Makuta named "Light Aroxion". At one point, after delivering a message to Raxonax, Cilla ran into a Dark Hunter, named Sobek, who tried to kill her. Ironically, Cilla never found out this was the Hunter that tried to Kill Rugaki, and Sobek didn't know that Cilla was the Matoran who hid Rugaki from him.
About half a year after these events, Cilla found a Toa named Montu, imprisioned by the Makuta. Cilla perswaded Rugaki to go into the fortress and rescue Montu, and invite him to join her group. Shortly, Cilla began to fall in love with Montu. Around this time, Montu was infected by an alien Parisite, and he was transformed into a hideous Monster. It was Cilla who ran to the beast and told the real Montu to fight the Monster. After Montu was cured, Cilla confessed her feelings, and the four have been together ever since, as a "Family".
(Sorry for corny ending, but whatever :P)
An overview. The first ever virson of Toa Cilla (Not including the Matoran Version I made before I even had MOCpages) had white on her, so i thought I'd re-introduce that colour scheme :D
Legs. Same as before, but with different thighs and no white.
Body Design. No longer rotateable. I like the design I've made, but I think the frame is too wide. Is this design ok? leave your opinion in the comments section ;)
Left arm. Sorry for the blurry pic :P
Right Arm with spear.
Face. Like da horns?
Cilla and Montu, Back to back.
Fighting with "Light Aroxion".
That's All from this MOC folks. Shall I show you my next post?
BTW, It's Not a Visorak :P
Quoting Nik Brusk
Awesome moc! is this a version of my older bro toa electroid's moc? cuz his is the same name, same element, and same mask.
Thank you, but I'm afraid the fact that my and Electroid's MOC are similar is pure coincidence... This was a MOC that I had came up with before I came to MOCpages, but it's not suprising that the MOCs are very similar. The mask and element are typical for these kind of MOCs, but the name I guess is freaky coincidence. I will check out Electroid's MOC though, for curiosity. Thanks for the comment, Nik :)
Ok, the reason why the waist is like that is because I used up all the pinholes with armour on the back and connecting the vahki piece and the rest of the body. I'll try to fix the legs and the feet are just metru ones, not custom. But thanks for commenting and the cc! :)
Sorry that I don't give you a "like", but there are many things on this creation that need improvement in my opinion. The upper custom body is good this way, but the waist... it's so very thin that it don't need much power to break her! The upper legs are also very thin, try to put some armor here and make her hips wider. Maybe even take the bulk from the lower legs away. The custom feet are nice, however. I hope that I could help!
Quoting Marko Petrusic
Really good MOC, I like the color scheme, reminds me of Hahli Inika. The only thing I don't like is the shoulders, too bulky for a female MOC, and you should shorten the neck just a bit :)