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Finale for Interactive Illustrations part 1
Note, I did NOT use the uploader, I figured out a way to do it without it!
About this creation
Pic 1

"Ummm, dude, there are TWO of you!" you say

picture 2

"Captain obvious strikes again!" says the fake John McCarter

Pic 3

The real one suddenly charges the real one.

Picture 4

"oof!"

Picture 5

"Ah!" you shout, not sure what to do.

Picture 6

They are both tackled to the ground.

Picture 7

The fake one pushes the other off of him, knocking the wind out of him.

Picture 8

He takes the time to tackle you.


Picture 9

He punches you in the face, knocking you out.

Picture 10

Meanwhile...

picture 11

The S.W.A.T leader is tackled to the ground by the real thief.


Picture 12

He manages to turn around.

Picture 13

He shoves the other man to the ground.

Picture 14

He goes for the gun...

Picture 15

The other man pulls the leader back and goes for the gun,

Picture 16

He picks it up...

Picture 17

And turns around, but the leader manages to dodge the bullet by grabbing the gun.

Picture 18

The man is temporarily winded.

Picture 19

The leader spins around, gaining momentum.

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And knocks the man out the door.

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He dives to the floor, knowing what is going to happen.

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The man gets to his feet.

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But not for long. The sniper shoots him straight in the forehead.



Meanwhile

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When you come to, one of the John McCarters is pointing a gun at the other. You are not sure which is which.

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The man pulls the trigger.

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You scream, greatly surprised.

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"Don't worry, it's me, the real one!" he says.

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But you feel no better.

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The man leaves the room. He had defeated and old enemy. The question was, who was dead, the robber or McCarter?


A few hours later.

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"An here we are, with the man who lead the operation on the bank!" A reporter says. "So what happened in there?"

"I am not aloud to say much at the time, but we do know 4 people died, 14 hostages were rescued, and everything appears to be safe. That's all I can say."

"Thank you very much, sir!"



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And that's all for News 4!









So, that's the end of I.I part 1!


I know, tons of unanswered questions, and I MIGHT continue it in part two, but we'll see!

It wouldn't be until at LEAST August.


Please rate and comment if you want to see part 2!



Comments

  September 2, 2012
None of the pics show up either.
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  June 23, 2012
How did I miss this? You must have posted this on a day I wasn't around. Anyway, great job! And thanks for using my comment! :)
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  June 19, 2012
Sweet! I think you should definetly continue the series though.
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  June 18, 2012
love the series you should definitly continue
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  June 18, 2012
love the series you should definitly continue
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  June 18, 2012
Nice job! Very clever!
Caleb R.
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Griffin .
  June 17, 2012
Nice job! I was focusing on the real John MCarter's face, and it was a little ripped on the neck. Then when the guy woke up, the real one was shot by the fake. Is this true? :)
Caleb R.
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Armageddon XD
  June 17, 2012
im studying media in english so im guessing that he is the fake one and there is more to that story then you have added... anyway good seires and cant wait for next series :)
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  June 17, 2012
Quoting Devin Crist Cool how did you upload the pics
I used HTML
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  June 17, 2012
Cool how did you upload the pics
  June 17, 2012
Very exciting. You're a great writer, I read chapters 1-3 of "sector 247"
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  June 17, 2012
Quoting The Timinater ! I guessed that the fake shoots the real guy... IMO. I would like to see some MOCs, rather then stories from you.
I have been doing a lot of MOCs recently, actually. I have a town hall building coming up soon =D
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  June 17, 2012
Quoting Griffin . Nice job! I was focusing on the real John MCarter's face, and it was a little ripped on the neck. Then when the guy woke up, the real one was shot by the fake. Is this true? :)
I haven't decided who shot who yet =D
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  June 17, 2012
Nice! A part two wouldn't be entirely nesassary but would be nice
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  June 17, 2012
I guessed that the fake shoots the real guy... IMO. I would like to see some MOCs, rather then stories from you.
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  June 17, 2012
nice story! how did you get the pics on? Cut and paste??
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  June 17, 2012
Great ending! (lots of suspense left) Did you get the pics up using HTML code?
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  June 17, 2012
Part 2! I love it!
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  June 17, 2012
Loved it!
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  June 17, 2012
E-p-i-c
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  June 17, 2012
Interesting ending, not exactly what I expected.
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  June 17, 2012
Nice!
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  June 17, 2012
nice though allowed is spelled like this
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  June 16, 2012
Quoting Mr Viking Great finale! Why so short?
Got tons of stuff coming up. It might continue. We'll see
  June 16, 2012
Very nice!
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  June 16, 2012
Great finale! Why so short?
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  June 16, 2012
Some deadly action here, Dude!
 
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