This is my favourite MOC I have built to date, also the biggest interior as well.
About this creation
I also made a short story to go with it.
Please enjoy!
The crowd was ready. This was the moment of truth. Would the strange man show the world that it was true?
Surprisingly, the small building was not filled, the event was kept quiet, discreet.
The stage was still empty, waiting for the man.
The crowd grew anxious.
The man was late.
Finally, he began to walk to the stage.
He looked out to the crowd for a brief instance before he started his speach.
He cleared his throat and began.
"There has been talk. Talk that-" He stopped and clenched his jaws and sucking in breath.
"Talk that there are humans with... abilities. Superhuman, almost."
"Well, it's true."
He waited for the crowd to quiet down before he continued.
"They are among us, hiding. Some may even be in this room. In fact there is at least one."
"But they are out there, beware, they are very powerful."
"The government has chosen to take action."
"We will make an attempt to contain them."
"To keep them from harming the world."
"They will fight back."
"The safety of this nation will come at a price. But a price we are will to pay."
"Do it," the man nodded.
The man pulled the trigger
I once heard a saying "Make your listeners long for more, instead of giving them too much".
That's what I tried here. I also wanted to try my hand at a short story
And now, for some pictures of it.
Without the people
It's hard to make them line up with no studs!
Birdseye
I really like how the balcony turned out! It gives it and "old theater" look
No chairs.
The stage was pretty basic.
I like the floor =D
It worked out very well, and I have LOT'S of tiles left over.
The balcony is stud-less too
PLEASE rate and comment, I really want this to get big =D
If you have any criticism, go ahead!
Go bless you!
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February 2, 2013 |
Wow, that is amazing work! It really does give the "old theater" feel with how you designed it. Of course, the first few pictures made me think of "The Boondock Saints" with the final courtroom scene. Yep, your creation is that epic, and I do not care if anyone else states otherwise! Great tile work, too. That helps bring it all together. |
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September 24, 2012 |
Cool story and great first pic! Though I would add a little more oompf to the room. |
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September 19, 2012 |
Great build great story, well done keep up the good work |
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September 3, 2012 |
This reminded me of Heroes, is it meant to? |
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August 18, 2012 |
Nice! Love the scale of this (plenty of breathing room for the figs). Very clean, with a terrific design in the floor tiling. Well done! |
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August 18, 2012 |
Great work! |
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June 12, 2012 |
Aesome you never ever failed in you Mocs! |
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June 12, 2012 |
Quoting Ben Indy
This is Island Locked?
It's not =/ |
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June 11, 2012 |
This is Island Locked? |
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I made it |
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June 8, 2012 |
Quoting Netro .
This is great! I wish I had that much tile. :P
Got it from pick-a-brick =D |
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June 8, 2012 |
This is great! I wish I had that much tile. :P |
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June 7, 2012 |
Quoting E. B.
Hey dude, did you email me yet? Just wondering! Awesome work BTW!
Oh, sorry man! I didn't realized you'd given it to me |
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Hey dude, did you email me yet? Just wondering! Awesome work BTW! |
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June 7, 2012 |
Thanks guys! |
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June 7, 2012 |
Quoting Space Gypsy .
I got your message. You need not worry. I am not against you. I am merely questioning everybody. That is the way to find the Mafia. Don't take it personally.
Thanks =D |
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June 7, 2012 |
Quoting Michael Kringe
Very nice story and great mosaic on the floor! Are you going to make a 2nd episode?
Nah, It was a short story =P |
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June 7, 2012 |
great story and cliffhanger |
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June 7, 2012 |
Cool I like The cliff hanger |
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June 7, 2012 |
I got your message. You need not worry. I am not against you. I am merely questioning everybody. That is the way to find the Mafia. Don't take it personally. |
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June 7, 2012 |
Very nice story and great mosaic on the floor! Are you going to make a 2nd episode? |
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Chris Melby June 6, 2012 |
really cool! |
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The Prime Brick-ester June 6, 2012 |
Great S.N.O.T. work! |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting michael ganzert
wow that is amazing!!!!! it also reminds me of x men first class
I actually haven't seen it! |
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June 6, 2012 |
wow that is amazing!!!!! it also reminds me of x men first class |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting David May
nice love the story it reminds me of x men
Which one? |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting Ian Spacek
Intense! My favorite part of the build is the tiled floor pattern. Very cool!
Mine too =D |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting Griffin .
Nice, huge diorama and story! Very well detailed!
BTW, I like the floor too. =D
Thanks, it's my favorite part too =D |
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June 6, 2012 |
Thanks guys! |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting Mr Viking
This was very nicely done, I like the floor.
Thanks, that seems to be everyone's favorite |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quite a build here, Dude! |
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June 6, 2012 |
Nice, huge diorama and story! Very well detailed!
BTW, I like the floor too. =D |
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June 6, 2012 |
Intense! My favorite part of the build is the tiled floor pattern. Very cool! |
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June 6, 2012 |
That is really cool caleb |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting The Prime Brick-ester
Great S.N.O.T. work!
There's not any S.N.O.T work in it... =P |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting Me, MY self and I .
i am w/ david may in the fact that it reminds me of X-men. Veryintresting build and story. why did the man on stage want to be shot?maybe i just looked at wrong, buts that how i read it...
No no, he doesn't want shot, the guy wants to shoot him to keep him quiet |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting Blake Spangler
Awesome!!! when he was talking about the people being superhuman, is that in any way connected to your Island locked II?
I considered it, but I really don't have the time to continue Island Locked II |
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June 6, 2012 |
Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
Nicely done, the MOC's very cool! I also liked the write-up, at first I thought it was about the Avengers. You might want to change the title though, it's "Speech" not "Speach". ;)
Thanks ;) |
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June 6, 2012 |
This was very nicely done, I like the floor. |
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June 6, 2012 |
Very nice! Love the balcony and the stage! |
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June 6, 2012 |
Very nice! Love the balcony and the stage! |
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June 6, 2012 |
I really liked the floor. |
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June 6, 2012 |
i am w/ david may in the fact that it reminds me of X-men. Veryintresting build and story. why did the man on stage want to be shot?maybe i just looked at wrong, buts that how i read it... |
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June 6, 2012 |
Awesome!!! when he was talking about the people being superhuman, is that in any way connected to your Island locked II? |
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June 6, 2012 |
Very nice! I like the story! The floor design is fantastic! The balcony is impressive, and so is the stage! Great work, Caleb! |
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June 6, 2012 |
nice love the story it reminds me of x men |
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June 6, 2012 |
Nicely done, the MOC's very cool! I also liked the write-up, at first I thought it was about the Avengers. You might want to change the title though, it's "Speech" not "Speach". ;) |
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