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A Galaxy Divided 14: Revelations
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Naboo, one month after the events in A Galaxy Divided 13. A rogue Droid army has infiltrated Theed and is attempting to detonate a large nuclear device that has the potential to wipe out the city and surrounding countryside.

Harash Soru: "Obi-Wan, if you and Zore can work your way through the sewers I can provide a distraction on the surface."

Zore Embor: "You'd be taking on the army on your own Hara."

Harash Soru: "We don't have a choice. The bomb is the most important thing. And I don't have to attack the Droids, merely keep them occupied."

Obi-Wan Kenobi: "Thank you both for helping. If Anakin were here as he should be I would not have stopped you on your way home."



Anakin Skywalker: "I'm here Master, sorry we're late."

Obi-Wan Kenobi: "Late? Much longer and we'll have gone without you. Anakin this is supposed to be your mission!"

Ahsoka Tano: "Which is why we have the perfect battle plan drawn up!"

Zore Embor: "Master Soru has already come up with a plan."

Ian Doskey snorted.

Ian Doskey: "Yeah we all know how that will end."



Anakin walked up to the table and inserted a small holo-disk.

Anakin Skywalker: "The Droids don't know that we know they are planning to detonate a bomb. Therefore are best attack is through surprise. We will all attack the Droids on the surface whilst Master Embor infiltrates and destroys this bomb."

Harash Soru: "That could be dangerous Anakin. I don't think you can volunteer Zore for a suicide mission."

Zore Embor: "Hara is right, this mission is dangerous. But I will accept my duty."

Anakin grinned.

Anakin Skywalker: "Good! Then let's get to work!"



Obi-Wan, Zore and Hara watched as Anakin turned and led the others out of the room.

Harash Soru: "I've only ever had a problem with three Jedi before. And I'm watching them all leave now."

Zore Embor: "Doskey was out of line back there Hara."

Harash Soru: "I know he's your friend Obi-Wan, and I'm sorry that Anakin and I don't get along. I just cannot find it in me to trust him."

Obi-Wan Kenobi: "I understand, he is a very controversial Jedi after all."



The normally quiet streets of Theed have become a battleground, with blaster bolts zipping back and forth across the paved roads.



Harash Soru: "Skywalker! I really think one of us should go to help Zore!"

Anakin Skywalker: "This fight is more convincing! This is my mission Master Soru!"



Ian Doskey: "We don't want your help Soru! It'll only get us killed!"



Zore Embor slipped quietly into the underground chamber where the nuclear device was being held. He quickly pulled out the vaporizer and set to work on the detonation wires.
Suddenly, a dull clanking noise drew his attention.

Zore Embor: "Droids!"



No sooner had Zore grabbed his blade did a large group of Battle Droids march their way into the chamber, their blasters spitting bolts towards the Jedi.



Zore grunted as a bolt struck him in his left leg and a second one slammed into his lower back.



With his last breath Zore spun around to face the vaporizer and sliced through the small machine.

Zore Embor: "For the Republic!"



In the streets of Theed, Hara and Ian find themselves cut off from Obi-Wan, Anakin and Ahsoka. As they fight the ground suddenly begins to shake violently beneath them.

Ian Doskey: "The vaporizer!"

Harash Soru: "It's too early. Something must have happened."



The two Jedi hacked down the last of the Droids in the street and turned to face each other.

Ian Doskey: "I'm going to find Zore!"

Harash Soru: "Ian wait! The bomb went off early. Master Zore is dead, I can feel it. If you go to the meeting point you will find a trap. Best to gather our forces before we spring it."

Ian Doskey: "I am not taking orders from you Soru!"

Harash Soru: "Ian! Don't let petty arguments cloud your mind! You must..."



Hara gruntd as Ian used the Force to throw the Jedi Master against a pillar, knocking Hara out.

Ian Doskey: "I make my own orders."



At the meeting point Ian Doskey found a battalion of Droids waiting for him istead of Master Embor. Though the Droids put up a fight, in the end they were no real match for Ian.



A slow clapping from behind him drew Ian's attention.

tred Core: "Well done Master Jedi."

Ian Doskey: "You! These Droids are yours!"

Tred Core: "Yes. As will your head be mine."



Ian Doskey: "Then come claim it!"

With a roar Ian leapt for Tred, slashing out at the rogue Force user.



Ian spun his saberstaff around and used it to strike Tred squarely in the face, drawing a thin trickle of blood from the man's nose.

Tred Core: "You'll pay for that scum."



Tred charged Ian, his blade whirling and diving at angles that made it hard for Ian to block with his staff.



Then Tred slashed upwards, his blade slicing through Ian's staff leaving the Jedi clutching his lightsaber and the remains of the shaft.

Ian Doskey: "Don't assume I can't fight with a normal blade!"



Tred Core: "Oh I have no doubt. But you are not as familiar with it."



Tred kicked Ian in the chest causing him to stumble backwards.

Tred Core: "And that makes you weaker."



With a roar Tred jumped over Ian and slashed out at his back. Ian gasped as he dropped to floor and lay still. Without a word, Tred disappeared into the plains of Naboo.



Harash Soru ran across the plains, only slowing when he saw the carnage of an ended battle. His eyes drifted until he found the body of Ian Doskey.

Harash Soru: "Ian!"



Hara ran forward and dropped to Ian's side. Lifting the Jedi Master's head up and resting it on his knee.

Ian Doskey: "Hara... You came."

Harash Soru: "Of course Ian. I would never abandon a fellow Jedi."

Ian Doskey: "You were right. I should not have come."



Ian drew a ragged breath and his eyes slowly began to slide shut. As the Jedi Master passed away he whispered something gently in Hara's ear.

Ian Doskey: "I'm... Sorry."

Harash Soru looked down at Ian Doskey's body and closed his eyes in respect.

Harash Soru: "May the Force be with you Master Doskey."



Comments

 I like it 
  June 9, 2012
Great one!
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  June 7, 2012
Phase 3 clone troopers? There's nothing on Wookieepedia that says about them!
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  June 6, 2012
A cool chapter with some nice settings :D Good work ;)
  June 6, 2012
its too bad that we don't know zores fait well at least I don't also if its no trouble could I build harash soru thanks
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  June 6, 2012
Very nice episode idea! I like the setting! The lightsaber duel is great too. Poor Ian... :(
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  June 6, 2012
Lovin' this one, Harry!
Harry 863
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Admiral Varkov
  June 5, 2012
Nice Job! The Theed scene looks great and Tred Core's becoming a very interesting villain!
Harry 863
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Griffin .
  June 5, 2012
Nice episode!! Thanks for putting me in it again! :D
  June 5, 2012
Two awesome characters die? :(
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  June 5, 2012
wow that was awesome good job harry
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  June 5, 2012
cool! ur comics are always awesome! check out my new sereies if u get the chance!
 I made it 
  June 5, 2012
Quoting The Essence Of Randomness . Cool cool, but how about having a couple of over-arching stories, which carry on over a couple of episodes, and don't have a duel in each one, make it a big, nice set-piece when it happens, and include some more actual Clone-Droid combat? PLease take this into acount, as I tink it could add to the story a lot. Also could you include my Clone, Commander Iadsgb, a normal clone with black highlighintg, and his legion, the 81st Airborne.
Yeah I would put more clones in but I just don't have any. I've got no phase 3 troopers which is where I'm at now so I'm having to work with only 3 ARF Troopers. Because of that I'm sorry but I wont be able to include your Clone. Sorry :-/
 I like it 
  June 5, 2012
Cool cool, but how about having a couple of over-arching stories, which carry on over a couple of episodes, and don't have a duel in each one, make it a big, nice set-piece when it happens, and include some more actual Clone-Droid combat? PLease take this into acount, as I tink it could add to the story a lot. Also could you include my Clone, Commander Iadsgb, a normal clone with black highlighintg, and his legion, the 81st Airborne.
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  June 5, 2012
Ah zore died. That stinks! But this is really good! love the deflecting lasers idea!
 I made it 
  June 5, 2012
Quoting The Essence Of Randomness . Great as always, but you have got to admit this is getting a bit linear now.
No I completely agree. It's just the Clone Wars is a fairly set story and it's pretty hard to come up with a string of different stories. I'm just ploughing through it in an attempt to get to order 66 and start the new post episode 6 series
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  June 5, 2012
Great as always, but you have got to admit this is getting a bit linear now.
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  June 5, 2012
Great work Harry! Great battle scenes and cool episode!
 
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