The very first episode in my CYOA. If your character has not appeared yet he will in a future episode.
About this creation
On the planet of Tatooine...
Cpt. Score: Nice, one rookie. See if you can actaully hit the reglar droids.
Trace: Thank you sir. I'll try... So hit it like this.(shoots battle-droid right in the chest)
Cpt. Score: Yeah... like that.
Trace: When did you say backup was getting here?
Cpt. Score: They said they'd be here shortly
Suddenly out of no-where a man dressed all in black appears.
Man: I have something for you Trace.
Trace: Who are you?
Cpt. Score: Who are you talking to Trace?
Trace: He's right in front of me can't you see him?
One stray shot slams into Cpt. Score killing him.
Trace: Nooo! Captain!
Man: Now, follow me if you want to live.
Trace: Alright I'll follow you... for now.
Man: This is where we part. You'll be safe here. You have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this road and you'll find a ship, fly to the coordinates and train with me.
And with that he disappeared.
Meanwhile on Felucia...
Clone: Ok, Jackpot it would be really helpful if you could open this blast door.
Scar: He's trying.
Scar: Although it would help if you could go a little faster.
Jackpot: Yeah, I know I'm trying.
Then, a well timed shot hits Scar right in the chest.
Jackpot: Nooo! Scar...
Then Jackpot hears a blaster-bolt smacks into the clone behind him.
Scar: Heeere Jackpot take this.
He then handed Jackpot his blaster and died.
Jackpot: Well old fiend, I will return... someday.
Jackpot: No use standing here waiting to get shot.
jackpot ran through the jungle, and found a good place to rest.
Jackpot: This seems like a good place to rest.
Jackpot: Oh, great! Now, are you going to try and kill me too?
Man: Get up.
Jackpot: Yeah, ok.
Man: Take this.
He hands Jackpot a datadisk
Man: This datadisk contains a map to a ship, the ship has an autopilot system to bring you to me. But you now have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this map, board the ship, follow the coordinates to the cruiser and train with me. The choice is yours but choose wisely.
And with that he diappeared.
On Yavin...
Jor: Alright, this is it, everything I've been training for.
Jor: Ok, whoever you are I can hear you.
Man: Alright then, get up I have something for you.
Jor: Alright I'm up, you made me miss my chance to nail the Techno Union guy, so what do you want?
Man: Here, this datadisk contains a map to a ship, the ship has an autopilot system to bring you to me. But you have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this map, board the ship, follow the coordinates to the cruiser and train with me. The choice is yours but choose wisely.
And with that he diappeared.
On the icey planet of Hoth
Duel jumps and kicks the droid in the chest plate
Duel: Take this clanker!
Duel: Eat laser lead-head!
Commando Droid: Why don't you eat laser!
With that he shot and killed Duel
Ryno: Nooo! Duel!
Ryno: Hey! You bucket head!
Commando Droid: Wha?
Then Ryno launched a rocket right into the droids skull.
Ryno: Duel... I couldn't save you in time... I'm sorry.
Then the man appeared in front of him.
Ryno: Who are you?
Man: That does not matter now, here this is for you.
He pulls out the datadisk
Man: You now have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this map, board the ship, follow the coordinates to the cruiser and train with me. The choice is yours but choose wisely.
And with that he diappeared.
On Mustafar...
Dud: Oh no you don't clanker.
And with that Dud fired several blaster bolts into the droid's chest
Dud: Ha! Silly droid don't you know you can't kill me that easily.
With that he kicked the droid into the lava.
Dud: Ahh. Nothing like the smell of molten metal in the morning.
Dud: Who are you? And what is that?
Man: That doesn't matter now. As of now have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this map, board the ship, follow the coordinates to the cruiser and train with me. The choice is yours but choose wisely.
And with that he diappeared.
To all in this CYOA..
As of now have two choices, (1)stay here and be rescued, OR (2)follow this map, board the ship, follow the coordinates to the cruiser and train with me. The choice is yours but choose wisely.
Comments
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Josh what is your character's name? |
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I like it |
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June 1, 2012 |
I am always the best so this guy can't beat me even if it is a trap so i will go with him |
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I made it |
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June 1, 2012 |
Quoting Jonathan The Racer
Noo I died lol.At least I died a hero I hope :P Nice Ep I have been waiting for this and I died so fast.Can u pls like revive me just a question but no harm trying:)
Well I can't revive you but I can tell you that you didn't die. You weren't in this comic but I promise you'll be in the next one. |
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I like it |
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June 1, 2012 |
Noo I died lol.At least I died a hero I hope :P Nice Ep I have been waiting for this and I died so fast.Can u pls like revive me just a question but no harm trying:) |
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I like it |
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June 1, 2012 |
I agree with Popcorn :) Can't wait to see how this plays out :) I'll choose 2 :)
~12lego (Jor) |
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I like it |
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June 1, 2012 |
Nice work, this is a good start to this story... I'm curious as to who that "man" is so I choose 2. Looking foward to seeing more episodes! |
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