My first entry for the Star Wars lego Creations second MocAthlon
Topic: Crash
A little backstory: A 1000th legion squad comes to recuse a squad on Rhen Var but after the rescue anti cannons cause the rescue ship to crash in the snow and ice as the C.I.S moves in to kill the survivors now its the rescuers that need the rescuing!
C.I.S troopers close in on the crash site
A over view crash site
Three STAPS move in on the clones position but one is hit by a rocket pulverizing it
Scope and his spotter preparing a shot
The droids perspective of the battle
Under the shelter of the ship a damaged medic droid does his best on the wounded while on clone sends a call for help
Blood brings the fight to the clankers wielding his electro sword and his custom shield
Two clones being assassinated by commando droids trying to flank the clones
I'm sorry for lack of photos I had at least double the amount of photos but the uploader was disagreeing with me I'll see if I can upload them later!
You used very simple bricks, but that doesn't mean that the MOC is bad. It is very detailed and looks like a real crash. It is also obvious that you put a lot of effort in it. Your score = 4
The action is amazing and the back story is detailed. You have clearly put in the effort.
However, The crash looks like a set dismantled and dropped on the scene. It needs to be built into the environment.
For that reason I score you a 3.
The detail is great and I can see that you put a lot of thought into it. But truthfully, it could have been significantly better if you had made your own Republic ship instead of using a set. That's just my advice. Good job overall! :)