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Balance of the Force Chapter 14: Attack on the Jedi Temple
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Coruscant 2 days after the events of Chapter 13. Oblivious to the return of Darth Vulnero the Jedi attempt to maintain a sense of normalcy in the face of the coming darkness....
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(The Jedi Temple, Coruscant the training room of Vince Yond'Ull)

Yoda- Good, good. Let the force flow. Concentrate, clear your mind, you must.

Vince- I'm trying...er...doing master.



(Suddenly Vince completely breaks his concentration and the disk drops to the floor, he grabs his head and writhes in pain)

Bartolo- Master Yoda- What's wrong with the-

Yoda- Sense it too I do. The dark side.



(Vince stops but is still visibly shaken)

Bartolo- Padawan what's the matter, what just happened.

Vince- It was...terrifying master...like a cold darkness...and it was coming right for me.

Bartolo- I must inform security, I don't like the looks of this at all.

Yoda- Tell the council I must, a grave new threat has come to the Republic.



(Korriban The recently-vacated Tomb of Darth Vulnero)

Kasamir- My lord, you summoned me?

Vulnero- Kasamir, tell me do you know the story of Darth Vulnero, my story?

Kasamir- Indeed, you were the most formidable Dark Jedi ever to live and single-handedly conquered the Republic in less than a year.

Vulnero- And, I was destroyed by a little Jedi whelp! A boy named Yond'Ull! And now his spawn plague me still! I sense that same presence that destroyed me! And I will destroy that boy, and then...nothing will stop me.



(The Jedi Temple Security Room)

Bartolo- Chief! Chief-

Desmond- Security Chief Desmond Ortu at your service, I assume this is about the disturbance.

Bartolo- Yes, how-

Desmond- I am a Jedi you will remember, and I must assure you that the Temple is secure as ever! Nothing's going to-

(He stops as an alarm sounds)



Bartolo- I hope this is a drill...

Desmond- We never hold drills, Duke, somehow something has invaded my Temple! Come on! The intruder's in the dormitories, we can cut him off there!



(Dormitory Halls)

Desmond- Captain what in the name of the Force is going on here?

Captain- Sir, we have an unidentified force user in the Temple, several Jedi have moved to stop him.

Bartolo- How did a Dark Jedi get in here?



(Before he can respond a Mon Calamari Jedi soars back into the hallway)

Desmond- What in the-



(Darth Vulnero follows dueling a Jedi)



(He force pushes the Jedi into the wall, knocking him unconscious as he deflects a Temple Guard's blast)

Vulnero- I don't have time for you Jedi weaklings!



Desmond- Back off Captain we'll handle this.



(Vulnero wastes no time attacking Desmond)

Vulnero- You wield a strange weapon Jedi, perhaps you will be more sporting than the rest!

Desmond- I was just thinking the same thing!



(Vulnero parries Desmond's strike as Bartolo charges)



(But Vulnero blocks the attack)

Bartolo- For a 1,00 year old Sith you aren't any better a duelist than the Sith today!

Vulnero- There are more powerful things than dueling, Jedi!



(Vulnero blasts the Jedi back)

Vulnero- For I am not a simple force-wielder, I have conquered the Force itself!



(Meanwhile in his dormitory Vince listens to the sound of battle growing steadily closer, suddenly the sound of a loud thunk of a body hitting the floor is heard)



(His door hisses open as a Sith emerges)

Vince- Who are you?

Sith- Oh, no one important.

(Suddenly Vince becomes disoriented and falls unconscious to the ground)



(Vulnero arrives in the room minuets later only to find a broken window and a pile of glass on the floor)

Vulnero- What?!! NO!!



(Later in Duke Bartolo's office)

Bartolo- He left just as suddenly as he came, a study of the archives indicates ancient Sith and Jedi often had the power to teleport themselves to areas of high force concentration.

Desmond- There wasn't anything we could do to stop him, we lost over 20 Temple Guards and Jedi, not to mention automated defenses!

Yoda- But a far greater loss has been inflicted, I fear. For the padawan Yond'Ull disappeared has he...

Bartolo- Then that's it, no one can stop him now...

Yoda- No, sense another I do...



Comments

 I like it 
  January 5, 2013
Woah! This story just keeps getting better and better. I liked the Desmond's lightsaber!
 I like it 
  May 28, 2012
a great chapter,I'll go read the other ones to understand it better and you added me as a favorite so I'll give each of your chapters a like!!!
 I like it 
  May 26, 2012
Ooh I wonder who the other Sith was..... Nice work as always Varkov :D
 I like it 
  May 25, 2012
Can't wait for the next one!
 
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