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My character for the Council of Toa Roleplay... Toa of Fire, and Ex-Justicar... Fexore, The Vengeful.
About this creation
My brothers of the Vanguard.
While once all who walked this land protected and prospered in unity and peace, now there is danger brought upon said cause.


The noble Bearers of Justice! Known as pure and kind to all.
I walked among their ranks until not long ago. But soon I found the evident corruption with which certain branches of their forces are run.



I fled the Bearers for my own safety; they sent three soldiers, who pursued as rapidly as hungry Kinloka. I slew them from necessity; after witnessing the Justicars' crimes, this was no dent to my conscience.



I, Fexore, turn to you now, my brothers of the Vanguard.
Accept me as Commander... perhaps then with spears and shields held high we can make this land right.



I am not blind; I realize that the hatred and chaos many of you hold dear may hinder our cause. But I know the true way to your heartlights; not through true justice, but through the pay and spoils of victory.
As you know by now, my final hope is for a fair world, while most of you want only for money. As we obliterate the ingrates that call themselves Justicars, I take not the winnings; the plunder goes to naught but you all.



I know not of the intentions of the Order of the Sentinels; but I trust that they are wise enough to either aid us in this matter, or retain their stance of neutrality.
I have also heard rumblings of a new faction in our land; although we are all unaware of their plans, I sense an impending debacle on par with the Wars of Old.


With this in mind perhaps more of you will be inspired to fight for a better day to dawn.



My brothers of the Vanguard:
The Justicar's hidden oppression has an end. And it is one that only we can bring about.




Optional Vorox-skull pauldron.





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Like Vored suggested, I went with a simpler build than I usually do.
Despite this, he has a bit deeper character than you might think.
I also decided to deviate from my preferences; fire is typically one of my least-favorite elements, so I branched out a bit with Fexore.
Hopefully you can see the legionnaire inspiration, what with the spear and shield.

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Council of Toa Roleplay can be found here.

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As you can tell by my current username I've got limited internet time for a few weeks. Now that you all know this I might remove the tag from my username, as it's just really bugging me.
Sorry for messed up pictures, this was photographed and uploaded in a hurry.

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Remember to find the hidden link! This one's crazily obvious. ;)
If you find it then you can tell me, but please don't tell everyone else.


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Next up: my entry for the Bio Cup 2012 eliminatories!



Comments

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  January 19, 2013
Nice MOC, I like that someone is using the Vorox parts for once. One question though. I know you must've had this asked so man y times bfore now, but is that actually pink?
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  December 16, 2012
Dope colour scheme, reminds me of a Battle Beast I once owned. http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lp01euYiPN1qznfri.jpg See what I mean? lol
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  July 25, 2012
Pretty sweet build you've got here,never thought tan and mata red would work as well together as they did here. Though if there's one problem with it,I would have to say the proportions of the torso to the legs seem a bit off,course that may just be me.
  July 16, 2012
I don't know how to find hidden links
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  June 25, 2012
Thanks, guys. :)
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  June 25, 2012
this guy is kool dude!
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  June 21, 2012
i like the knight look to him, and the vorox head on the shoulder, and the shield and spear are pretty cool to!
  June 8, 2012
And the penny drops. http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=327155&id=/user_images/86295/1339142554m If curiosity did killed the cat, then my cat just died a few days ago. XD
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  June 6, 2012
Thanks everyone!
Quoting Lego Obsessionist Your links make me smile. :)
I'm glad. :)
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  June 6, 2012
Very nice! Love the shield! Keep up the amazing work!
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  June 3, 2012
Your links make me smile. :) Great job, I love the tan and red. The HF/technic armoring is very well done.
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  May 29, 2012
I found the link!!! **** looks epic
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  May 29, 2012
Quoting John Tudor good job
Thank you. :)
  May 29, 2012
good job
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  May 28, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Its a bit of an awkward build, though quite flexible. I suggest investing in some tan technic, i found that even a little bit goesa long way! Liking the pink ;)
Yeah, he'll definitely be upgraded, once I have more parts to work with.
  May 28, 2012
Its a bit of an awkward build, though quite flexible. I suggest investing in some tan technic, i found that even a little bit goesa long way! Liking the pink ;)
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  May 27, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope I just wanted you to know, I found all your links in your previous pages ;) great job, I loved the hunt. Please do that again! :D
Congratulations! :D Don't worry, I will, it's quite fun to place them.
  May 26, 2012
I just wanted you to know, I found all your links in your previous pages ;) great job, I loved the hunt. Please do that again! :D
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  May 26, 2012
Quoting Leaith Flex That's pretty cool the colours which are hard to make out are a good combo, red and (if I'm wrong I'm sorry) tan look great together!
Yeah, I've made several MOCs with a red/tan color scheme before, in varying shades of red and tan.
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  May 26, 2012
That's pretty cool the colours which are hard to make out are a good combo, red and (if I'm wrong I'm sorry) tan look great together!
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  May 26, 2012
Quoting Henry Smith an amazing poem, the justicars almost sound like the Oppresive Tsarevich that comrade Lenin despised. sorry, done alot of reading on the russian revolution. :P
That's less of a poem than it is a campaign speech... anyway, thanks. :)
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  May 26, 2012
Quoting MCLegoboy ! What an interesting color sheme. Like others have stated, it messes with the camera, but when you upload the pictures to the computer, there should be some sort of thing that comes up and allows you to fix the colors and stuff like that. It works pretty well when the picture color is not too off. Search around and see what you can find.
Yeah, I figured out how to use that after I uploaded Fexore. I'll be sure to use it on my next upload though. :D
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  May 26, 2012
Quoting Wertman 8 oh, and that _____ guy looks epic!
No spoilers! ;)
  May 26, 2012
an amazing poem, the justicars almost sound like the Oppresive Tsarevich that comrade Lenin despised. sorry, done alot of reading on the russian revolution. :P
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  May 26, 2012
What an interesting color sheme. Like others have stated, it messes with the camera, but when you upload the pictures to the computer, there should be some sort of thing that comes up and allows you to fix the colors and stuff like that. It works pretty well when the picture color is not too off. Search around and see what you can find.
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  May 26, 2012
Great moc!(as always) I love the color scheme and the shield and spear. I find it both funny and ironic that we both have mocs that have the title "The Vengeful"
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  May 26, 2012
This is a great MOC, the spear and shield fit him well. Torso is awesome, and the lower hand design is simple but cool. Can't wait for the Bio-Cup entry, keep up the good work. BTW I found the hidden link :)
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  May 26, 2012
Oh, my like didn't show up. Oh well, here it is :P
  May 26, 2012
WOWZA! Love the colour scheme, and the leg design! Where did you get that bright red toa metru chest piece from? and also, where did the red Exo force piece on the back come from? Can't wait to see him in action in the RPG!
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  May 26, 2012
Dat scheme. I love it. He's epic! I can't wait to join you in the Vanguards.
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Suspicious Chicken
  May 25, 2012
Nice, good back story and nice yet simple build. Good job!
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Carter Heald
  May 25, 2012
Nice MOC! The shield kinda reminds me of my first Bionicle MOC, Magmaton Gladiator.
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  May 25, 2012
awesome character!, can the shoulders bend forward?
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Huh? Ohai. :P Nice MOC, but I'm guessing your camera gives it that off color?
Yep. Color settings are all messed up. And no, no he isn't. :P
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  May 25, 2012
Huh? Ohai. :P Nice MOC, but I'm guessing your camera gives it that off color?
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  May 25, 2012
Thanks guys! :D
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  May 25, 2012
love the colors, and design! in particular i love the arms!
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting StoveTop Creator A nice build and I actually like the color effects! :)
Discoloration FTW! XD
Quoting Toa Infernum You and I have chosen similar characters to make our entries off. Mine's gold though. :)
Aha, I was right! :D
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting Jacob Manahan I like the simplicity, and more importantly the character himself.
It's not at all what you think. Not even close. ;)
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting Cody G He is simple, but still pretty good. The red and tan color scheme kind of messes with the camera's color balance.
You bet it does. >.<
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  May 25, 2012
This is great. I love the look and while the color is a little disorientating (Silly camera. XD) I can just tell those colors work. I may not have time to build a character for the RPG so can i use Talex? Oh Oh Oh I found the link. I do like how he's shapin up! :D And Good luck in the contest
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  May 25, 2012
This is a great moc! I like the simplicity, and more importantly the character himself. He is all in all great!
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  May 25, 2012
You and I have chosen similar characters to make our entries off. Mine's gold though. :). I love this guy! His red is awsome and your application is great.
  May 25, 2012
I just haven't commented too long for now on your creations. I'll redo that as soon as I could find some time. I mean, I don't want you to loose your interest and commenting in my MoCs (and due to the fact that your creations deserve proper rating) :)
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  May 25, 2012
A nice build and I actually like the color effects! :)
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting Vored 03 A very cool character! I really like the designs, even when they are more simple. The spear and the shields are uncommon weapons, that's cool! I also like the color sheme very much. I think you should keep the Vorox skull as a shoulderpad, it looks really cool! The backstory and your application for the Vanguad-leader are presented in a great way, making the groups and the things that are going to happen more mystical! Overall excellent work!
Thanks V! Glad you like it. :D
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  May 25, 2012
He is simple, but still pretty good. The red and tan color scheme kind of messes with the camera's color balance, but I can imagine that it looks pretty cool in real life.
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  May 25, 2012
Amazing moc. And the preview pic is just as good.
 I like it 
  May 25, 2012
A very cool character! I really like the designs, even when they are more simple. The spear and the shields are uncommon weapons, that's cool! I also like the color sheme very much. I think you should keep the Vorox skull as a shoulderpad, it looks really cool! The backstory and your application for the Vanguad-leader are presented in a great way, making the groups and the things that are going to happen more mystical! Overall excellent work!
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  May 25, 2012
Great build and very interesting story!
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting Noah G Did they really make all those parts in pink?
LOL no, it's just my camera. They're bright red. :P
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  May 25, 2012
Did they really make all those parts in pink?
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  May 25, 2012
Very cool, I found the link!
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  May 25, 2012
Quoting AuRon The Champion I found teh link! :3 Also, are you participating in the Bio-cup? Or spectating? This is pretty good, I like the use of the furno mask and the colors!
Participating, obviously! :D
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  May 25, 2012
I found teh link! :3 Also, are you participating in the Bio-cup? Or spectating? This is pretty good, I like the use of the furno mask and the colors!
 
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