About this creation
Here is finally my fifth revamp of Vastara for the RPG-Group! The front pic is edited by Marko Petrusic!
Character info:
Name: Vastara
Gender: female
Species: Matoran (the Green)
Alignment: Chaotic neutral
Occupation: We'll see when the groups are done.
Abilities: Controlling the plantlife in a radius of 1 meter.
Kanohi: Mask of Levitation
Weapons: Sword
Personality: ruthless, violent, controlled.
Bio: Vastara had a hard life before she became a council member. In her first years of being a Toa, she had to face many enemies that were much more stronger than she was. So she often went up in dark caves or prisons and often has to fight out her way with bare hands. Over time she has become more violent and ruthless. At some day, a Toa who was send by the council, managed to recruit her after a long fight, which came from Vastara's mistrust. In her time in the council, she grew to be a respected member. However, she never accepted the offer to be a leader of the various groups.
History lesson:

This was the first version I ever made of her. Boring, and with a horrible chest design.

This is sadly the only picture I found form the second version. I just remember how bulky she looked..

The third version was much better. Had the nice black/lime color sheme.

The fourth version was the first on MOCpages. Custom body and lower arms, but too much black. And the hands kept falling off.

So here is the newest version! She has more lime green now, and much more custom designs. I also fixed the sometimes weird-looking chest area.

Back view.
Action poses!





Some close-ups:

Her hair. Made out of a helmet!

The "new" chest design. I kept the metru shoulderpads, but they aren't directly under the neck anymore :)

The arms. Upper arms are custom, the lower aren't. I tried some designs, but they always had too much black and weren't moveable enough. I decided to keep these.

Upper legs and waist. I made the hips bigger, they were much too thin in the last version.

I kept the lower leg and foot design. Works well, in my opinion.
Randosity! (I will add stuff like that to all of my creations now on :D)

Gesikk: Hey Vastara! You've got another upgrade! Again! The fifth time...!

Gesikk: I want an update too... :,(
Who of you guys think he should be the next one I revamp?

At last, a picture of her in front of the well-known village :)
Fourth wall:
This is the character I'll play in the RPG.
Do you want to join? Just visit the Council of Toa Group!
That's it! Maybe you've noticed that I wasn't really active at posting comments lately. Are you one of my favourite builders? Then you are allowed to do some self promotion here :)
Commenting 'n rating is appreciated!
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June 20, 2012 |
Excellent job on her! She is very feminine. I have only made one Fe-moc, and it used Metru shoulder pads, but you really make it look legit. |
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Suspicious Chicken June 6, 2012 |
Wow... Very nice job! I like the chest and the feet design, and great work overall! It's also kinda cool to see al the previous version, so much improvement has been made! |
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June 5, 2012 |
awesome job! |
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June 1, 2012 |
Looks good! Much improved! |
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May 28, 2012 |
though i love this new design i still love the old one more. i like how u added the lime. it looks nice keep up the great work!
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May 28, 2012 |
Nice updates! I too was wondering about that gear... |
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May 27, 2012 |
Very nice MOC. I really like her head. Body is also nice. Legs anf arms are cool. Good job!!!! |
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May 26, 2012 |
Quoting Akara The Great
The all black in my opinion gave me a really sexy feel, but for some reason it seemed bulky. This version looks slimmer and... somewhat girlier. Anyways, try working on getting rid of those grey gears on the chest.
Oh, you noticed the gear :D! I added it on purpose. WIll be explained in my story, unless it looks to awkward and has to be removed ;) But thanks for commenting, rating and faving! |
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May 26, 2012 |
The all black in my opinion gave me a really sexy feel, but for some reason it seemed bulky. This version looks slimmer and... somewhat girlier. Anyways, try working on getting rid of those grey gears on the chest. |
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May 25, 2012 |
She looks excellent! |
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May 25, 2012 |
She looks excellent! |
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May 25, 2012 |
Awesome bionicle! |
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May 25, 2012 |
I like the poses! |
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May 24, 2012 |
Definitely a well done MOC! |
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May 23, 2012 |
I thought I commented earlier! This is an excellent revamp, I like that you put in more lime green on the arms. Awesome job. |
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May 23, 2012 |
This is great! I love all the designs! :D |
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May 23, 2012 |
Very cool. :D Well done all around. |
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May 23, 2012 |
Very nice work, she is much sleeker this time around, and the additional green looks very good. I think you should spice up the weapon a bit more though, like maybe adding a bit more continuity on the back of the blade. Lime lightsaber blades maybe? |
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May 23, 2012 |
Wow, she is amazing! Like the addition of more lime on her arms, an overall excellent upgrade! |
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May 23, 2012 |
Awesome! I always loved this creation, and now she's better than ever! |
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May 23, 2012 |
Awesome! |
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May 23, 2012 |
She looks great! I love her! |
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May 23, 2012 |
Awsome!!! Love the sleek look You gave her and the hair and foot design is amazing. |
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May 23, 2012 |
Great job Vored! She looks great! You captured the feminine look very well. This will be a great addition to the RPG. :) ~12lego |
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May 23, 2012 |
Excellent MOC, the chest design is great and you really changed her since the first version. Keep it up :) |
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