Jedi log 362, I and Master Lumana were scouting the Balmorran plains when we were attacked by three bounty hunters, we suspect they were recruited by the sith. We were able to dispach them quickly although Master Lumana has been shot in the arm and needs medical attention, no ther sith activity has been spotted in the area.
This creation is good, but I feel it is lacking in detail, both the story and the MOC. You have some good ideas, the foliage and the rocks, but you need to really emphasize those parts even more. I give you a 4.5/10.