My first posted MOC and would be entry to the first round of the BCBS.
About this creation
Lets start with a 360 spin
Text is below each picture
Left side
Right side
Name- Carnage
Gender- Male
Titles- Dark Hunter, Bounty Hunter
Allinement- Dark Hunter, Himself
Status- Alive and assembled
Bio-
Carnage was once a Matoran builder. His job required special equipment to be attached to him. One day two Toa found him injured at the site of a fallen building. The Toa gave him a Toa stone to heal him, but something went horribly wrong. The equipment Carnage was wearing mutated and attached to him permanently. This bonding process was extremely painful and drove Carnage insane. He grew in size and the two Toa ran away in terror. He then became a powerful dark hunter. He is known to be extremely dangerous and should be apprehended on site.
With saw sword
With mace
Next to mace.
Pic of Particle desintigration ray hand. What do you think a bionicle is going use a bulldozer to flatten land? This was one of the pieces of equipment bonded to him.
Regular Hand
Side of treads (also bonded to him)
Comparision to my upgraded Surge
Comparision to my selfmoc
Aww, look at them play
Carnage- Destroy toa scum!
Oooff!
The Useless pieces
All the useless pieces together
Creator's notes
Hi! This is my first posted Moc and I would love to get some CONSTRUCTIVE critism. Get it constructive, Carnage Constructs things. No? OK Enough of my bad puns. So this would have been my entry to the BCBS but I posted it too late. I used to really love construction vehicles, so making a Bionicle one was a really fun experience. I am very happy with him over all, especially the playable features like his arm cannon, I've wanted to use that canon piece forever.
Allright next up, some of my already made mocs, so be on the lookout!
Bye, till next time!
Comments
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Sure, that would be awesome! |
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May 27, 2012 |
Like the whole 'Construction-Bot' theme. Nice use of the central tread, and the colorscheme worked nicely with your theme as well. Cheers! |
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May 19, 2012 |
Hey you! I really like this creation. |
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May 16, 2012 |
Quoting Chronos Omega
Not sure how those waist pieces are useless, but nice work! Interesting concept, well executed too. :)
Thanks! I thought the waist pieces could be considered a little useless because most of my MOCs use a bendable torso and it's hard to make one with one of those pieces. ;D |
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May 16, 2012 |
Not sure how those waist pieces are useless, but nice work! Interesting concept, well executed too. :) |
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I made it |
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May 15, 2012 |
Quoting M G
Could it be... the solution to fitting a blaster into a hand design? FINALLY! Someone has done it. And quite impressively if I do say so myself. And the moc overall is just awesome, haven't seen those treads in a while. So welcome to Mocpages, let me go and add you to my favorites.
Thanks! Feel free to use the design, it's pretty simple. ;) |
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May 15, 2012 |
Could it be... the solution to fitting a blaster into a hand design? FINALLY! Someone has done it. And quite impressively if I do say so myself. And the moc overall is just awesome, haven't seen those treads in a while. So welcome to Mocpages, let me go and add you to my favorites. |
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May 15, 2012 |
Quoting Dragonmaster 1027
Your wish is my command. Thanks for commenting on my moc, and I have to say, this guy looks pretty great for a first post. I honestly can't see anything to improve on him except for gap-filling. Your self moc looks awesome, an I can't wait to see him posted, but before you do, I reccomend that you add more red to him. :)
Thanks for the comment! I love your mocs! All right I'm working on Infernum now so I'll add more red. ;D |
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May 15, 2012 |
Your wish is my command. Thanks for commenting on my moc, and I have to say, this guy looks pretty great for a first post. I honestly can't see anything to improve on him except for gap-filling. Your self moc looks awesome, an I can't wait to see him posted, but before you do, I reccomend that you add more red to him. :) |
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May 15, 2012 |
Thanks Vored! You're the first to add me, thanks! |
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Congratulations, you're now one of my favorite builders :) |
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May 15, 2012 |
Thanks for the kind words everyone! Allright, thanks for the tips Vored, I'll try to redo his arms. LOL Gale, thanks for the comment! :D |
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May 15, 2012 |
Now,I'm DEFINITELY not as experienced as some some other Bio-MOCers,but I feel like I have to tell you this:You've got serious potential!Keep it up! :) |
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May 15, 2012 |
Welcome to MOCpages! Your first creation is already fantastic, with an excellent build and very nice photography! The "useless" parts you integrated to the body fit Carnage's look very well! I think I like the arms most, they look very cool! Also a nice self-MoC of you (just a little advice: try to make the arms more custom before you post him, that would match the nice designs of the rest much better!)! 5/5 for this MoC! |
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May 15, 2012 |
Quoting Steve The Squid
Well for constructive, I'd say you've got a good organic form, but you sacrificed too much on using the treads. Less 'useless' parts and more useful parts could have made this more interesting, and posablilty is important as well. One last thing: a few of your useless parts are actually used heavily, and they don't count when you use them for what they're intended, like eyes for eyes or treads for treads. But anyway, good luck and happy building!
Ok, well I didn't get in on time anyway so I guess using for what they were meant for doesn't matter all too much. Thanks for your comment! BTW, I used the treads to make it seem like the organicness came to an abrupt stop because they were bonded to him. Could I make your selfmoc? |
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May 15, 2012 |
Well for constructive, I'd say you've got a good organic form, but you sacrificed too much on using the treads. Less 'useless' parts and more useful parts could have made this more interesting, and posablilty is important as well. One last thing: a few of your useless parts are actually used heavily, and they don't count when you use them for what they're intended, like eyes for eyes or treads for treads. But anyway, good luck and happy building! |
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May 15, 2012 |
Haha, got to love puns, and you constructed yours so well that I can't resist building upon it ;) Sorry, had to. Anyway, this is a really great MOC. I had planned on putting wheels on my entry, but I have no idea how lol. You are very good at building, keep them coming! :D |
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