Jabberwock has been updated and entered in the first round of the BCBS!
About this creation
So yeah everyone, here we are once again with an updated creation. Jabberwock has been updated, in order to wield more weapons and look even more overly greebled xD
Jabberwock has been entered in the BCBS' first round: Useless Parts. I humbly disagree with this term, so I'll call them Uncommon Parts here. xD
Link to contest: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/20333
The roboriders frame that is used as his pegleg
the "Nnenn" pieces inside his hammer
Various bohrok gears n' cogs
A Pneumatic spring, (the shiny metal part in his "abdomen"
A diver-minifig's helmet as the back of his head.
Name: Chronus el'Raïd
Species: Same as Botar (yes, the canon one!)
Personality: A gentleman at all times, unless he is drunk or a brawl is going on. He loves both of these two things quite alot
You wanted some critique, here you go! The whole creation looks pretty epic, it has, like the challenge said, many great part usages! But you also wanted me to point all the things out I would like to see improved, and since the contest round is over, I would first suggest to change some of the "useless parts" here and there. The connection of the lower and the upper arms looks very thin, so does the connection of the hand and the lower arm. I also somehow don't like his chest that much, the Nuva shoulders look wrong somehow. I know that the lower legs should be asymetric, but you maybe should turn the Nuva shoudler armor on both legs in the same direction. The rest is just epic... the use of those long and flat black pieces on his upper legs is just one example. I hope my feedback helps you on this and future creations!
Quoting Clever Crowe
Experimental and awesome. Very much like the Giant Hammerythingy Of Death, too. NPU on the core for the mallet's head. Would be an awesome MOC even if not aiming for a Theme. Cheers!
To more or less tell the truth: He just happened to fit the theme and I happened to be aware enough that I hadn't yet posted him, thus I did so on the final day xD