I think you have some good concepts here but in my opinion you had some trouble taking them from your head to the legos. For the frozen Jedi, I think there are better methods that would look more realistic. Also consider that for the purpose of clarifying the storyline, you have a Jedi frozen in a jungle. Perhaps you could create some story to rectify that concept. Also, your foliage, especially the tree covering, really needs work. In revision or future builds, you may try to layer foliage, not just lay it down like plating. The key is varied plant life that seems as close as possible to the real life randomness of plants. Furthermore, your rocks need some of the same type of realist work. Additionally, you might also try and declutter your scenes. You have quite a few characters involved and the entire scene is almost deluged in them. Limiting the minifigs can lead to a better view of the details of the build and a better view of the custom characters. I hope this critique helps a bit and I hope that you will apply this critiquing format to your own critiques, which appear to be severely lacking in any thought or useful info.

Nice story, though needs editing work. Good build. Very nice work.

Excellent job!

Nice!

Nice force effects!

Pretty nice, I like the Force technique. Very cool-looking. But I still feel it to be a bit crowded.

Wow amazing!!!

But please don't add them to the group as the group is for missions only

Pretty good josh. If you do make a comic please add links to the group

pretty sick!