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SMoT Final Round: Akara vs. Era
For the SMoT final round. Good luck Era! Also, I chose to write out the battle myself. I felt that doing it like that would better express how I wanted to make it and there are some scenes that I can't properly do in lego form. Questions, comments, concerns, and ways to improve are welcome.
About this creation
Posted almost too late. Sorry, I've been procrastinating (Darn you minecraft!).

Anyways, this round was to make mine and my opponent's Self MOC's into Gods. I chose Set(h) and Horus. My opponent's version was more important then mine, so I started off with Set/Era, which explains why Horus/Akara is shoddy. I'm not satisfied at all with it.

They can be distinguished as Karda and Akara from their color schemes (gold replacing yellow because of the lack of parts and the fact I don't have a yellow Hau) and their shoulders. It is easy to tell Horus has Avohkiis and Era has Haus.

The SMoT
Era's Entry
The current Akara(s)
The current Toa Karda
Something for Steve

Please excuse the lack of poses. I ran out of time.

With these MOCs I was heavily inspired from Berial. In which some designs I used but modified in my own way. I also give credit for inspiration from many members of the Piece Out facebook community. One of the first to give advice being the one and only Ben Cossy.

On with the story!
Horus surveyed the desert area, looking for his opponent. The hot sun was bearing down upon him like a miner on a rock. Just standing there was making him feel lethargic and sleepy. Some of it was his fault though, as he decided to wear armor for the battle. He was the smaller of the two, so obviously he would more susceptible to injury.

He had opted to not rest in the time he was waiting, lest he could have been struck down in his sleep. If he died, there would have been no vengeance and Lower Egypt would have been lost. There was always a thought in his mind that Set was purposely causing the desert to be hot and dry, to play tricks with his mind.

The sun was already starting to set, although when Horus had arrived to the scene the sun had just risen. Set controlled darkness, perhaps he was controlling the battle scene. Horus knew that Set were to take advantage of the surrounding area during the battle, but not before.

At last he saw something in the distance. Easily distinguished from the golden glint and the ears, he knew it was Set. He withdrew his Khopesh from his back, getting into a battle position. There would have been only one victor- Horus.

Looks like you finally showed up, Set. Took you long enough,” Horus said coldly.

Instantly the wind was knocked out of him, as Set had tackled him with full force. His Khopesh was knocked out his hand about a foot away from him. “It doesn’t matter. You’ll die swiftly anyways,

Set pulled up Horus by the neck, slightly squeezing it. The pain was sharp, but it wasn’t unbearable. “Get up and face me!” Set said to him. Horus was promptly released form Set’s grasp and landed on the ground with a thud.

He got up, grabbing his Khopesh. “I want a clean fight. There will be no..” he was cut off from Set lunging at him with his Khopesh. Horus parried, although his weapon was pulled out of his hand from the two weapons clashing. He should have expected it, being the weaker of the two.

Without weapon, Horus raised his arms defensively. Set raised his Khopesh up and swung downwards, only for Horus to kick his hand. The sword fell down to the ground, opposite from Horus’.

They both locked eyes, for a few seconds, only for Horus to jump at his Khopesh. Set drew his staff. As Horus stood with his sword, Set swung down as before. Horus wasn’t that slow as to not expect for something to happen like that. He jumped out the way, cutting off his aggressor’s left hand.

Set roared in pain and dropped his staff, then recovering after several seconds. Tackling Horus, Set gouged out his eye with his un-severed hand. It was a fair trade-off in his opinion.

Horus screamed, pushing Set off of him. He raised his Khopesh, cutting off Set’s head off in a single motion. He took it up in his hands and raised it to the sky as a sign of victory.

Right then, there was a strike of lightning and the clap of thunder. Rain started coming down in small droplets, then as a downpour. Egypt would finally be in peace.


Name: Karda/Set
Race: God (or as those in the matoran universe call it, great beings)
Weapons: Was Scepter(I called it a staff), Khopesh
MOC Status: Assembled

Height: 17 inches (43 centimeters)


Close ups

Lower leg.


Knee area.


Upper leg.


Torso.


Upper arm.


Lower arm.


Hand.


Head closeup.


Back of the lower leg.


Back of the upper leg. The thing sticking out was to add stability.


Lower back.


Upper back.

360 degree view








Name: Horus/Akara
Race: God (or as those in the matoran universe call it, great beings)
Weapons: Khopesh
MOC Status: Assembled (FOR NOW!)



Close ups

Lower leg.


Upper leg.


Torso.


Upper arm.


Lower arm (and hand).


Back of the lower legs (ignore the blue)


Back of the upper legs.


Back.


Back of the arms.


Head closeup.

360 degree view









Comments

 I like it 
  May 10, 2012
These are very, very godlike creations! I'll give you 10/10 for the build, it's simply fantastic! There are so many nice part usages and greebles all over them on the body, legs, arms and the head! I think the head design looks amazingly like one of those egypt gods! Creativity: 10/10 (Again, full score!). The fight itself wasn't photographed, but very well written, so you'll get 7/10 for it. You got my vote with 1 point in difference!
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  May 6, 2012
Nice entry! Both of them have cool heads. I will give you 9/10 for build, 9/10 for creativity, and 7/10 for story.
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  May 6, 2012
These where such excellent entries! 8/10 for build (I don't like all the exposed technic on their backs, and the exposed hip joints on Akara are rather awkward), 8/10 for story (abrupt ending) and 9/10 for creativity, for 25/30.
 I like it 
  May 5, 2012
Wow, these are amazing builds. Build: 9/10. I think you had the upper hand in the build. Creativity: 8/10. There was some creative parts usage in there. Fight: 7/10. Though kind of hard to compare the fights (obviously, cause yours was written and his was pictures,) you both did well in this section. I think you were able to conceive more with it though since you had written it. Good luck!
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  May 5, 2012
When i look at this i am happy era beat me XD. Just..... I don't know what to say the are so well designed and I like them even more beacause they are eygipian gods i always like eygipian gods
 I like it 
  May 1, 2012
Thats a beast!
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  April 30, 2012
No human uttering can describe the awesomeness of these MOCs!!!!! Excellent work, on both Karda and Akara!! Excellent work, just excellent!! You had this competition from the beginning!!
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  April 30, 2012
Yes! Exploding brains! That's like a free point (maybe). now to read the story...
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  April 30, 2012
The 'thing for Steve" made me laugh my socks off. XD Anyway, WOW! The sheer size of these guys is crazy! I think you've got this in the bag. ;)
 I like it 
  April 30, 2012
Amazing, good work on the customness of the builds!
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  April 30, 2012
both of there head are awesome. I really love those leg. Great job. And i think that akara, except for the back, isn't that bad.
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  April 30, 2012
i think i know whos gonna win.....
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  April 30, 2012
Looks great! Good luck!
 I like it 
  April 30, 2012
You know i despise this contest, they never gave me a chance at all, they just dropped me on they entry round.I had potential but this contest wrecked it.I had a chance. but i will not fall to the Void.i will return someday.at least you got his far.AKARA VS ERA .DEMAZ!
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
Horus/Akara's back is a bit flat, but other than that, you've got two great mocs here. Good luck!
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
I am in Awe... I definently feel you did better than me, I really liked how you put the story in complete word form. I could see the emotions behind the battle, kudos. And the MOCs, just wow, you really captured the whole Gods concept and the design are beautiful and seem a whole more stable than mine. Even though I miss Karda's yellow color scheme, for a god like Set, the gold is a must. All in all, An Amazing entry, Good luck to you!
  April 29, 2012
Quoting Akara the Great
:D Knowing you are a Riordan fan explains a lot :) I read those books too and that's why I enjoy Greek mythology so much. Great mocs!
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  April 29, 2012
Quoting 12Lego Greendude Nice job on these Akara! I wonder who will win? Nice use of the Egyptian gods Set and Horus! Do you like Egyptian mythology? XD
Well, seeing as that I got Mythology for my birthday and I'm a Riordan fan..
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
Nice job on these Akara! I wonder who will win? Nice use of the Egyptian gods Set and Horus! Do you like Egyptian mythology? XD
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
I have to say, I really like both of these titans, and you certainly did much better than I did. The only thing I would truly recommend changing is the back. It looks a tad bit bare, but that may only be me. Anyways, other than that, these titans are simply amazing.
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
Dude these are some insane titans!
 
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