"Log 1 - Jedi Order"
-- This is Grand Master Yurren Relm contacting all Jedi. For to long we have sat back whilst evil has ruled the Galaxy. It is time we make a stand!
There is a small Sith Training Post on the Outer Rim World of Alzoc III. It is a snow covered world and its resources are few. Nevertheless it is a symbol for the Empire in the Outer Rim and as a good a time as any to reveal ourselves.
Padawans. Your task is to engage the Sith Acolytes and protect the Masters. If you can lead some of them back to the light then do so. If not then kill them, the Empire cannot be allowed to grow.
The Council Members and myself will lead the attack on the Sith Trainers. We must destroy them and their dark teachings before they can taint any other young Force Sensitive!
Good luck, and may the Force be with you. --
About this creation
The whole vig.
Acolite and Sig
5/10 for creatvity. You have a pretty nice Idea with the mountain pass. 7/20 for technique. You should have some more details in there. 10/10 for figs and 8/10 for mission acuraccy where is the outpost at? 30/50 is your score