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"Log 1 - Sith Empire" -- This is an urgent call to all nearby Sith Lords. Alzoc III is under attack, repeat we are under attack by Jedi! We need acolytes to help evacuate the planet whilst the Dark Masters engage the Jedi! We must crush this rebellion now! For the Empire! -- "End log"
About this creation
"Log of Darth Nihlus- I woke up early to the sound of an alarm. I thought it was another drill, but then I heard fighting. I got the other acolytes up and started heading for the rendezvous point, when suddenly two Jedi attacked. I told the younger acolytes to continue while I handled it. They were very poorly trained, so I easily defeated one. The other one stayed out of my reach. I will continue to fight for the sith. End log."


An overview of the whole mountain.


My sith sig-fig killing a jedi, giving the acolytes time to escape.


An acolyte going down a tunnel.


An acolyte on the ground.


An acolyte going around the mountain.


An acolyte at the prearranged meeting place.


A Mon Calamari Jedi trying to get the jump on me.


Birds eye view.


The minifigures all lined up.



Comments

 I like it 
  April 28, 2012
Lookin' good!
  April 25, 2012
your score 1/10
 I made it 
  April 25, 2012
Quoting Michael Rutherford Lots of action with the minifigs, but you could use them even more. The guy getting stabbed is great, and the dude way up on top is interesting, but the others are just sort of standing around. Maybe pose them running, or grabbing weapons? It would make this action scene even more dynamic. Your presentation is ok, but again, you can do much better. The picture of the person going down the tunnel is very blurry, but the next photo is very sharp. The bottom line is that you should never put up a blurry pic (unless it's part of a forced perspective project). You can review all your pictures before posting, so just pull out the blurry ones. Your use of the white slopes to crate the mountain environment is effective, but again, go for more! If you have them, more slopes would make your environment even stronger. Good job. Attack!
i dont have more, b/c i am a TFOL
 I like it 
  April 25, 2012
Impressive, most impressive, but you are not a sith yet... oh wait, you are. :P Terrain could use work, great outpost, good story, great lightsaber.
  April 25, 2012
Lots of action with the minifigs, but you could use them even more. The guy getting stabbed is great, and the dude way up on top is interesting, but the others are just sort of standing around. Maybe pose them running, or grabbing weapons? It would make this action scene even more dynamic. Your presentation is ok, but again, you can do much better. The picture of the person going down the tunnel is very blurry, but the next photo is very sharp. The bottom line is that you should never put up a blurry pic (unless it's part of a forced perspective project). You can review all your pictures before posting, so just pull out the blurry ones. Your use of the white slopes to crate the mountain environment is effective, but again, go for more! If you have them, more slopes would make your environment even stronger. Good job. Attack!
 I like it 
  April 24, 2012
Good, 2/5
 I made it 
  April 23, 2012
Quoting Harry 863 Nice build! poor jedi :(
die jedi die
 I made it 
  April 23, 2012
Quoting Harry 863 Nice build! poor jedi :(
die jedi die
 I like it 
  April 23, 2012
Nice build! poor jedi :(
 
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