Jedi are amazing creatures. They mature quicker than any other beings.
By the time a Jedi is ready to be chosen as a Padawan they have already found friends for life.
Ian- take that K'urrin.
K'urrin- You can't beat me.
He already knows who to trust.
Ian- take that Ahsoka.
Ahsoka- at least give me a challenge.
Some Jedi even fall in love by this time.
Ian- I'll go easy on you.
Harrah- Don't you always.
Harrah- Pinned ya.
Rom- Today you will be chosenby a jedi master who will train you.
Human Jedi- Ian
Mon Calamari Jedi- Harrah
Ian- I can't believe we both got picked today.
Harrah- Neither can I. What is your masters name?
Ian- Horran. Yours?
I like the duel, but there are some items in the picture that don't belong to the MOC. I know how hard it is to find an empty place in my room, because There are thousands of bricks lying on the floor. That's why I built a seperate room for my story-MOCs (out of white paper) and it really helped me out. Now there is nothing in the background and the photos are easily to edit. It would look something like this, but with 3 sides instead of 1:
Ouch my eyes! The blurr! The blurr! It haunts your photos like a Sith Lord. Tripod, two hands, macro setting...you must kill the blurr. Attack!
I like it
April 22, 2012
Ok, I said I was going to try and help you and I will now. Firstly great creation and storyline.
Things which need to improve/ things that would help make this better: Blurry pictures - some of the pictures are a bit blurry. You can make the photos less blurry by adding Macro (The flower symbol on your camera). Hold your camera tightly with two hands and try to stay as still as possible. Another thing to make this better is to add a background like I said in the Beginners Guide. You could use a T- Shirt, a Bed Sheet, you could use a photo editing soft ware or go outside and take your photos in the grass, sand or whatever sort of climate you live in. Another thing you could do to make your creations noticed is add your Lego creations in to groups and add to the conversation. Hopefully that was helpful (At least I hope). I will add you as a favourite so, that I can keep track of your new progress. Carry on building.
Hey, Not to be rude, but you really need to work on the photos, and the build needs one work too, but the pictures REALLY annoy me, if you wish to get noticed, you need to make your photos less blurry. Though some of your photos are good, I find your creation not "smiley" worthy because of the pics, please work on them! Thank you