This is the start of a good entry to the contest but it just seems incomplete. For Theme your score is 2/5 because it is not really a tower at all it is more like two Vignettes on top of each other. If perhaps there was some continuity or connection between the first and second level I would have scored a little higher. For the Pictures your score is 3/5. They are clear and well lit, but the background you used is distracting and takes away from the MOC itself. For Build your score is 7/15. Like I mentioned earlier the MOC just needs to have some connection between the levels to tell a story, how did the ninja get there, what is he after, etc… Also, it is lacking in details that set other MOCs at a higher level. Now there are some things I like, for example on the first level and in the first picture the Ninja completely blends in and at a first glimpse you don’t even notice him. I think this is a wonderful concept and can be built on. Your overall score is 12/25. Your concepts are strong once you get the execution down you will be a force to be reckoned with.
Okay, cool idea and pretty decent build. 5/5 for theme. It's a tower on an 8x8. 3/5 for pictures. They're mostly clear, although some are slightly blurry and the background melds with the actual creation. 6/15 for build. I feel it's fairly haphazard and lacking in consistency. Still, there was some cool stuff like that arm. Total: 14/25 Not bad, but could be improved. Good luck with the other judges!