i think you should try and look at some real battleships for reference, like the iowa class battleship.

Your colors look good, and I like what you did with the bow shape, but the proportions are off. The bridge is almost bigger than the rest of the ship. I think that you should consider either making the ship very large to accommodate minifigures, or else build the whole thing in micro scale and just try to replicate the shape of a battle ship.

Your colors look good, and I like what you did with the bow shape, but the proportions are off. The bridge is almost bigger than the rest of the ship. I think that you should consider either making the ship very large to accommodate minifigures, or else build the whole thing in micro scale and just try to replicate the shape of a battle ship.