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Man Hunt Part 6: War
In association with LukeSC, ChrisOtron, and Instant Noodles Photoshopping, Legofreak2444 presents Man Hunt: Part 6.
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Jordan: I gotta find a way out of here.

*Crack*
Jordan: Huh? There's something on the ceiling.

*Crack-bam!*
Jordan: Agh!

Jordan: Cossy! Oh man, I'm glad you guys found me.
Cossy: You'd better be, you don't know how hard it was to get Ossum to put a jet-pack on.

Jordan: Ossum, your flying!
Ossum: D-Don't remiiiind meee!

Cossy: We gotta get out of here, we might have set off an alarm when we broke through the roof.

Jordan: Right. Let's go!

Ossum: Oof!
Cossy: I got this.

*Bam!*

(Outside)

Jordan: Oof! Nice landing Ossum.
Ossum: Hey, this wasn't my idea.
Bogi: Hey guys, the Makuta are coming!

Krizan: Charge!

*Bang, clash!*
Jube: Whoa momma!
Zam: Guys, guys! The Strix is coming! Run!

Jordan: Let's get outta here!

Bogi: Ahhhh!

Strix: SSSCCCREEEAACCCHHH!!

Jordan: Ya!
*Slice*
Strix: SCCREEEee--yaaa!

Cossy: Let's move!
Ossum: Jube, leggo!
Jube: Ahhh!


-Later-

Destrin: What happened here??
Strix: The Toa, Captain. They got away with the prisoner!

Destrin: You let them escape?
Strix: N-no my Captain...

Destrin: You let them get away!

Makuta: Captain, captain! A message from Teridax!

Makuta: He says: 'The time is soon...

Makuta: '...Rally your men'.

Strix: ...C-Captain?
Destrin: Ready the troops.
Strix: W-What?

Destrin: Ready the Makuta for war or you'll see the flash of this blade yet!


-Elsewhere-

Tank: We got away...
Jordan: But just barely.

Jordan: I met a Makuta there, his name was Destrin. I knew him back on the other world...

Cossy: Destrin? What did he say?
Jordan: He told me of a portal. A portal that would open soon.

Jordan: I think they plan to return to the Spherus Magna, they plan to escape and rule over Spherus Magna once again!

Marra: But how do you know this Jordan?
Jordan: Destrin told me, he told me of Teridax's plans.

Jordan: The portal will be opened, and then their army will march through and wreak havoc over the plains.

Jordan: We must stop them. If they get through it will be the end of the reign of Mata Nui as we know it.

Zam: Then why are we sitting here? We have work to do!

Jube: Ah well Bogi, they don't need us here.

Jordan: Actually, we might have some use of your upgrades...
Bogi: YAAAYZ!
Jube: Meshgriblesmghm....

Jube: Well I gotta do something too!
Jordan: We'll see Jube.

Jordan: Hey Cossy, I was wondering, how did you know Destrin?
Cossy: Destrin? Oh me and him were good mates. We actually ended up here together.

Jordan: Really?
Cossy: Oh ya, we were the two Toa who went in search of Marra after she disappeared.

Jordan: And you were killed.

Cossy: Yep. Nexus snuck up right behind us.

Cossy: If I ever see him again I'm going to--
Jordan: Wait, did you say Nexus?

Cossy: Uh, yeah.
Jordan: Of course! The portal can not be opened from the inside, so they must have a man on the outside, Nexus!

Cossy: If that's true then Teridax must have gotten to him. Something happened...

Jordan: Nexus must have died somehow and then when he came here Teridax got to him!
Cossy: But then how could Nexus be up on Spherus Magna? He died, and the portal wasn't opened...

Jordan: There might be more than one way to get out of this place...

To be concluded...

I know this chapter wasn't as 'exciting', but don't worry there will be more soon. ;)
C&C Appreciated.



Comments

 I like it 
  May 23, 2012
this is so awesome. As soon as i heard "The Makuta are coming!" the first thing that popped in my head was: "The British are coming!". Hmmph, now I want to make cool Bionicles so I can make a comic ;D.
 I like it 
  April 15, 2012
The story has taken an interesting turn! Can't wait to see more :D
 I like it 
  April 7, 2012
Awesome!! can't wait for the next chapter!!
 I like it 
  April 7, 2012
Pretty good. The suspense!
 I like it 
  April 6, 2012
Nice story!
 I like it 
  April 6, 2012
Very nice story!
 I like it 
  April 6, 2012
Oooh, I love the story line. great work!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Suspicious Chicken
  April 4, 2012
Very nice chapter, I can't wait for the next one. The cliff hanger was kinda nice.
 I like it 
  April 4, 2012
Nice episode! Did a cat claw claw tour background? Because that stuff is my floor and my stupid cats claw it all the time.
 I like it 
  April 4, 2012
Nice! The suspence! (I think i spelled that right)
 I like it 
  April 4, 2012
Great!
 I like it 
  April 4, 2012
Awesome. :D
 I like it 
  April 4, 2012
A cool part, dude! Loving it all, but i have one question: the original Destrin was a Toa, and in this story you said he turned evil. er... How does that not make him a Toa and make him a Makuta?
Legofreak2444 ~
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  April 3, 2012
Interesting it is!
Legofreak2444 ~
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NoWhereMan .
  April 3, 2012
As for action, not too exciting. That was a good plot twist though. I didn't see it coming.
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
It wasn't the most exciting installation in the series, but I understand parts like this are neccassary. I'm looking forward to the next episode.
 I made it 
  April 3, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Interesting! Still, it would be nice to know why Destrin became evil, you don't just turn them evil for no reason. I think you should've developed his growing lust for power which made him turn evil rather than just announce: Hey Jordan, I'm working with Makuta cause it pays better! :P Other thing that slightly bothers me is this entire after life sorta place, it's original and interesting, but a little confusing. Still, overall a great episode!
Sorry, I'm trying to explain everything as best I can. ;) Thanks for the comment!
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
Very cool! I hope I get to beat up somebody important...
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
Awesome! I love the last shot, it was smart to end with.
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
Great story line!
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
I concur with Texan and Manahan, but Cody is right as well- but I guess like with all good shows and comics, there are some action episodes, and some story episodes, y'know?
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
very interesting.
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
A little boring, but it fills in the gaps. Nice work!
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
Interesting! Still, it would be nice to know why Destrin became evil, you don't just turn them evil for no reason. I think you should've developed his growing lust for power which made him turn evil rather than just announce: Hey Jordan, I'm working with Makuta cause it pays better! :P Other thing that slightly bothers me is this entire after life sorta place, it's original and interesting, but a little confusing. Still, overall a great episode!
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
sweet chapter!
 I like it 
  April 3, 2012
awesome dude
 
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