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A disturbance in the Force...
Alternate Star Wars
About this creation
2012 MocAthalon
Team: A Moctley Crew
Category: 9. Alternate Star Wars

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One will often meet his destiny on the path he takes trying to alter it.

Episode III
Obi Wan Kenobi left for the Utapau system to engage general Grievous. Anakin remains in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. chancellor Palpatine summons Anakin and reveals himself as a Sith Lord.

text is under each picture

Jedi Temple :

Anakin: "... must save Padmé...is there really a power to save one from dying ?"
The fear of loss is a path to the dark side...
Anakin: "must remember Master Yoda's teachings..."


Yoda: "Great care you must take, your visions, realized they will be, when efforts to avoid you make. Embrace the light side of the Force you must."

Chancellor's Office :

Palpatine: "If you wish to become a complete and wise leader, you must embrace a larger view of the force"
Anakin: "You're the Sith Lord!"


Palpatine: "Listen to me anakin"


Palpatine: "I can help you, I can save the ones you love"


/ / / FlashBack / / /
Invisible hand, Count Dooku defeated, Obi Wan unconscious

Palpatine: "Leave him..."

/ / / / / /



Anakin: "No! you..."




Palpatine: "Don't trust the Jedi Anakin, they will expell you from the order if they find out"



Anakin: "...you endangered padmé...you wanted her dead, ordered her dead..."



Palpatine: "I can feel your anger, don't be afraid to use it, join my side and together, we can save ..."


Anakin: "Nooooo !"


Anakin charges at Palpatine, and Palpatine feels his anger, too much to control


Having disarmed Palpatine Anakin uses the Force to grab and hold him in the air.
Anakin: "you can't save anyone, you can't even save yourself!"
Palpatine: "I..hurgh... then kill me and embrace the darkside...you cannot escape your destiny..."


Anakin: "I will never join the dark side..."
Anakin releases Palpatine and Master Windu enters.
Anakin: "I will turn you over to the Jedi Counsel..."
Master Windu: "You did the right thing Anakin, you truly are the one who's to bring balance to the..."
????: "For the republic !!!!!"


TAKATAKATAKATAKA
A most peculiar clone trooper storms the chancellor's office, emptying his (her?) weapons against everyone in the vicinity.


Commander Pink: "Uhuh


And THAT is how minority groups within the Clone Army gained recognition ;)
oh yeah, and Anakin brought balance to the Force or something.

The End

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I hope you managed to understand what Yoda said in the beginning :S
The big Idea was to make a serious story, which abruptly ends by a most absurd happening, I think I succeeded in that, I focused a lot on making my alternate story fit in the movie. I chose to jump in just before Anakin turns to the Dark Side.

some extra photo's


a Set-up I didn't use eventually, would have complicated the story too much.














This got blogged on EB starwas homepage



Comments

 I like it 
  November 4, 2012
For the Repuplic.....(shooting my flower guns) plantaplantaplantaplantatatatatatatataa
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  November 4, 2012
See? That's the difference between an ordinary builder and an awesome builder: when I saw those details on the floor, I thought" too much hassle".
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  November 4, 2012
Quoting Nicholas Nuwer very awsome moc you made here
Thanks, I want to make some more in this style
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  November 4, 2012
very awsome moc you made here
  July 20, 2012
If all of this happened...it would actually be really good...well except for the abrupt ending.
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  April 11, 2012
Oh yes, I forgot to say that I also love Yoda's legs, brilliant Lego work!
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  April 11, 2012
Very cool and funny. Your floors look so cool, I love that technique. Also love Yoda's sitting room, especially his wee chair and the window shades/blinds.
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  April 11, 2012
wow! awesome sebeus!
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  April 10, 2012
Great MOC, and an interesting alternative story :)
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  April 3, 2012
I saw Yoda's legs and I was all like, "W-W-W-W-WOAH, HOLD UP; HOW DID HE DO THAT?" And after a second look, I saw what you did, and now I'm all, "That's pretty smart, yo; bonus points for mad technique skillz"
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  April 3, 2012
Brilliant! You are so very skilled at building, those photos look almost like they were taken from the film :-) Well done!
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  April 2, 2012
What a plot twist! XD
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  April 1, 2012
Man, do I like this. Your scenery is excellent. The flooring is so Star Warsy, (I have come to love this adjective), that you wouldn't even need figs to define the environment. On top of such great building, you have exposed the Kaminoan's dirty little secret in their cloning;)
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  April 1, 2012
Ha ha! Epic story and beautiful MOC. :D
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  March 30, 2012
Such amazing backdrops to an extremely funny story :D Great stuff man ;) Good luck with other things :D
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  March 27, 2012
Every set is breath-taking and very accurate! And, of course, the twist at the end is unexpected and pretty funny! Great work!
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  March 26, 2012
Lol, great ending. Nice building too.
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  March 25, 2012
What amazing work!
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  March 25, 2012
The pink clone LOL.I'm not a judje but I'd give you a five!
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  March 25, 2012
The pink clone LOL.I'm not a judje but I'd give you a five!
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  March 25, 2012
Priceless! Score = 5
 I like it 
  March 23, 2012
Your score = 5
 I like it 
  March 23, 2012
I like this alternative, especially the part with the pink clone! That gave the whole thing something unexpected.
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  March 23, 2012
Great sets with a sweet bit of randomness to round things off. Well played.~H
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  March 23, 2012
Those sets are brilliant - the floors and seats have been mentioned plenty below, but I also like the detail of the louvres on the windows in the scenes with Yoda - very clever. The commander Pink ending is genius too. Well done and good luck with your scores!
Sebeus I
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Vladimir R.
  March 22, 2012
Flower blasters?? Well why not? Awesome build with funny-ending story.
Sebeus I
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White Knight
  March 22, 2012
Incredible !>.....well done
  March 22, 2012
Score = 5
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  March 22, 2012
Impressive architecture! Commander Pink is still significant, worth of three snaps and a 'pew pew' ! XD
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  March 22, 2012
You had me the whole time with your gorgeous flooring, and then you slapped me upside the head with the Pink clone commander. LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO Score= 5
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  March 22, 2012
May the force be with you!
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  March 22, 2012
Haha! I love suprise endings. This one made me laugh... I think everyone else in the room thought I was crazy XD
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  March 22, 2012
Doesn't get much more "alternate" that this! :D Amazing work! All the SNOT work and details are incredible. Here's hoping for three more "5"s!
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  March 22, 2012
And just whatever happened to the Republic's "Don't ask, don't tell" policy? Seriously, great builds, great story (and then... whatever that was at the end... haha). Overall, worthy of the coveted 5 points ~ Chris.
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  March 22, 2012
lol!
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  March 22, 2012
Excellent work on some of those sets! There are some brilliant details in there. Score: scraping up a 5
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  March 22, 2012
hahaha! That's brilliant! I did NOT see that ending coming! Great work and amazing sets! Well done! --Blast--
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  March 22, 2012
Lol, magnificent! I must admit I DID NOT see that coming at all :D
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  March 22, 2012
I was expecting that same old same old Star Wars story and then BOOM! Funny story and amazing builds mate!
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  March 22, 2012
Quoting MCLegoboy ! The story is okay for me, but the build for everything else is amazing! The designs on the floor, the columns, the whole build is great. I want some of those friends sets now, those accessories can fit into the clone hemet peg holes. Great.
The pink bow is from the old lego Belville, which was also a girl theme
Sebeus I
Camden Moffet
  March 21, 2012
Impressive build, hilarious story! Nice job, man.
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  March 21, 2012
OH man, that was hilarious! This should have been the central alternate timeline to begin with!
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  March 21, 2012
I'm not into Star Wars, but still, this is a very well done MOC. 5/5
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  March 21, 2012
I bet Commander Pink is really Padme. Anyway, great builds! I really like the floor patterns!
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  March 21, 2012
The story is okay for me, but the build for everything else is amazing! The designs on the floor, the columns, the whole build is great. I want some of those friends sets now, those accessories can fit into the clone hemet peg holes. Great.
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  March 21, 2012
Lol, nice. Great idea to ruin a serious story at the end, the pink clone had me thinking clone kiddie :)
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  March 21, 2012
I wish those exact events would have happened, because Yoda and Obi Wan live, and thats the important thing. :D
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  March 21, 2012
That was totally unexpected, but made me laugh. Every clonies dream..
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  March 21, 2012
That clone took me completely by surprise haha
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  March 21, 2012
Hahaha! Randomnimity is the spice of life so they say... I think...
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  March 21, 2012
Well I can honestly say I didn't expect THAT to happen. :)
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  March 21, 2012
LOL. Hilarious. :D
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  March 21, 2012
Yoda always brings back great memories!
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  March 21, 2012
Hahaha! This is fabulous, bro! It doesn't get much crazier/well-built/original than this! Go Moctley Crew!!!
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  March 21, 2012
excellent, the places are built very well. The ending is hilarious! you accomplished what you set out to do. 5/5
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  March 21, 2012
Quoting James Rupolo this is great! i love the chairs in yodas mediataion place in the temple! mind if i use the design some time?
Go ahead ;)
Quoting Senator. Chincilla . What on earth just happened!?!?!? ROFL!
It's not on Earth, It's on coruscant ;)
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  March 21, 2012
Those floors are AMAZING! True art there!
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  March 21, 2012
Sebeus, you are the MASTER of sci-fi buildings! This is crazy good! All the subtle floor and wall details really should boost your score. I must admit I did not expect this to end how it did :D Great build!
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  March 21, 2012
this is great! i love the chairs in yodas mediataion place in the temple! mind if i use the design some time?
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  March 21, 2012
this is great! i love the chairs in yodas mediataion place in the temple! mind if i use the design some time?
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  March 21, 2012
What on earth just happened!?!?!? ROFL!
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  March 21, 2012
Gorgeous sets, so life like to the movie. I always thought that pink flowers will solve everything in the end. Well done and good luck!
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  March 21, 2012
Very impressive. :D
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  March 21, 2012
Some really nice sets here, Dude! Cool action, but that Flower Clone should get you some points for originality, THAT's for sure... Good luck!
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  March 21, 2012
Hahaha, did not see that end coming! And the floors were spectacular, really quite clever. This is awesome!
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  March 21, 2012
Those floors...
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  March 21, 2012
Clever Jedi stools.
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  March 21, 2012
Lol, I was going to give you a 5 anyway since I love your flooring technique and the posing was excellent, but then the clone trooper rolled in shooting flowers and I just about died laughing. Excellent work.
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  March 21, 2012
Excellent job, like always:D
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  March 21, 2012
Great floor, great surprise, GREAT EVERYTHING! :)
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  March 21, 2012
Awesome work!!!! Commander pink is great
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  March 21, 2012
I agree with LukeClarence! Just impressive!
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  March 21, 2012
Lol funny and very awesome!!!
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  March 21, 2012
Wow, impressive! The floor design with SNOT and tiles is amazing, as are all the wall details. I also really like the blinds in Yoda's room. Great work!
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  March 21, 2012
Very nice, love the details on the floor, it all looked and felt very star wars.
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  March 21, 2012
Haha, lol, I remember that commander from a looooong time ago... great build Sebeus 1!
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  March 21, 2012
Quoting JS Can A lot of amazing work on the floors and I love Yoda's chair. Great building. Surprised I haven't seen Commander Pink with all the custom clones posted on this sit.
:P well, he's not exactly a "suitable" clone for the republic's army to show off with, considering the 'conservative' vision of the army if you know what I mean :P
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  March 21, 2012
Fantastic build, there are so many great details here!
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  March 21, 2012
A lot of amazing work on the floors and I love Yoda's chair. Great building. Surprised I haven't seen Commander Pink with all the custom clones posted on this sit.
 
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