For the Ideas of March Category. A powerhungry Officer highers an assasin to kill the next the only officer higher than he...
About this creation
Officer: Welcome, I assume you know why you are here.
Assasin: Yes, you are going to breif me.
Officer: Yes, you are to kill Commanding officer Brets, he will be taking his daily walk through the forest looking for game. He is not in armor, he is in traditional Elven hunting clothes. The items behind you are your reward.
The assasin walked over to the pile of gold and poked a skeleton with his axe.
Assasin: Do I get this too?
Officer: That is the corpse of the last man who crossed me.
Assasin: I see.
Minuets later, the assasin had climbed a tree and layed in ambush, waiting for the man named Brets. And soon he saw the man, walking, looking for game. Once Brets passed the tree the assasin was in, the assasin jumped on him.
With a quick swing he brought down his axe and killed Brets. The instance he did this, an arrow shot out from the bushes and killed him. The officer stepped out of the foliage, smiling.
I (at first) had this in mind as a bunch of scens, then I later changed it to pictures of the dios.
For me, it just needed... more. You had a great premise and it looked like you started to put in some nice stuff in the builds (that flower/plant thing was really nice) but overall just fell a bit short. Still not a "bad" entry by any means. Score, just scrapping up to a 3 pointer. ~ Chris.
Overall I'd say your concept came off quite well. The one thing I would of added is a parting shot of the corrupt officer standing over the slain corpse of the assassin for some dramatic effect. Also what is the bluish-white thing in the corner of that last frame? I'm not sure if it's supposed to be a flower or something splashing in the water but it looks nice either way.