I say this to a lot of popular/good Bionicle MOCers. Make a portfolio for instructions of requested designs. I'm thinking of doing it aswell. Thanks!

So how would you like to do this? Should I make something like an advice-comic or should I just tell you how to improve your MoCs?

That would be helpful; knowing I like your designs. I've been doing this on my iphone so there is no "reply" button.

So do you want some advice or an instruction for one of my designs? Just tell me :). Amazing you idolized me, thanks! And to reply, just press "reply" under the message you want to quote.

@Vored3 (don't know how to reply) I just was looking for a design as mine I've tried are pitiful. Nothing in particular. You are one of the few mocists I idolize and I am obliged for you to respond to a comment of mine. Sorry for the late reply.

I already found one, but hasn't done much yet, so I decided so make some blood-effects myself. If you can do some special elemental-power effects, that would be great!

Wow, excellent MOC! I might be able to help you with photo-editing for your story, but I've never made special effects before with Photoshop. If you can't find someone with more experience, I'd be glad to try it with some effects.

Thanks for the compliment! Sure I can give you some advice. Do you need help on e specific MoC or just generally?

Vorred 03, since you make the best femocs on the pages (in my opinion),can you give me advice?

He told me about it already... He sang like a caged bird XD ~12lego

You could, but remember that he isn't the plot leader, and it would maybe be more interesting for him to see that when we have played more?

Hey, remember the plot info I told you pertaining to Fexore? Do you think I should tell 12Lego, just cuz he's the group leader?

I'll look what I can do about the thighs. But Inika feet or any armor on the shins would destroy the "feminine" look of her, I think ;)

You could replace the Inika feet on her thighs with metru ones and add the other inika feet on the shins. Just a suggestion :)

Huge... somehow, yes, but I still need to work on the legs, they look too hollow... but thanks for commenting!

And whats wrong with paint? :p anyway, cool Moc, I like the idea, the only thing is that her thighs are HUGE!! Anyway, great work :)

I really do like this MoC! The idea of building a Bionicle that is almost completely white is great. I also like her wings, even if they're very easy built. You even did great work at her chest - a part that seems not to be facile (I'm no MoCCer, just to impatient for it), judging from the fact that many chest-designs are not that good in my opinion... - Greetings, GreenTavis - PS: Last but not least I wanted to praise your background. It makes your MoCs look very professional. - Keep on the good work!

lol white moc in white background XD

I like the white.

This is Amazing, The way the body flows is incredible... :)

Lego could take a "free lesson" from you on those wings for the Batman superhero Fig. His cape doesn't get it done in my opinion.

Basic, but nice. :) Love the torso at least.

Looks awesome, great work on making it nearly all-white while not looking blindingly bright. Also, "undead warriors and another one". Hmmm... curious. :P

This is a great upgrade, although I agree with Cody about the arms. While I think more custom designs for the limbs would suit her well, filling some of the pin holes left on the standard limb pieces would do the trick too! Still, this is overall excellent! :D

Absolutely amazing!! I love how you made it completley white!! you did a good job with making it look feminine also! Great work all around!!

she looks like a angel with the full white body, she looks like she is glowiinnggg

Awesome, but the all-white makes for awkward photos :D

The evolution of the female... a fine story of your building triumph. She has well shaped hips and long legs and flattering chest ornaments! Definitely a female... bravo! :)

Nice work on the torso! The legs look alright, but the arms are a bit too sparse and gap-filled for my taste. Perhaps some system or Hero Factory pieces could smooth them out a bit.

Very nice girl. I like her wings.

epic it is anngel right? ftw. mind checking me out