Agent X is a separatist assassin (rank-Commander). In this episode you will see him in a very dangerous mission (hint- It involves Asajj).
warning- THIS IS MY FIRST COMIC, LOTS OF MISTAKES, LIGHTING INCONSISTENT, ETC ETC ETC. BEAR WITH ME, THANKS
About this creation
x: "oh, I'm here"
x:"hands up officer"
officer: "ok, ok"
bammmm
officer "pppppppppppppppppppuffffff....pssssssssssssssssssssssss:
clone :"there he is !!!!"
x:"what was that ?"
x:"Damn clones"
x:"where did this computer come from ?"
x:"never mind, i'll just use it to activate the elevator to reach floor 2".
computer:"well done, you may enter the elevator/ peep."
x;"secret code...mmm..ahhham, the code is TV1T.."
At second floor
x:"hhm..now I need to find Asajj"
x:"where could she......" BOMMMZZZZZZZ...
x:"??????????????????????????????????"
commander :"Can you tell us where are the secret plans ?"
Asajj :"NEVER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Commander :"trooper, activate the full power of the zapper 1000...!"
Trooper :"Yes sir"
BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ,,,
Asajj SCREAMS
X:"Oh, God, I should rescue her"
x: "SURPrise !!!"
Commander :"ouch, my back"
x:"hands up"
clone trooper :"yes ok ok"
x:"what happened to my gun ?"
Savage:"Oh, its you. Count Dooku sent me to help you"
x:"ok, you'll get her sabers and I'll get her"
x:"are you ok ?"
asajj:"(sigh)...yes, i think so"
Savage :"ok, now I need to find her lightsabers"
Savage :"not that..not that..here they are !"
savage :"got them"
x:"good, now let's get out of here"
system ; ALARM ALARM, PRISONER ESCAPED...PPPEEEPPPE"
THE END
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July 18, 2012 |
Quoting Joseph Shaw
The photos are a little blurry, but other than that, really good! 5/5
thx for the comment!!!!! :) |
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July 11, 2012 |
The photos are a little blurry, but other than that, really good! 5/5 |
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March 29, 2012 |
Quoting Noah the Lego Apprentice
Not bad for a first comic, but maybe a little less cussing.
my comment didnt show up so repeating. thanks for the visit and comment ! i would like to know what you mean by cussing, maybe I can correct or improve. |
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March 28, 2012 |
Quoting Profesor Sketch
Nice job.I lile the plot overall and ventress gets captured haja.Pretty humoristic too.And as Harry said,you'll get the hang of it pretty darn good.
thanks ! i love your maul mask, how did you do the eyes ? your comment is thoughtful, so i hope to get your feedback down the road. ps if u have some idea for next ep feel welcome to let me know... |
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March 27, 2012 |
Not bad for a first comic, but maybe a little less cussing. |
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March 27, 2012 |
Nice job.I lile the plot overall and ventress gets captured haja.Pretty humoristic too.And as Harry said,you'll get the hang of it pretty darn good. |
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March 17, 2012 |
Quoting Harry 863
Nice first comic. it'll take a while before you get the right balace between everything but this is a really good first attempt.
thank you for visiting, yes I am a "rookie" here, although I do LEGO since I can remember myself...of course , but did u read the lines all the way and the story ? I think the story is pretty good. The build/photo can use a lot more work, I also need to get a new camera asap, but cant afford right now. |
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March 16, 2012 |
Nice first comic. it'll take a while before you get the right balace between everything but this is a really good first attempt. |
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March 14, 2012 |
Quoting Brick Engineer
Awesome but the only thing I don't like is the choice of characters.because I LOVE clones and sith.but assaj ventress is the only sith i don't like and the idea of clones dying never pleases me but anyway,cool story.
Glad you liked it, dont worry about the Jedi or the clones or the Republic, in chapter 2, Agent X is gonna join the Republic ....something funny will be there, I promise that much. thanks for your visit and comments ! |
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Awesome but the only thing I don't like is the choice of characters.because I LOVE clones and sith.but assaj ventress is the only sith i don't like and the idea of clones dying never pleases me but anyway,cool story. |
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March 10, 2012 |
Quoting Sgt Bently
Good clever story but the build needs some work. but overall pretty good!
thanks thanks thanks for coming in and fairly commenting ! I agree, the build and photography are less than satisfactory, and indeed i like the story more than anything ! I am new to all this and need to work a lot more, to reach your level,this is encouraging .
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Good clever story but the build needs some work. but overall pretty good! |
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