Like the others, I had difficulty understanding the scenario. I'm afraid I couldn't figure out what the driod parts and flames were indicating, in particular. On the up side, I thought the tank was solid in it's design and building. But, in general, the MOC felt somewhat hasty in its creation. Score of 2.
I have no idea what is going on here. Some nice building skills, but next time put in some effort to make sure your audience understands what's going on with your build. Whether that's through stronger building, or providing a backstory is up to you. Score= 2