About this creation
A Jedi truly is an amazing specimen.
Due to the high levels of training they mature at great speeds, far faster than any other child.
By the time a Jedi is ready to be chosen as a Padawan they have already found friends for life.
Shaak Ti: "Do try and keep your feet Hara."
Harash Soru: "Only if you plat fairly Shaak!"
He already knows who to trust.
Kit Fisto: "Almost had you Hara!"
Harash Soru: "Almost isn't good enough Kit!"
He already knows who to rely on when times are hard.
Obi-Wan Kenobi: "Shall I teach you elegance Hara?"
Harash Soru: "I might as well learn from a drunk Bantha!"
Some Jedi even fall in love by this time.
Harash Soru: "I'll try to go easy on you Nay."
Nayam Burl: "How kind of you, I wont however!"
Eeth Koth: "Yes you five really are quite remarkable. Your skills are very impressive and I have no doubt you will soon be selected by a Jedi Master. As for now, go and rest or study. May the Force be with you."
The class echoed a reply and wondered out of the training room, chatting happily with each other.
Eeth Koth: "Oh Hara! I meant to tell you, Master Yaddle is looking for you. I suggest you don't keep her waiting to long."
Hara bowed respectfully.
Harash Soru: "Of course not Master! I shall go and see her immediately."
Hara eventually found Yaddle waiting in a corridor outside the training room, he smiled as he approached.
Harash Soru: "Master! Please, forgive my lateness."
Yaddle: "Matter it does not young one. Time we have plenty of. Please, kneel."
Hara did as the Jedi Master asked.
Yaddle: "Who am I young one?"
Harash Soru: "You are Master Yaddle of the Jedi Council. A skilled warrior and a great diplomat."
Yaddle smiled as she drew her orange lightsaber.
Yaddle: "And now, also your Master I am. Harash Soru, by the will of the Force. By the right of the Council. Take thee I do, my Padawan to be."
Yaddle: "Rise."
Hara hurried to his feet, staring in disbelief.
Harash Soru: "Master... I don't..."
Yaddle: "Expected this you have for some time. Much discussion there was, but happened it has. Your friends go tell, talk later we can."
Hara smiled broadly.
Harash Soru: "Yes Master. And thank you!"
The balcony to Yoda's quarters, shortly after Yaddle takes Hara as her Padawan and Nayam Burl decides to leave the Jedi Order.
Yoda: "Setting the Sun is on another day. Setting is the Sun on one of your chapters hmm?"
Harash Soru: "Master, I... She's gone."
Yoda: "Difficult to accept it is. For the best it is."
Harash Soru: "But she was my best friend Master! You wouldn't understand"
Yoda: "Think you that Yoda has not known love hmm? Young I once was to. Loved I did once."
Harash Soru: "Really?"
Yoda: "Bad love is not. Dangerous it can be, difficult to control. Mean its is wrong, it does not. Besides, see Nay again, you know you will."
Hara nodded, feeling a new resolve building within him.
Harash Soru: "Yes you're right."
Suddenly Hara's comlink beeped.
Yaddle: "Hara, to my chambers come."
Yoda: "hmm, your first lesson, about to begin it is. Best not be late hmm?"
Harash Soru: "Yes Master, I will. And thank you!"
Hara hurried in to Yaddle's room.
Yaddle: "You are here? Good."
Harash Soru: "What am I to do Master?"
Yaddle: "Your bags pack, to Naboo for our first lesson we will go"
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June 12, 2012 |
Cool episode!! |
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February 28, 2012 |
Fascinating! Using Ahsoka's hairpiece for young Shaak Ti is very clever! It's also great that Eeth Koth appears in this episode! |
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February 27, 2012 |
Great job! I always wanted to find out Harash's Master! |
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February 27, 2012 |
awesome, I like the story |
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February 27, 2012 |
very nice i love these and all your comics |
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February 27, 2012 |
This is so interesting to see the whole story from the beginning! |
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February 27, 2012 |
harry this is a great story of his padawan life |
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February 27, 2012 |
Great job! The story line is shaping up to be quite interesting! And great job with Yaddle! |
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February 27, 2012 |
Another brilliant chapter :D Looking forward to seeing what happens with Hara's Master and what will happen on Naboo :D Great work ;) |
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February 27, 2012 |
Quoting Original Channel of MOCpages (Caleb)
Good job! I'm going to make an effort to actually follow this series. Have you seen mine yet btw?
Which one, your island locked one? |
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February 27, 2012 |
Quoting Gabe Martinez
Good job, I liked how some of the council masters were younglings. Is Hara going to come home to see his family dead or captured? Keep them coming!
You'll have to wait and see haha |
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February 27, 2012 |
Awesome work on the young jedi! Love the story! |
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February 27, 2012 |
I love the story and those jedi masters when they were childs. great work. |
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Vladimir R. February 26, 2012 |
Whoa....incredible story. And I also laughed when I realized that Yoda isnīt so short among padawans. :D :D |
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February 26, 2012 |
cool! i wanna see qui-gon jin with obi wan |
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February 26, 2012 |
Good job! I'm going to make an effort to actually follow this series. Have you seen mine yet btw? |
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February 26, 2012 |
Good job, I liked how some of the council masters were younglings. Is Hara going to come home to see his family dead or captured? Keep them coming! |
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February 26, 2012 |
Another great episode! |
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February 26, 2012 |
Nice! Yaddle looks awesome :) |
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February 26, 2012 |
Awww.I'm loving this story so much!Cant wait for next episode! |
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February 26, 2012 |
good job |
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February 26, 2012 |
good job |
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