Following the foiled attempt on Senator Ralone's life the Jedi continue their investigation to find the true culprit behind the attack....
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(Inside the Jedi Temple a day after the attack)
Boris-It just doesn't make any sense master...
Bartolo-I don't understand what's giving you so much trouble Boris. Obviously Count Dooku commissioned that assassin to intimidate the Senators into joining his cause, it's as simple as that.
Gulio-But Nar Shadda is a moon even if he wanted too the Hutts would never let it join the Separatists.
Boris-More importantly how did all those battle droids arrive undetected?
Bartolo-Well the only person with that authority is the Dock Manager....
Boris-You mean Fitze?
Bartolo-You aren't suggesting, Fitze let them in are you?
Boris-I might be, but either way I think it's time Gulio and I paid the commissioner a visit...
(In Fitze's office)
Fitze-Ah, hello! Come in, I must say your visit is most unexpected.
Boris-Yes, well we just have a few question surrounding the assassination attempt...
Fitze-Ah yes intimidation on the part of Dooku, it seems like a closed case to me.
Boris-But we wanted to know if you are in charge of port security how did all those battle droids arrive undetected?
Gulio-We just want to bring you back to the Temple for more talks...
Fitze-What?!! This is treasonous! I am a loyal....
Droid-Sir, here is the copy of the senator's message...
Gulio-What exactly are you doing copying that message? That is supposed to be delivered to the Senate!
Fitze-Well...umm...I... Oh, Blast! Droids Kill them!
(The droids aim their weapons as the Jedi's lightsabers flash to light)
Fitze-Alright you caught me Jedi! I let the droids in and helped the assassin!
Boris-But why!
Fitze-Becasue I was paid to! Enough talk, droids blast them!
(The blasts are easily deflected as Fitze puts on a jet-pack)
Fitze-See ya round Jedi!
(Gulio smashes a chair into the droid as Fitze blasts out the window)
Gulio-Boiris He's getting away!
(Boris deflects a blast back at the second droid destroying it)
(They rush to the window only to see Fitze fly out of sight)
Gulio-What now? We'll never catch him!
Boris-We'll have to contact the other Jedi, I think I have a hunch as to where he may be headed...
(Fitze lands at the abandoned landing pad where Drev Av'tem is waiting with more droids)
Drev-What took ya so long? I've been waiting here forever! Did you get those tapes of not?
Fitze-I have them right here, but we've got to leave now! Those Jedi are probably right behind me!
Drev-Wait a minute, what Jedi!
Fitze-Shhhh! Look clones!
Clone-Halt, What are you doing here this is a restricted area.
(An assassin droid aims at the clones)
Fitze-Well, you see officer....
(The first clone is shot as another droid opens fire)
Clone 2-What the...Look out!
(Drev blasts the last clone)
(Karlo and Alinta enter)
Drev-There, nothing to worry...
Karlo-Oh really what about us! You might have defeated those clones but you are no match for a true Jedi!
Alinta-Karlo, control yourself. Surrender now an you will not be harmed.
Drev-Jedi, Fitze do you know what the bounty on them today is? Well, it's just about enough to make us both rich! Droids kill the Jedi!
(Drev shoots at Alinta as Karlo swiftly decapitates the first droid)
(Alinta engages the second droid deflecting it's blast as Karlo staggers back from being hit by Drev's rifle)
Drev-Take this Jedi!
(Alinta destroys the second droid as Karlo and Drev face off)
Karlo-Did you really thing you could defeat a Jedi?
Drev-Did you really think I came unprepared! I am a master knife fighter and you're just a boy! Killing you is going to be too easy!
(They clash Drev's knife's clashing against Karlo's lightsaber)
Drev-You've fallen right into my trap)
(The droid opens fire right at Karlo)
(Karlo, his senses heightened by the force, jumps back evading the blast as Alinta corners Fitze)
Karlo-Enough of this! See the power of the Force!
(He lifts the transport and throws it right at the construction site)
(The transport explodes sending fire and shrapnel flying, the twist metal lets out a metallic groan)
(And falls right in front of the combatants)
(Enraged Drev smacks Karlo to the ground and aims a knife at his throat)
Drev-You pompous idiot! That was my ride off this rock! If I'm not leaving this dump then neither are you!
(Just then a man in black presses a pistol to Drev's neck)
Major Kalin-Don't move one inch! Drop the knife now!
(A second later Drev is in handcuffs)
Drev-What in the...Who are you people! What's going on!
Kalin-I'm Major Kalin of the Republic Intelligence Service and you are under arrest for three charges of attempted murder. Agent Iso take him away!
(Another agent handcuffs Fitze as well)
Fitze-What! What are you doing! Surely you don't believe I actually planned to betray the Republic! It was my intention all along to arrest him!
Meredith-Save it and my name isn't Shirley, it's Meredith, Chief and you've committed treason against the Republic. Ben take him away!
(As Fitze and Drev are led away Gulio and Boris arrive with a contingent of clones)
Boris-What did we miss something?
Meredith-Ah, Master Boris so good to see you again! Thank you for telling us where we could find this traitor it seems we were just in time!
Boris-Ivonna! It's been forever since...
Meredith-No now I am Agent Meredith Director of Republic Intelligence Services now that Fitze is gone, excuse me I must be going, but it has been a pleasure seeing you again farewell Master Boris!
Alinta-Republic Intelligence?
Boris-Yes, it seems Fitze was more than the simple dock manager we took him for, this conspiracy of his goes straight to the top! Luckily we were able to find the decoded version of the Senator's message. I have been assigned to go to Tattooine, apparently the Senator fled after a shadow crime lord virtually took over Nar Shadda and intelligence reports shows one operation is on Tattooine.
Gulio-As this war grows the need for Jedi on the front lines increases every day, Alinta you and Karlo have been assigned to stop the invasion of New Cov by the Separatist forces along with Master Ban Kazi's force, and I will be staying here on Coruscant for the time being.
Boris-Everyone has their assignment so let's move out and May the Force be with us...
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You got a nice story here. I like the way your linking it to real Star Wars canon. Keep it up. |
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Fantastic work Vandar! The photography is excellent as is the story. Your comics are my favourite :) |
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