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Island Locked II- Episode 02
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Previously...


After a horrible plane crash, several survivors wake on an island, following characters...




John the leader.





Caleb the 17 year old.





Travis the burn victim..




And Ross, the convict, who stole a gun.



Who attacked the survivors.



Who shot a man.




Killed him.




And who made a get-away.



Later that night, John was dragged into the bushes by a hidden attacker.



Caleb was soon attacked from behind, and dragged backward.








Now...



Caleb was dragged backward, pulled by a man, not one of the survivors from the plane.









The other man swung a club downward, aiming to knock Caleb out.









But Caleb rolled aside.









He jumped up and punched one of them in the face.









The other man swung again, but Caleb barely dodged it.









Caleb jumped forward while the man was still off balance.









Caleb tackled the man to the ground.









But the other had recovered; he shoved Caleb to the ground and punched him.









The other man clubbed Caleb in the face.









Just then Beckmann came up came into view.









This wasn't their first encounter with him.









The two men fled.









"What was that all about?" Caleb asked, inquiring about the men who had fled.

But just then there was a loud noise, they ran out to see what it was.







A man lay in the dirt.









Caleb and Beckmann's eyes followed the dirt trail.









John stood at the other side.









"What happened?" asked one of the survivors. The rest had gathered around.










"I'm- I'm not sure," John said, just as bewildered.






2 hours later



"Okay, we're not sure who attacked us," John addressed the survivors.









"But we searched the one we captured, and we found something."










He pulled out a piece of paper. "It's some kind of list," he said. He read down the list of names, and at the end he read out,"John Mickle, Caleb 'Beckmann', and Caleb Robinson Jr."









He stopped reading and looked at Caleb, "Your Dad's name is also Caleb Robinson."









"No- no it's Brian," he replied.









Just then, Beckmann walked away, without saying a word.









Caleb watched him as he left.









"Where do you think he went?" John said, also taking notice.

Caleb kept his eyes on Beckmann as he replied, "Let's find out!"







Just then, it began to rain.









The followed Beckmann to a small cluster of runes. They watched from a distance.









"What's happening?" John asked.









Caleb looked out from their hiding spot to see.









"Beckmann is talking to someone, I'm not sure who," Caleb said.










John looked out to see for himself.









The two men hadn't spoke yet.










"You son of a..." Beckmann paused, clearly angry. He calmed himself. "You left us, we where safe, and YOU left, you came back HERE! And now, you have the AUDACITY to bring ME here! "









"I didn't bring you here, you know that! And you know as well as I do who did!" the man shouted back.




John got a clear look at his face, his eyes widened, and his mind went back to 10 years ago, it was his father.

















Eric Mickle knocked on the door of the car.










"Finally!"









"We're here!" he said with a smile.













John pointed the other way and asked, "Dad, who are they?"










Eric looked over at the men.












"John, go behind the station, don't come out till they are gone."












John did as he was told, oblivious of the danger.












"What do you want? I though we already had this sorted, you two where gonna leave us alone," Eric said.











"Why are you here," he repeated.









The man lifted his hand up as he said, "The deal has changed, we're a little bit unhappy with the arrangement."








Suddenly, Eric's van was brought up by and invisible force and pushed backward.











"Woah!" said Eric, unsure of how the man had done it.










The man lifted his hand again, he swiped his hand to the right, like he was brushing an insect off a table.










"Ahhhhhhh!" Eric shouted as he was flung against the gas station wall.












He gasped, the breath taken out of him.












"What do you want?" he repeated.











The man with the strange ability turned to his partner and spoke, "You know what to do."












The man stepped back.











"Please! Don't!"










The other man brought his arms back, as if ready to through something at him.










"I wouldn't do that if I where you," said another man, as he stepped into view.











Eric ran over to them, releaved.









At first no one spoke.










But then, the man that looked exactly like Beckmann (aside from a slightly different looking jaw), brought up the roof from the petrol machine.











He brought his arms down, throwing it at them.










The roof went flying at them.













The other man next to Caleb and Eric brought his arms up.











The roof smashed into him, but instead of crushing him, it bent around him then burst into several pieces.












He looked at the other men. Caleb and Eric tried to gain their barrings.










Caleb suddenly jumped up and shot off fire, and lots of it.









But the man blocked it, simply by holding up his hand.












Caleb stopped, realizing it was futile.











Just then, the other man the looked like Eric, brought his arms back, the same way he had earlier.










When they came forward again, lightning sprang from them.












The electricity continued on, and struck the three men almost before they could react.









The two men looked at the others.










"We will spare you from death, only because you created us, and only this once. Your friend though, he will be less fortunate."










Eric was still not awake when his son came over to him.









John flipped him over with ease, looking back on it, he wondered how.












Eric got to his feet.

He helped Caleb up, and that's when they saw it.











The dead body- Decapitated. They had taken his powers.









John now remembered who Beckmann was; he was Caleb Robinson. The man in the stories his father had told him.









"What're going on now?" John asked.











"I'm not sure, let me get a better look," Caleb said.











The two men where even closer now, the argument was even more intense.











Caleb couldn't hear because of the rain, but he could see Beckamann (as he knew him) was angry. He grabbed the other man's shirt.











The other man punched Beckmann.











Caleb suddenly could stand it no longer, and blasted the other man off of his feet with his flames.









The other man hit one of the ruins, Caleb wondered how he had lived.











Beckmann watched him from a distance.











The man recovered though, and got to his feet.











Suddenly, the man was flying at Beckmann, traveling at an incredible speed.











He slammed into Beckmann and carried him forward.












Beckmann hit the ruins and fell to the floor.











The other man looked down on him.












He suddenly sprang forward.











And flew away.










To be continued....











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I really really want this to get on the explorers page, so please rate and comment. I would love advice to be given, or glitches to be pointed out, I need to know these things to fix them. And if there is a grammar error TELL ME so I can fix it




May God bless you





Comments

 I like it 
  February 21, 2012
intense. chuck norris approves
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  February 21, 2012
intense. chuck norris approves
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  February 16, 2012
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle I had an idea for a series a few days ago about a hero gifted in strength, skill, and will, and this really reminded me of it due to that fight. >Eric
Cool!
 I like it 
  February 16, 2012
I had an idea for a series a few days ago about a hero gifted in strength, skill, and will, and this really reminded me of it due to that fight. >Eric
 I like it 
  February 16, 2012
Awesome new episode! The rain effect is great! Do you want to check out MY series? Here's the link: http://mocpages.com/folder.php/143666. Tell me what you think, thanks!
 I like it 
  February 16, 2012
Wow this is a great series!
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  February 15, 2012
Quoting Luke, Builder of the Awesome This is very cool. Good storytelling!
Thank you!
 I like it 
  February 15, 2012
This is very cool. Good storytelling!
 I made it 
  February 14, 2012
Quoting Hayden .
Forests are hard to get right, but once you see some examples it usually gets easier, now these aren't really what would be best for you, but their some pretty good forests http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=234795&id=/user_images/1375/1288914485m_DISPLAY.jpg http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=231841&id=/user_images/1375/1287398846m_DISPLAY.jpg You may have already seen these, but if you did'nt you have done now.
Hmmm, they both seem doable. Thanks
  February 14, 2012
Quoting Original Channel of MOCpages (Caleb) I'm glad you like it! And I appreciate all of the advice! I'd always wondered how to make the forest more dense looking, and now I have a way! Thank you! And yes, a lot of effort has been put into this, countless alone just to get the rain and lightning. Thanks again!
Forests are hard to get right, but once you see some examples it usually gets easier, now these aren't really what would be best for you, but their some pretty good forests http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=234795&id=/user_images/1375/1288914485m_DISPLAY.jpg http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=231841&id=/user_images/1375/1287398846m_DISPLAY.jpg You may have already seen these, but if you did'nt you have done now.
  February 14, 2012
Quoting Original Channel of MOCpages (Caleb) I'm glad you like it! And I appreciate all of the advice! I'd always wondered how to make the forest more dense looking, and now I have a way! Thank you! And yes, a lot of effort has been put into this, countless alone just to get the rain and lightning. Thanks again!
Forests are hard to get right, but once you see some examples it usually gets easier, now these aren't really what would be best for you, but their some pretty good forests http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=234795&id=/user_images/1375/1288914485m_DISPLAY.jpg http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=231841&id=/user_images/1375/1287398846m_DISPLAY.jpg You may have already seen these, but if you did'nt you have done now.
 I made it 
  February 14, 2012
Quoting Hayden . While your plot is outstanding, and your rain effects amazing, i feel their are elements you have left unfinished. For one, you landscapes, whole fitting with your story, could have so much more detail, For example if you made your forest scenes pictures from eye level, with a green blanket/paper behind it and the trees more closely packed and of different sizes, with bushes and grass, it would look, not only more real but also more eye pleasing. The same kind of this could be done for that corridor, if you SNOTed the floor and added more details, like strips of vents and drains, it would look more real. But still, you put a lot of effort into these and I like your results. Remember this is my opinion and you don't have to agree, but another opinion of mine is that you blood effect are outstanding! Truly amazing!
I'm glad you like it! And I appreciate all of the advice! I'd always wondered how to make the forest more dense looking, and now I have a way! Thank you! And yes, a lot of effort has been put into this, countless alone just to get the rain and lightning. Thanks again!
 I like it 
  February 14, 2012
While your plot is outstanding, and your rain effects amazing, i feel their are elements you have left unfinished. For one, you landscapes, whole fitting with your story, could have so much more detail, For example if you made your forest scenes pictures from eye level, with a green blanket/paper behind it and the trees more closely packed and of different sizes, with bushes and grass, it would look, not only more real but also more eye pleasing. The same kind of this could be done for that corridor, if you SNOTed the floor and added more details, like strips of vents and drains, it would look more real. But still, you put a lot of effort into these and I like your results. Remember this is my opinion and you don't have to agree, but another opinion of mine is that you blood effect are outstanding! Truly amazing!
Caleb R.
bob !
  February 13, 2012
how did you get all the rain and lightning effects?
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  February 13, 2012
Quoting Ian Spacek Fun! I'll be interested to see what happens next!
Thanks =)
 I made it 
  February 13, 2012
PG? Nah, most the people on MOCpages are older than like 10 anyhow
 I made it 
  February 13, 2012
Quoting bob ! how did you get all the rain and lightning effects?
Adobe Photoshop =)
 I like it 
  February 13, 2012
Fun! I'll be interested to see what happens next!
 I made it 
  February 12, 2012
Quoting Ru Corder Interesting...
Any predictions?
 I like it 
  February 12, 2012
Interesting...
 I made it 
  February 12, 2012
Quoting El Barto ! It's a cool show, characters with various powers, intrigue and all that, just like what you're getting into here. It should be on Netflix or Hulu.
But isn't that for like ACTUAL shows?
 I like it 
  February 12, 2012
It's a cool show, characters with various powers, intrigue and all that, just like what you're getting into here. It should be on Netflix or Hulu.
Caleb R.
 I like it 
silent assassin
  February 11, 2012
johns super upercut punch, i like it. how do all these people have super powers?
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting El Barto ! Some great action, and cool effects! The story makes me think of Heroes and Lost at the same time. Nicely done!
Never seen heroes, but I've seen some of Lost
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Some great action, and cool effects! The story makes me think of Heroes and Lost at the same time. Nicely done!
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Max Stud Cool!Sorry for late comment.My iPod was spoilt
It was actually pretty early ;)
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting michael ganzert wow can't wait for the next one
Next Saturday =D
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Brett ost (Bread) =O im impressed!
=D Glad to hear that
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting The Essence Of Randomness . Hey! Next episode of Felucia is up! http://mocpages.com/moc.php/308617
Thanks
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting The Timinater ! As a christian, I don't like the supernatural stuff, but great storyline!
I'm a christian too, I believe God COULD give people supernatural powers if he chose
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  February 11, 2012
Quoting Ben Indy Nice job! You've got an impressive storyline! Wasn't quite expecting the supernatural stuff, but it goes well with plot.
I don't think anyone was expecting it
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  February 11, 2012
Quoting Mr Viking Cool episode, so Beckmann is Caleb from IL I? The only thing I'm not real craxy about are the superpowers.
Yeah, but I really wanted to do something with super powers, and it fit in well with the plot =)
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
As a christian, I don't like the supernatural stuff, but great storyline!
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
As a christian, I don't like the supernatural stuff, but great storyline!
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
wow can't wait for the next one
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
=O im impressed!
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Hey! Next episode of Felucia is up! http://mocpages.com/moc.php/308617
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Nice job! You've got an impressive storyline! Wasn't quite expecting the supernatural stuff, but it goes well with plot.
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Cool episode, so Beckmann is Caleb from IL I? The only thing I'm not real craxy about are the superpowers.
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Michael Kringe This is my favorite episode so far! You did a perfect job on the rain!! Can't wait to see who the man is!
Thanks, and yeah, it took a long time
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
This is my favorite episode so far! You did a perfect job on the rain!! Can't wait to see who the man is!
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting silent assassin johns super upercut punch, i like it. how do all these people have super powers?
haha, if I told you, I'd ruin it
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting LB. 12 Nice story. And rain effect is great.
Thanks, and it took AGES
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Nice story. And rain effect is great.
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Max Stud After reading it a few times,I see where this is going! I predict something bad...:(
Yeah =) post your predictions here http://ocmchannel02.weebly.com/blog-area.html
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
After reading it a few times,I see where this is going! I predict something bad...:(
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Owl The Freebooter What? Woah, I'm confused. Great episode! And, one of the last times you spell Beckmann with 3 N's. Just sayin.
ah, thanks
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Cool!Sorry for late comment.My iPod was spoilt
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
What? Woah, I'm confused. Great episode! And, one of the last times you spell Beckmann with 3 N's. Just sayin.
 I made it 
  February 11, 2012
Quoting Cooper 311 Well built, good plot, excellent story. Excellent indeed.
Thank you my friend!
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Well built, good plot, excellent story. Excellent indeed.
 I like it 
  February 11, 2012
Well built, good plot, excellent story. Excellent indeed.
 
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