Knoxus is back, in his most powerful form ever. Get ready for a lot of reading.
About this creation
Knoxus, Knight of Nightsí Theme - Bleeding Pocketwatch
Name: Knoxus Gender: Male Race: Matoran Element: Moonlight and Metal Kanohi: Tryna, Mask of Reanimation, Huna, Mask of Concealment Titles: Knight of Nights, Toa, Assassin, Other-Worlder, The Lost One Affiliation: Order of Mata-Nui, Kingdom of Luna Magnians Occupation: Assassin for the Order of Mata-Nui Powers: He now has full elemental control over Moonlight and Metal. In this form, not only is Knoxus able to create his own Metal, but he is also able to absorb and produce Moonlight, which he can then use to power the Luna Dial. This gives him infinite control over time. The Moonlight also cancels out his previous Shadow powers. Weapons: In this form, Knoxus stays unarmed. With his new ability to produce metal, he can instantly forge whatever weapon he wants. His usual weapon of choice is the throwing knife. Itís small, simple to create, doesnít take much metal, and in large quantities, extremely deadly.
In this new form, Knoxus is practically UNSTOPPABLE
Taken from Knight of Nights: Knoxusís Story
(Note: Story is subject to change. Some words/names are changed to avoid spoilers)
The Princess of Luna Magna led Knoxus down the large spiral staircase into the planetís Moonlight Mine. Knoxus remembered seeing this structure from space, during his first time coming here. From far away, one could mistake it for a partial eclipse, even though Luna Magna has no moons. The King followed close behind, trailed by the Captain of the Luna Magnian Guard.
They said they would help me, Knoxus thought, But this seems oddly suspicious...
Eventually, the Princess of Luna Magna stopped at a branch in the mine. It was blocked up with a large iron door. The King snapped his fingers and one of the guards approached and unlocked the door. They walked in, but the Captain of the Guard stayed outside, locking the door behind them. Now Knoxus had the right to be suspicious.
In the center of the room there was a large complicated machine. Wires and tubes extended everywhere, all of them seeming to connect to different points on the walls. The walls of the room looked to be made of a dark blue crystal, and, upon closer inspection, were slowly pulsating with white light.
What is this place? Knoxus couldnít help but ask.
This is the prototype power generator for Luna Magna. The Princess replied. Itís a top secret project weíve been working on for ages. Eventually, all Moonlight Mining will cease, and power will be transferred from here, to the rest of the planet.
The King of Luna Magna sat down in a corner, looking suspiciously at Knoxus. As he had since they first saw each other.
The Princess sighed. I modified the machine to transfer power into other things while you were away. Once we strap you in, you and your armor will become supercharged with Moonlight. Not only that but the burst of energy will amplify your elemental powers. Youíll be able to complete the mission you told me about without much trouble.
The King stood up abruptly. You told her something without telling it to me too!? As King of Luna Magna I am supposed to know about everything that happens on this planet! Explain yourself!
Knoxus responded calmly. I told you when you interrogated me, that I donít tell anyone I donít trust anything. I do, somewhat, trust your daughter.
Why you, Iíll have you dropped into the mine for that! The king moved to grab Knoxus, but the Princess stopped him.
What are you doing? Have you forgotten who he is? The Princess said urgently.
The King pulled away. No, I havenít. But I tell you, that accursed Mata-Nui has changed him.
Knoxus felt awkward. The Luna Magnianís hatred towards Mata-Nui was one of the things that made Knoxus suspicious of them, especially the King. But he somewhat understood where they were coming from, knowing what happened to them millions of years ago.
It was time. The Princess led Knoxus to the Machine. Knoxus looked at her as she strapped him in, and thought about how strange she was. She seemed nonviolent, but she supported her extremely demented and violent father. What happened to her? Was she just the mental equivalent of a child who grew up through the rich history of an abandoned planet?
She closed two metal cuffs around his wrists.
This isnít going to hurt, is it? Knoxus asked.
Only if youíre a shadow. The Princess responded.
Knoxus gulped, looking at his Shadow Infection.
The princess moved behind a control board, and grasped a lever.
Initiating Moonlight Power Transfer! The Princess started a countdown.
The king leaned foreword slowly.
Knoxus braced himself.
She pulled the lever.
Suddenly, Knoxusís eyes went white. He couldnít think, there was a ringing sound in his head. He felt his body tense up. Power started surging through his hands, and up his arms. His shadow infection started burning intensely, but with the sound in his mind he couldnít tell if he was screaming or not. When the power reached his Mask, he heard a sharp cry that sounded like the Makuta he fought on Bota Magna, along with seeing visions from his life as a matoran on Luna Magna, Stelt, and Karda Nui. Eventually, all of it stopped. Knoxus felt himself go limp and fall to the floor. His eyes faded to black.
Slowly, but surely, Knoxus regained consciousness. He opened his eyes, and saw the Princess looking over him, relieved. The King was standing, staring at him, and looking somewhat disappointed that the power transfer didnít kill him.
The feelingsí mutual. Knoxus said sarcastically to the King.
Knoxus stood up. The ringing and burning had stopped, and he could see again. Looking at himself, his armor was now the same dark blue crystal as the walls of the transfer room. He looked at his previously shadow infected side, and laughed.
My armorís not black anymore! He said in bewilderment. The transfer worked!
Knoxus extended his hand, and with just a little thought, a ball of Moonlight energy appeared in his hand.
Now this is cool!
With your new ability to produce Moonlight, you should be able to give the Luna Dial enough energy to travel to the future, and complete your mission. The Princess said.
Knoxus turned toward The Princess of Luna Magna. If I donít win with this, then I donít know if I ever will. Thank you.
You can thank me by remembering Luna Magna and coming back to visit often.
I will not forget you. Knoxus said.
With that, the Captain of the Guard opened the door. Knoxus shot a glance at him as he walked out to the edge of the staircase. After one final look back, Knoxus jumped into the mine, activated his rocket boosters, and flew out at top speed. He left Luna Magna's atmosphere and headed into space...
TO BE CONTINUED IN KNIGHT OF NIGHTS: KNOXUSíS STORY
You better have read all that. Anyway, Onto the MOC!
Here he is, you asked for him, and I deliver!
The build itself isn't any different from Knoxus's normal form, I just changed and unified the color scheme. :)
Wielding his throwing knives. >:3
What he looks like with Knoxus' weapons.
Torso close up. There's the Luna Dial!
Man I love my new camera!
Close up of the custom torso. As you can see he uses Knoxus' old torso design with the rubber bands.
Now I bet you're thinking, Connor, why is this version of Knoxus such a big deal? You just changed the color of his armor!
Well that's were you're wrong, Johnny! You see, this Knoxus is a big deal because... well, I guess it's easier to explain with a picture. :)
Yeah, that's right, He's not just a color change, he is a comepletely new Knoxus! No parts were recycled from the original to make him! And this picture is obviously not edited.
Knoxus: Whoa! What the!?
Knoxus: Whoa! What the!?
Knoxus: There's TWO of me now!????
Knoxus: Hey! You know what this calls for?
Looking Awesome together.
All of my Best/Favorite MOCs!
Size Comparison with Kopaka.
Knoxus: Wow, this is cool and all, but, jokes aside, there is something you need to know, Knoxus.
Knoxus: What is it myself?
Knoxus: There's ano-
Knoxus: Whoa! Knoxus!
Knoxus: Are you ok?
Knoxus: Listen... Knoxus...
Knoxus: There is... another... Kn...ox...us...blegh.
Knoxus: I think I should take you to the hospital...
Wow, that all took awhile to type! Anyway, that's it! Thank you for taking the time to look and READ EVERYTHING. ;) Please be sure to leave your opinion about anything in the comments! Thanks! More story stuff coming soon! Bye!
Still awesome! I read (some) of the story, you're a good writer! I have a story for my SM, but I'm too lazy to type it :P BTW, Makuta can shape-shift. What you do with this knowlege is up to you. 5/5(again)!
I LOVE him!!!! really cool color scheme, and I like the fact that you didn't recycle any parts! Bricklink much :D? Anyway, since your active again, think you could possibly finish my poster you were going to do? It's not the end of the world if you can't. If you can, I'll send you the link of the picture that I would want you to use. Thanks, and Great new addition to your new Self MOC!!!!
Haha, Thanks man! No, the story isn't out yet, but every MOC I release gets me closer to starting it! :) And you're awesome for wanting to remake Knoxus! :D I've realized that you can have other people's character appear in a Bionicle story simply by making them into an alternate-universe version. So do whatever you want with him! You don't have to worry about keeping to my story's canon at all. :) Thanks!
I have made a character, Lunara, toa of twilight, similar to what you described in the story. That's awesome. Also, I like your writing style and I'm looking forward to the story, where can I read it ? (or is it not out yet ?)BTW I love the colors to Knoxus, makes the armor stand out more. TWO KNOXUS's !!!! WHAT ???? Awesome ! Anyways, lookign forward to the story, and I plan on re making Knoxus to feature him in my Third Bionicle story if that's okay. :)
Well I didn't write it that way, but that would be a nice way to explain the coming of a Shadow Knoxus. Who's to say the third one even IS a Shadow Knoxus? Only time will tell. As for the music, you need to click 'share' on the YouTube video you want to use, then hit 'Embed' and tick 'use old embed code.' Then just copy and paste it into your next MOCpage. Also, you might want to adjust the height to 27.
I could explain how he is a Toa of Metal and not Iron, but that would be a major spoiler to his story. Right now, his elemental powers allow him to control not only iron, but all types of metals. Even Non-Magnetic ones. It's a much more favorable way to control metal IMO.
I like it
Peter Crasher the Powerlord
February 5, 2012
MOAR KNOXUSES! BTW, I read the entire thing. Nice new Knoxus, dude!
The story is great! The MOC has a really good color scheme, but I think the legs need to be revamped. Also, if you're interested in making him a bit more canon, Iron is an official element, but Metal is not. Anyway, excellent work, and I hope to see more Bio-MOCs from you very soon.