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The Legend of Harash Soru 16 : Betrayal
About this creation
Stewjon, roughly one week after the events in The Legend of Harash Soru 15.

Harash Soru sat in his study staring intently at the flashing button before him.

Harash Soru: "Its him."



Nayam Burl looked up at her husband and smiled.

Nayam Burl: "He's made his choice Hara, whether he knows it or not there is nothing more you can do now."
Harash Soru: "What if he says no."
Nayam Burl: "Then nothing changes. We go on until we finally kill him. But we cannot make this choice for him."
Harash Soru: "You're right. There is always hope. We planted the seeds, now we just have to see if they have grown."



Hara reached over and hit the accept button on the holopad.

Harash Soru: "Darth Nihilus."



Korriban, the study of Darth Nihilus.

Darth Nihilus: "Master Soru. I... I am not sure why I made this call."



Harash Soru: "You must be Nihilus. Somewhere inside you know why you chose to call me, and I think you do know."



Nihilus stood and walked around his desk.

Darth Nihilus: "You are right. Of course I know why I called you. I cannot get that vision out of my mind. To be free of the hunger, of the Dark. To be free of my past. I want that."



Hara sighed, feeling a wave of relief wash over him.

Harash Soru: "I am truly glad to hear that Nihilus. I cannot promise you a cure straight away. But I can promise you acceptance. And if we work together, there is nothing we cannot achieve."



Darth Nihilus: "I hope you are right Hara. I will leave as soon as possible. For now, may the..."



Nihilus' voice trailed off to a grunt as a red blade burst out of his stomach.



Hara jumped to his feet, knocking his chair over in his haste.

Harash Soru: "No!!!"



Nihilus' body fell away to reveal the two forms of Darth Levid and Darth Sion.

Darth Levid: "You see now Sion? Nihilus was planning on betraying us for this filth!"
Harash Soru: "You murderer Levid!"
Darth Levid: "That is what Sith do Soru! We betray each other, its in our blood."



Darth Levid turned and walked out of Nihilus' study. Before he left he stopped and glanced back at Sion.

Darth Levid: "I will now assume Nihilus' role. His power is now my power. And believe me Sion, when I say I will not make the deaths of traitors as easy as Nihilus'."



Hara watched as Levid stalked out of the room, for a momnt he was silent before he spoke.

Harash Soru: "That was aimed at you Sion. He knows you have had doubts also."
Darth Sion: "I know Soru, I am not blind nor deaf."
Harash Soru: "He will betray you Sion. Surely you know that?"



Sion stared at Hara for a long time.

Darth Sion: "I know."



Sion turned and walked out of the study.

Darth Sion: "All I have to do is betray him first."



















A note from the author.

To all of the fans of this series, its now my turn to make an appeal to you. This comic has been going for ages now and I'm loving every second of it. I love to hear your thoughts and comments, to know that I have captured so many minds and won you over with my characters always inspires me to keep going, to think of more turns in the story.
It occurred to me the other day that I have no real idea of how many people follow the series.

So if you do follow the series then please could you leave a comment on this creation, it doesn't have to be much. Just saying "cool" or something is enough. Just to know how many of you there are.

Thanks to all of you and remember if you want to be in the comic then all you have to do is ask :)

May the Force be with you all,

Harry 863



Comments

 I like it 
  September 7, 2012
Yeah I'm following it and it's awesome!
 I like it 
  April 21, 2012
This is amazing! And if you need a bounty hunter or mercenary then my character is Jacen Xhin. He is a little force sensitive but does not know how to use his power. His weapons: Two E-11 blaster rifles. My thought for his design was: mutt hair, indiana jones head, cad bane torso and indiana jones legs.
 I like it 
  February 25, 2012
This story is very very well written. You are indeed a true master of lego story telling!
 I like it 
  February 9, 2012
Oooh Im bad as ever in this series!That's epic!Thanks for the personality u gave to my character(D.Levid) and this was quite a breath taking episode!
 I like it 
  February 5, 2012
excellent as always. this story is the reason i look on MOCpages every day :)
 I like it 
  February 3, 2012
NAME: Drakson. SPECIES: Corillien ( Spelling ) LIGHT SABER COLOUR: Blue. He is a trained pilot. and thnx for letting me be in the comic!
 I like it 
  February 3, 2012
Nice Sith ON Sith
 I made it 
  February 2, 2012
Quoting Gandalf Stormcrow (Formerly Shy Guy) I follow the series! May I be in the comic?
Sure thing :) Just look at the blue writing on my homepage and post the info I need on one of my creations :)
 I like it 
  February 2, 2012
I follow the series! May I be in the comic?
 I made it 
  February 2, 2012
Quoting Senator Lott Dod cool! Um i was wondering, I dont know if you know or not but after the empire was a new senate created?
No, the senate was eventually disbanded. It was either just before the start of the Galactic Civil War or a few years after Order 66
 I like it 
  February 2, 2012
cool! Um i was wondering, I dont know if you know or not but after the empire was a new senate created?
  February 1, 2012
This is great! I am planning on doing a comics series. Got any tips?
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
Wow didn't saw that coming. You truly are the master of stories. Great work just like always. I really enjoy reading these. Can't wait to see the next one. :D
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
COOL! (hehe)
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
your series is the best
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
An amazing twist! You should have seen my face when I realised it was Levid :P Anyway I'm so pleased you've killed him off :) I'm extremely happy your not scared to kill off importmant 'Cannon' characters :) Awesome work mate ;) Can't wait for more ;)
 I made it 
  February 1, 2012
Thanks everyone! I'm really glad you all like it :D
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
this series is surprisingly good, when i first saw it a while ago i thought it was another one of those same old jedi + clones vs. droids for every one of their episodes but no you have created something really special and you're story telling is great also, superb work and keep it up!
Harry 863
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Vladimir R.
  January 31, 2012
Awesome! As always.
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
I love this series haha
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
I follow these comics and I think that they are brilliant! Keep up the good work!
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
I don't know why I love this! It just captures you, from the very beginning. POST MOOOOORRRRREEEE
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
Nice Episode! I was kinda expecting Nihilus to be betrayed ;).
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
Tell Sion I give him a cookie. Can't wait to see how this folds out.
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
i am a follower and will be till these fade away i will always watch LONG LIVE HARRY 863 and his comics too
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
omg that was epic! "cool" :)
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
I'm following!!! This is great!
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
Nice! I'm following! This is really great. I really would be grateful if you could check out my new Felucia series. It's ok if you can't but if you could just have a look? Anyway loving this!
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
cooooolllll
 I made it 
  January 31, 2012
Quoting Fraser Haltringham Shame... I rather liked Nihilus :( Keep the episodes coming though - I am an avid follower! :D
Ah I know, I really struggled to kill Nihilus. But I'm glad I did it in a way that was different to him simply being killed by one of the Jedi. The episode will definitely keep coming :D
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
Very cool part again! Really like how you keep the action in the story :D.
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
Shame... I rather liked Nihilus :( Keep the episodes coming though - I am an avid follower! :D
 I made it 
  January 31, 2012
Quoting Deff . I guess this is one of my favorite Episdoes! I like how Nihilus died :P Very nice words in the bottom. I'm sure a lot of people will comment! Please keep this brilliant story going. Sure is: You have a big talent in making these amazing comics! Good luck, mate! Deff .
Haha don't worry Deff I wont be ending them anytime soon. Still a lot more action to go :)
 I like it 
  January 31, 2012
I guess this is one of my favorite Episdoes! I like how Nihilus died :P Very nice words in the bottom. I'm sure a lot of people will comment! Please keep this brilliant story going. Sure is: You have a big talent in making these amazing comics! Good luck, mate! Deff .
 
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