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SMT ER: Vored, the Abandoned
Okay, REALLY last minute entry to ethe Self Moc Tournament! There have been a LOT of Jordans, so I decided to add another Vored into the mix!
About this creation
In order to thank Vored for planning to build me in the future: HERE WE GO!!!

Name: Vored
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran
Race: Fe Matoran
Element: Iron
Occupation: Wandering and pondering...
Title(s): Toa, Brother, the Loner
Kanohi: Mask of Mind Control
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Moc Status: Somewhat assembled

Callan's Bio: A lone traveler of Bara Magna, Vored has lost his enthusiasm for friendship, for teamwork, and for life. He walks the desert barely surviving, pondering life and remembering his own distant past: He was once a part of a somewhat popular Toa Team, but as soon as he was injured in a bloody battle, his team abandoned him. This act of evil against him has destroyed all emotion for others, and it has yet to be seen if time will ever heal the wounds his old friends inflicted upon him.

Link to the Self Moc Tournament!

Enough chit chat, I say! TO THE MOC!!

Front view

Back view: Meh with the arms, but the right arm design I really like!

Lame Action shot 1

Lame Action shot 2

Comparison with Phos and Callan...

Callan: Hey Vored, check out mah brand new sword!
Vored: KEWL!!! But it's black... Why?
Callan: Why not? :P

BROFIST!!
Vored: In honor of you building me!
Krizan: Cheers!

Vored's head.... It's okay, right?

Jordan: OW!!! Why are you attacking me!?
Vored: CAUSE EVERYONE BUILT YOU RATHER THAN ME!!! >:/
Jordan: Sorry! D:

Callan: See ya guys!
Vored: Peace!

Fourth Wall Commentary:
So yeah, this is my entry. I would have liked to have done more, but I ran out of time. Anywhoo, I hope you like him all the same, and although I doubt I'll make Round 2, I think this was worth a shot! And although I had to borrow a few parts from different things, I'll do something to keep him around. Thanks for viewing guys!

Please comment and rate if you like him! Later people! :D



Comments

 I like it 
  February 6, 2012
Wow, that's a quite incredible. I really like the upper armwjth the Nuva shoulder piece. The torso looks very nice as well. Great job as always, Cal! By the way, I will be making a BL order soon and was wondering if you'd prefer me to make Callan gold or silver. I can't decide which I like better so I'll just leave it up to you. And since so many people are asking you to check out their MOCs than I'll just do the same. XD I'm kidding. Anyways, a superb creation from you, Cal!
  February 4, 2012
 I like it 
  February 4, 2012
Sorry to bother you but can you please check this out http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/305932
 I like it 
  February 3, 2012
Very well made, especially the torso! :)
Caleb Lang
 I like it 
The Crazy Forgoten One
  February 2, 2012
Coolieo!
 I like it 
  February 1, 2012
Good moc mate, like the custom head as well. I've just uploaded the newest version of my 3rd self-moc check it out please. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/307262
  February 1, 2012
I just posted my first moc!!! :D Could you check it out?
 I like it 
  January 29, 2012
Sorry to bother you but can you please check this out http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/306333
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
My rating: 8/10 for creativity and 8/10 for build. Score: 16/20.
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
Awesome Vored here! Time for the judging. The build is very awesome! Almost flawless! A 9/10! The creativity, not so much though. Just another humanoid MOC, but it's still cool. A 6/10. Add them up and you have a 15/20! Good luck to you!
 I like it 
  January 26, 2012
Well it's simple enough why; most MOCers here were still duplo-ing when Vored's mask came out, whereas Jordan's is in shops as I type this. You made well on your advantage though - Vored looks ace. Liking the almost human musculature you built onto him.
 I like it 
  January 26, 2012
That torso is too good for words! Unfortunately, it's a bit lacking in creativity, although I like how you managed to fit in the hordika chest filler piece on the lower torso and a v-shaped design on the upper, true to the orig, and that torso IS pretty creative.... 7/10 for creativity, and 8/10 for build (that torso really helps but I wish you'd gone for both arms to be like the right one, because it came out so great, but I love the way you used tires to fill in the gaps in the HF!)
Caleb Lang
 I like it 
Suspicious Chicken
  January 25, 2012
You say yours is a last minute entry? I haven't even started mine :P Yeah I might get it done in time...
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Great moc!!! I just joined the other day, and I plan to post my self moc, Toa Andron (terrible name, I know...), tomorrow. It would mean a lot to me if you would check it out when I post it, and possibly favorite it! You have been my favorite builder since I first came across this site! :D
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Good entry! It has good designs. I will give it an 8/10 for build and 6/10 for creativity. Total score = 14/20.
  January 25, 2012
Last minute FTW! Wanted to ask you this: Can my SelfMOC be on you and Cossy's show sometime? Heres the link: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/287098 Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Great entry. I like the bulkiness of the overall look. He doesn't seem too original though. Creativity: 5/10. Build: 8/10. Total: 13/20.
 I made it 
  January 25, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Awesome torso, etc! A great twist on vored, although I like the shoulder with the nuva armor better than the hau. But, the title should have been SMT entry round (etc). It's a minor rule and I'll let it slide for one time, cuz we need participants. Great moc, I was happy to see something besides jordan :D
About the left upper arm: I'm not very proud of it, it's a iffy. The right one was the design I really liked, but I couldn't find another dark grey old Matoran head in my collection. :/ Thanks man, I fixed the title now! :D
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Awesome torso, etc! A great twist on vored, although I like the shoulder with the nuva armor better than the hau. But, the title should have been SMT entry round (etc). It's a minor rule and I'll let it slide for one time, cuz we need participants. Great moc, I was happy to see something besides jordan :D
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
cool! love the back of the shins! well done!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Great moc, as usual!:D Hey, I'm new here! Just joined the other day. Your creations were the first ones I saw, and they were my motivation for joining, and many of my mocs! I plan to post my first creation today, and it would mean a lot to me if you would check it out!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Cool! can you please check out this http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/305932
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Not to mention they build too many Galaxus XD
Caleb Lang
 I like it 
S.E.D .
  January 24, 2012
AWESOME JOB!!!!! Love the legs! Hope you like the video/intro I sent you :)
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
0.o Emo story is emo... Really nicely done! I love the shoulder designs and the torso looks nice :D I do feel though that he could have a cooler colour scheme. Never been a big fan of that colour scheme. Other then that, maybe bigger arms? But yeah, very little wrong with it, nicely done :D
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Awesome version of Vored, I like every single thing about him :DDD Maybe remove the heartlight, because on him it's more of an oesophagus light XD
  January 24, 2012
He doesnt look to much like a robot (I read the bio) but I like the legs I may use some form of them
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
i hope you got it in in time...well im not that much your gonna kill the competition oh well im at least happy that my possible round 1 entry may have a chance against you if were opponents but enough about that it has a great design i love that torso great job there all in all an awesome moc!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Ooh, cool arms! This looks pretty great.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
I didn't build Jordan 'cus I don't have Furno 1.0 or Breakout. :P Nice work.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
I know I should rate it later for the contest, so here you get my personal-non-judge rating! I just saw this creation at the updates, an couldn't resist to comment. It's so cool to see him as a Toa-sized! I really thought you'd made him chibi. The body design is truly fantastic, there are so many greebles (like the phones) at it, wow! His upper arms and lower legs are looking really nice, the head is simple, but still cool. You really made a nice color sheme in dark grey/gunmetal. And do you know that he actually isn't a Toa? I never mentioned it before on his site. But you made a own story for him, so that's okay. Maybe put his weapon on his other hand (he's left-handed), but altogether this is an excellent creation! Many thanks for building him! P.S. Simple Callan is finished. I'll show him off with the others for series 1, but don't expect too much: He's builded like a Toa Metru, but will be upgraded, like the others :D
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
That`s awesome,good luck.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Awesome! lovin' that torso!! pretty good for a last minute entry. I'm surprised that they didn't make you a judge.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
The asymmetrical shoulders look great, and the lower legs, upper arms, and torso all look great. I think you'll make it to Round 1, lots of the Jordans were really too similar to each other and not many were really distinguished.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
awesome!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Sweet build, I like the asymmetric shoulders!
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Deus Otiosus I'd understand one or two build 2444, but how many EXACTLY did it?
Nine people. Thanks a million guys! :D
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
I love the color and sleekness! Great job!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Not bad but not your best. Nice head. :)
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Great design! Good to see a Vored.
  January 24, 2012
I'd understand one or two build 2444, but how many EXACTLY did it?
 
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