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Stewjon, immediately after the events in The Legend of Harash Soru 11.
The Jedi Council sits and watches Levid's message for the fourth time
Darth Levid: "I realised that Zealot was right. When I tried to follow him, Nihilus tried to stop me. We duelled and I killed him. I know you may not believe me but I can offer nothing more at the moment. Come to these coordinates on Raxus and we can talk. Bring as many Jedi as you want."
A silence passes over the room before Master Minoh speaks.
Ordan Minoh: "Do you think its a trap?"
Harash Soru: "Almost definitely. But we now Zealot has changed so perhaps there is something to Levid's claims."

Shaak Ti: "Nevertheless we cannot ignore a cry of help."
Harash Soru: "Agreed. I will go to Raxus and meet with Levid."

Nayam Burl: "We will all go Hara."
Dana Kowls: "Agreed. If it is a trap you may need help. And if not, well then we need not worry."

Raxus landing pad, roughly one day later.
Harash Soru: "Be wary all of you. Expect it to be a trap and Levid may lose some of his advantage."
Harun Tauker: "We have Levid outnumbered. He wouldn't dare try anything."
Shaak Ti: "Don't be to overconfident in our abilities Master Tauker."
Nayam Burl: "Or Levid's for that matter."
Harun Tauker: "Yes, Masters."

Harash Soru: "Padawan, I need you to wait here and guard the ship."
Kyle Novan: "What? But Master!"
Harash Soru: "No buts. If we need rescuing you may be our only hope Padawan. Now please, wait here until we call you."
Kyle Novan: "Yes Master."

Raxus was a beautiful place. It always reminded Hara of planets such as Alderaan, or his homeworld of Naboo. It was nestled deep within the outer rim, hence the reason for the Separatists using it as their capital during the Clone Wars.
The planet had remained free of Republic rule and because of that, now sat outside of the Empire. Although as Hara looked around he couldn't help but wonder how much longer it would remain that way.
Suddenly Dana let out a shout.
Dana Kowls: "Hara, look!"

Harash Soru looked up and closed his eyes in despair. He could see exactly what he had feared. Two missiles were streaming through the air towards one of the buildings.
It had been a trap after all. And Hara had led them straight into it.

Kyle Novan heard the blast from the landing pad and pulled his lightsabers from his belt. However, he suddenly realised that the blast was the least of his worries as a beautiful Zeltron woman was walking towards him with a gleam in her eyes.

Kyle Novan: "Who are you?"
Darth Kayzla: "Come now dear. Is that really any way to treat a lady?"
Kyle Novan: "That depends on who the lady is."

Darth Kayzla chuckled and activated her lightsaber.
Darth Kayzla: "Haha, smart answer."

Before Kyle could react Kayzla had jumped through the air onto the wing of the star-fighter. Kyle barely spun around in time to block the slash that was aimed for his neck.

Kayzla jumped down and the two traded blows. Then Novan flipped over backwards landing on the wing of the fighter.

He reached out with the Force and sent one of his blades flying through the air towards Kayzla.

But to Kyle's horror the Sith reached out with the Force and pulled the blade into her own hand.
Darth Kayzla: "My how weak you are boy. At least try before I kill you."

Kyle Novan: "I am not weak!"
Darth Kayzla: "No? Let me show you true power."
Kayzla reached out with the Force and began to stream lightning through Kyle's blade.

The two of them roared as they jumped through the air towards each other.

Darth Kayzla slammed the Padawan's blade down and watched as he fell back with a yell. Lightning coursing through his body.
Darth Kayzla: "Pathetic."

She tossed his lightsaber to one side and raised her comlink.
Darth Kayzla: "Planting the bomb now."

The Jedi pushed themselves to their feet and surveyed the damage. The whole second floor of the damaged building was gone, most of the rubble landing on the street below, crushing the innocent as it fell.
But none of the Jedi were truly looking at the devastation, for there was a new more deadly threat that had appeared before them.

Nihilus and the rest of his Sith Order stood in silence, blocking the street before them.
Ordan Minoh: "Master, what do we do?"
Harash Soru was quiet for a few moments. In that time he centred himself within the Force. He had come here because the Force had told him to.
This was the start of Nihilus' conquest.
They had no option but to stop him.
Hara's lightsaber floated gently from his belt and into his hand. He triggered the blue blade and then said quietly.
Harash Soru: "Attack."

The street erupted as the Jedi and Sith launched themselves at each other. Sparks flew as blades clashed and electricity crackled through the air.

The fight continued for what seemed like hours with no obvious winners. At one point it would seem the Sith were about to strike down the Jedi but then they would push back with their own show of force.
But then, the inevitable happened. As the first sound of metal feet began to claw at the Jedi ears.
Dana Kowls: "Master, Droids!"

Harash Soru stared into the dark depths of Nihilus' mask as the two pushed Force powers against each other. Hara new he could cope with the droids, but he was not sure of his friends.
As usual Nihilus had not played fairly.

The first Droids began to appear in the street.
Harash Soru: "Retreat! Fall back now!"

Hara waited as his friends ran past him, deflecting fire back at the Droids as they fled. When the Jedi were away the Droids stopped firing and the Sith gathered before Hara.
Darth Nihilus: "Run Jedi."
Harash Soru: "Run? For now maybe. But do not begin to think you have won this fight Sith."
Darth Levid: "Hmm, you have no idea of our plans Soru."
Harash Soru: "Whatever they are Levid, we will face them. And we will stop you."
Hara turned and began to hurry away from the Sith.

Darth Sion: "And how will you stop us killing every man, woman and child on this planet until you surrender yourself to us?..."
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April 23, 2012 |
So is this raxes prime? if so did the sith destroy the planet and turn it into raxes prim? |
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January 15, 2012 |
Epic episode Harry. My second fav so far. Can't wait the next one. |
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January 15, 2012 |
Quoting Josh.O Shadeslayer
the mocathalon is a contest started by chris phipson(mocolympics guy) you have to build things for each catagory each round kinda confusing to explain but the team right now is timinater E.B. and myself
Oh right. Sorry Josh I don't think I will really have much time to enter it. Sorry :-/ |
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January 15, 2012 |
Quoting Fraser Haltringham
Great battle at the end there!:D How many more episodes are there going to be? Or is it a secret?
I honestly don't know. I guess I'll just keep going until I run out of ideas :) |
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January 15, 2012 |
Great battle at the end there!:D How many more episodes are there going to be? Or is it a secret? |
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January 15, 2012 |
Quoting Timmy Sterkel
great comic. also could i be a jedi blue saber black robes and long brown hair like anakins in the clones wars or master odarns. also would u like to be in my comic its going to be similiar to yours
Yeah that'd be great tummy :) Your figure's up by the way :) |
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January 15, 2012 |
awesome episode |
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January 14, 2012 |
great comic. also could i be a jedi blue saber black robes and long brown hair like anakins in the clones wars or master odarns. also would u like to be in my comic its going to be similiar to yours |
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January 14, 2012 |
the mocathalon is a contest started by chris phipson(mocolympics guy) you have to build things for each catagory each round kinda confusing to explain but the team right now is timinater E.B. and myself |
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January 14, 2012 |
WOOOOW! Great episode! Amazing story! |
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January 14, 2012 |
Harry this is josh on my cousins acount
the mocathalon is run by chris phipson. it is like the mocolypics but with teams |
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January 14, 2012 |
Hello,
a nice Moc, but I miss details.
Please make more details.
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January 14, 2012 |
Quoting Josh.O Shadeslayer
Hey harry i invited u to join my mocathalon are u gona except?(i reallllly need you)
What is a mocathalon? |
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January 14, 2012 |
Quoting General Jake
If I was a jedi mster duringthe clone wars, would I still be a master during the Stewjon order?
Yeah you were promoted to the Council when you joined the Stewjon Order. I didn't include all the Masters |
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January 14, 2012 |
Hey harry i invited u to join my mocathalon are u gona except?(i reallllly need you)
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January 14, 2012 |
and trace flamer comes to the rescue with the rest of the jeddi and he kiills all the sith :D |
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January 14, 2012 |
Wonderful episode! |
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January 14, 2012 |
An insanely good cliffhanger! The plot has really thickened now, I love it! Really looking forward to more mate :D |
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January 14, 2012 |
If I was a jedi mster duringthe clone wars, would I still be a master during the Stewjon order? |
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