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New Denver Episode 1 of Season 02
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A band of survivors of an apocalyptic world in the year of 2015.







"Raiders," Beckmann said in contempt.







The blood trail went back behind the desk.







Coffee was spilled on the table.








Caleb continued to walk to the other side.







The wall had been destroyed by a barrage of bullets.







"Holy-" Caleb stopped himself.

A man lay dead on the floor, blood splattered on the wall.







His revolver at his side.














The rest waited anxiously.







They began to walk to the next building.






The doctor lead the way.






Caleb wondered what awaited them.







As soon as they stepped in the door, tow guns took them by surprise, they quickly put their guns down, "We're here from New Denver!" Caleb said.







"Why are you here?" One of them shouted.







Another woman was sitting in front of one of the desks.







The two men edged closer.








"How can you prove it?" one asked.







"Are there any other people left of your town?" Caleb asked.







"Yeah, where is the rest of yours?"







Soon Caleb was calling the rest in.







They where soon all there.







"Why are you here?" asked what appeared to be the sheriff.

"Our town was blown up, we need refuge."








"You need to help us in order for us to help you," the girl said.







Caleb hadn't noticed how pretty she was before.








"We have several of our citizens stuck in the local diner, we need you to get them out."







"I'll go!" Caleb volunteered, not knowing what he was signing up for.







Soon he was out the door and running.







Soon, he was in front of the building.








He waited before he went in.






"Don't shoot, you're sheriff sent me! I'm here to get you out!" Caleb shouted in.







The building across the was loomed down on him.







Caleb walked in with his hand up.







A man peaked behind the cover of a small booth.








Two others hid behind tables.







Another man with a pistol and a young woman.






"How do we know you're not one of them?" asked the man.






The others came up from behind their table.







"He said to say, 'abracadabra'" Caleb said. It sounded lame as he said it. Unoriginal.








"And is this all of you?" he asked.







Then he noticed the body in the corner.







Suddenly, someone from the top floor began to shoot.








Caleb dove for cover.







So did the others












Caleb was trapped.




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ALSO The main picture will come back later on, don't ask about it for now



Comments

Caleb R.
 I like it 
jordan rice
  January 28, 2012
sniper!!! likeing the series
 I like it 
  January 15, 2012
Perfectly done!
 I made it 
  January 14, 2012
Quoting Austin Durick Okay, I will just give you a in-comment review. First off the story just revolves around you, not really anyone else. It just seems everyone else is just along for the ride. Second I don't think there is too much of a plot twist. It is (For me anyway) very predictable. I want to see plot twists and more fighting! Personally, I think this is my least favorite series of your's sorry, it's just what I think. But if you improve on those it will be a great series!
Thanks for the feedback! And yeah, This was pretty lame of a series, it's pretty much made to link Island Locked and Island Locked 2 together. The next series is a lot less about me+
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
I have a gun! Awesome episode!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
I like this episode, but I think, (This is just because I'm a military nut,) that you should get a little more into the war, such as what is happenig, who is the biggest threat, ect. I really like the plot though!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
nice job!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
sweet!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
One of your best episodes yet!
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
Very nice, but, the parental lock in my opinion is not needed. The blood, although neat, does not rely warrant that as there is no way of making a realistic looking blood out of Legos, unfortunately. I see the lock as, more of for cursing.
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
Nice.
 I like it 
  January 14, 2012
oh, Nice episode! Lots of blood but I guess you dont need the parental guidance like Jess said.
  January 14, 2012
Okay, I will just give you a in-comment review. First off the story just revolves around you, not really anyone else. It just seems everyone else is just along for the ride. Second I don't think there is too much of a plot twist. It is (For me anyway) very predictable. I want to see plot twists and more fighting! Personally, I think this is my least favorite series of your's sorry, it's just what I think. But if you improve on those it will be a great series!
 I made it 
  January 13, 2012
Quoting Jess G. Great! I don't think this needed the parental warning though. :)
should I take it off?
 I like it 
  January 13, 2012
Great! I don't think this needed the parental warning though. :)
 I like it 
  January 13, 2012
Wow this new series started soon.
 
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