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my first story
hello viewers this is my first ever story in this type so enjoy
About this creation
Voxumo: Hello viewers and welcome to out first picture story.

??: Hey voxumo i need to talk to you

Voxumo: ah Nili what do you need?
NIli: give me a second to catch my breath.

Nili: alright Voxumo on my way over i noticed 2 matoran being chased by 2 visorak.
Voxumo: and what do you want me to do.
Nili: Oh nothing i just thought you would want to see.

voxumo: Where are they?
Nili: look down there.

Voxumo: Oh i see them now. At least they are holding there own.
Nili: Yeah

Niphinar: Ok bivar do you have any ideas.

Bivar: Actually i do.
Niphinar: ok what is it.

Wisper wisper
Bivar: when i say run run ok?
Niphinar: alright.

Bivar takes out a disk and throws it towards the visorak.
Bivar: RUNNNNNN!!!!

Bivar and Niphinar run away from the visorak

After 5 minutes of running they stop in a desolute area away from the visorak. they then hunch over trying to catch thier breath.

Niphinar: i think we lost them
Bivar: yeah i'd agree
Niphinar: so what was that disk anyway.
Bivar: oh that was an artificial colony drone disk in short i threw visorak food.

niphinar: Hey that was a smart idea
Bivar: yeah well we might as well head out
niphinar: that sounds like a good idea

Visorak: He he he i'll be back

Voxumo: Well that was interesting
nili: i thought you would like that.

nili: well i have to go.
Voxumo: Ok

Voxumo: well folks thats the end for today




Comments

 I made it 
  January 10, 2014
Quoting ~ Hazeroth Pretty interesting! I can't wait to read the next one!
Oh dang.. I completely forgot all about this...
 I like it 
  January 10, 2014
Pretty interesting! I can't wait to read the next one!
 I made it 
  January 15, 2012
yeah i was meaning for the story to be more like a comedy than a serious story
 I made it 
  January 15, 2012
yeah i was meaning for the story to be more like a comedy than a serious story
 I like it 
  January 15, 2012
not bad story though
 I made it 
  January 15, 2012
Quoting The Crazy Forgoten One Ok so far i don't undersand.
Well that is why it was my first one it was a test.
Voxumo T
 I like it 
The Crazy Forgoten One
  January 13, 2012
Ok so far i don't undersand.
 I made it 
  January 12, 2012
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? well the picture needs better image.maybe buy a better camera or keep the camera still as you can
Well if you turn legos into money then i will buy a new camera. i had to litterly use my nintendo 3DS to take the pictures. and what did you think of the actual story.
 I like it 
  January 12, 2012
well the picture needs better image.maybe buy a better camera or keep the camera still as you can
 I like it 
  January 12, 2012
well the picture needs better image.maybe buy a better camera or keep the camera still as you can
 
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