My entry to my MOC-Off with Callan, Lord of Fire.
About this creation

We were supposed to make two MOCs that our opponent made, though, neither of us followed that exactly. :P Whatever. Here is my opponent's entry.

And here is my entry: Boltran and Brawq. :D
Name: Boltran
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran
Race: Ful-Matoran
Element: Lightning, Fire(infection)
Occupation: Leading the Toa Gamma as second-in-command during Davix's absence.
Title(s): Hothead, Toa, Brother, Foolhardy
Kanohi: Oddly shaped Sanok, Mask of Accuracy
Alignment: Lawful Good
Story: See here.

Here's Boltran. I based him a lot off Callan's, the original.

But there are plenty of my designs. His torso and legs are different from the original.

The back. When I added his bow, I just HAD to give him tailcoats. They look perfect on him!

He's got an extend-able gun and he can make fire shurikens with his flame abilities.

Using his bow.
Hey Brawq! Check this out!
Name: Brawq
Gender: Male
Species: Unknown
Race: Unknown
Element: Earth (inactive)
Occupation: Dark Hunter, In pursuit of Magmagear and The Rogue
Titles: Brawq, Brute, Ape, Dumbhead, Leader
Kanohi: None
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Story: Brawq is a powerfully strong Dark Hunter warrior. He was placed on the team called "The Rogue" under the leadership of Magmagear. He proved to be a strong ally and a brute warrior in combat. But once he blew a mission The Rogue was on, Magmagear kicked him out of the team. Brawq was furious at this exile so he went back to the Dark Hunter base and The Shadowed One put him on another team called "The Fury". Once they got out on a mission he attacked and killed their leader and took control of The Fury. He now leads his team in pursuit of The Rogue, seeking revenge against Magmagear.

No, this isn't one of Callan's characters. He's mine, but he's (was) associated with The Rogue, Callan's Dark Hunter team. So it fits. Hey, it's not like Callan followed the rules either. :P

His back. I used a lot of HF on this guy. :P

I based him of an Ape of course. I really like how he turned out. :)

Brawq smash!

Muwahahahaha!

A shot of both Boltran and Brawq.

Comparison with Kennos. *Teaser!*

I need some of my pieces back guys.
Wait till we're done with the photo shoot then we'll see.

A last shot. Good luck Cal.
Please rate and comment!
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August 17, 2012 |
Great custom armor and body on Brawq |
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July 1, 2012 |
Very nice, I like how you did Boltran's arms, Brawq's color scheme was kept very constant. Overall they are both really well done =) |
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May 7, 2012 |
Awesome!! Best of luck to you and would it be okay if I use your biw design I'll give credit of course |
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March 29, 2012 |
Very nice! Both of them look awesome! The customness and builds are cool! |
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February 8, 2012 |
I like it its really cool I'm working on some bionicles right now |
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January 12, 2012 |
Excellent! Boltran has a already seen color sheme, but it looks so great on him! The body and the arms are so complex, they look fantastic! And all those greebles on his chest... truly amazing. Even a great idea to give a Toa of Fire a bow! And Brawq is so fantastic! The most well armored guy I've seen yet! The gunmetal looks great, and nice usages of pieces on his body and hands. Looks like a troll to me :). Very good work on them, 5/5! |
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January 11, 2012 |
They are good but I personally HATE Hero Factory armor.. |
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January 11, 2012 |
Amazing MOCs!!!! |
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January 10, 2012 |
I think I'll do like Cody and judge in the group :) Anyway a very cool entry! Boltran look great! Really liking the torso :) I do feel he could look a little more different then Callan's but still, very cool none of the less :) As for Brawq I'm liking how he looks but, I have no idea what it is, but there's something I'm not sure I like about him, anyway two great entries :) Check the group for the results soon man ;) |
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January 9, 2012 |
Cool MOCs! Both of them are great! Good job! |
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Wait a second.... That's Brawq! Ooooooh! I knew the name sounded familiar! |
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Suspicious Chicken January 8, 2012 |
Both are cool., but the GUNMETAL BEAST OF AWESOME as I like to call it, is awesome. He's just...awesome. |
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January 8, 2012 |
Awesome Legofreak! They look great! Good luck! - KP |
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January 8, 2012 |
Awesome! Boltran looks amazing! |
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January 8, 2012 |
Thanks everyone! |
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January 8, 2012 |
awesone new mocs dude |
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January 8, 2012 |
Very nice! The fire-infected arm is super cool! also, SO MUCH GUNMETAL. :P |
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January 8, 2012 |
Really good job, and I'm rooting for you instead of Callan :P I'm pretty sure you are gonna win. Nice job on these ones. Boltran is well made ! The accuracy yet uniqueness and added greebles makes him really awesome ! Brawq is really well armored and big. Both are really awesome and well made. Go win this one dude ! :D |
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January 8, 2012 |
Sweet bow! |
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January 8, 2012 |
This is great! I've seen Cal's entry and they're both pretty good. Good luck! |
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January 8, 2012 |
Hold on... where am I? Went a bit light-headed there for a bit. Soo many greebles... (GRINGAT APPROVES) |
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January 8, 2012 |
Cool! I like the look of both, but there is something about Brawq that makes the Legs and arms look like they are not attached properly. Still, nice job! |
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S.E.D . January 7, 2012 |
Awesome Job! Hope you win :) |
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Neat Boltran. Brawq looks wicked, he can crash anybody. :D |
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January 7, 2012 |
brawq looks epic! |
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January 7, 2012 |
THESE TWO ARE ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!!
I love the tailcoats on Boltran, and Brawq is just flawless! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Well, this honestly wasn't what I was expecting! Bravo! I'm honestly a bit scared now! :D Where do I start!? Boltran is amazing, although he looks a tad squashed with the head, it looks funny and awesome! And BRAWQ!!! Impressive indeed! Like the all gunmetal look you went for, as Steve said it was risky, but you pulled it off! :D I just might add him! :D It's been a great challenge, and in my eyes, I think we've both won! Good luck to you and your scores! :D |
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Now for the real comment (the other was while I was out, on my phone.) Brawq came out very good, All the HF fits together perfectly, especially those short plates above the shoulders. That was pretty daring making an all metal moc. All of the bulkiness came out rather well. On Boltran, I was sad to see little creativity with it. I can tell you built him while looking at a picture, because he came out too similar, he really looks like just an upgrade. But other than that, all the greebling is pretty sweet! Though he looks like he needs some custom legs. The red tubing looks really good. If I were you, I wouldn't have included the first picture of Boltran solo, he looks stubby and awkward in that picture! Good Luck! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Boltran's arms are very cool, and Brawq's armor flows fantastically! Exept for the lower legs, they look a bit too disjointed. Maybe more HF? Great work on both of them! |
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January 7, 2012 |
"I need some of my pieces back" HAHA. Brawg's so awesome. He is so armored and so impervious looking. Wow. |
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January 7, 2012 |
Very well done, Braq has some awesome armor, and Boltran is greeblicious! |
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January 7, 2012 |
HOLY CRUD! Brawq is EPOC! |
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January 7, 2012 |
OMG EPICNESS!!!!! This is gonna be close! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Awesome! Exactly how I imagined Brawq :D |
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January 7, 2012 |
Man, I don't see how callan stands a chance with these guys! They're perfect! The hf fits perfectly on both! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Cool! I love your version of Boltran!! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Double thumbs-up for the silver one :) |
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January 7, 2012 |
Brawq's pure muscle is fantastic and Boltran is just overall epic! These guys are awesome. |
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January 7, 2012 |
Thanks guys. :) |
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January 7, 2012 |
These are fantastic! Boltran's style and build is epic, and Brawq's buff armour is plain awesome! Keep up the good work man! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Awesome love the "Epic Duo" :P cool 5/5 |
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