Name: Lexun Terian Gender: Male Element: Wind/Sand Species: Matoran Occupation: Fighting/Building Title(s): Lex, Brother, Captain Mask: Mask Of Forging Weapon(s): Lancer Gun Class: Captain Personality: Gruff, Occasionally Nice Role: Leads A Small Matoran Infantry Unit Likes: Toa, Winning Dislikes: Makuta, Losing Alignment: Matoran MOC Status: Assembled Biography: No one knows much of this gruff Matorans past, but much is known about him now. He is a strong captain, leader of Deta Unit for the Matoran Army (my own little concept for my story). He made some gloves that can control the Shadow element, helping him to be on more even grounds with the Makuta. He has worked with many a Toa and he hopes to happen upon a Toa stone someday (more of that in my story). He has been known for killing Makuta Dune (whom I'll build later) in the sand desert and coming back barely alive, most of his circuits fried and his "lungs" were filled with sand. After that battle he received a new element along with Air and that was (you guessed it) Sand...
Here he is with his "Lancer"
I love his legs, don't you?
Lovely torso with great greebles (in my opinion).
I also LOVE his mask. Oh, and Heartlights FTW!
Shielding from your laser blast.
Pretty simple back. Backpacks FT... that doesn't work."
"You gonna die, kid."
Just add an explosion and you've got yourself a poster.
Without his "Lancer" gun.
Size comparison with Stars Gresh.
Mata heads FTW!
The "Lancer" by its self.
"So long, friends!"
Please tell me what you think (even you non Bionicle fans, I would like to hear what you like).
I see nothing wrong with this. Definitely fits the "desert rogue" sort of theme, the greebles (!) and the colour you used (and the way you separated them) is brilliant. If he has gauntlets though, maybe try and make it look like they're not part of him? Hide the connections and so on.
Very cool! Love the details and greebles you've put into him :D Love how he looks ;) Only problems I see would be maybe adding some more tan on his arms. I also feel maybe you could buff up the legs a little bit too. But really, other then that, he's awesome! Very nicely done man :D
Thanks, Larry, I appreciate the comment! Thanks, Caleb! I'll check it out when I get the time. Thanks, Robin, I agree with you there.;) Yes, you are right, Chronos, He is a bit too tall, but he's a bit different from the other Matoran. Austin, he isn't a Toa if that's what you're thinking. I might've not made that too clear, he is a MATORAN (not yet a Toa). Thanks though! Yes, Chopperskull, I agree, but remember he's a Matoran NOT a Toa, just correcting you. But thanks, bro!
I just think the legs are too skinny for the body, but hey, it works :D I really like how he is short but has soo many details (grebles of lego and technic) The weapon is pretty well made too ! :D 5/5 For this cool creative moc.
Okay a few things need improved buddy! ;) First off I don't feel the head fit's too well the :O expression is kind of strange. And second you need to make him bigger! He needs to be able to step on gresh! But that's mainly it. He has amazing part usage and I love his gun! Oh and body seem's a bit to... Erm... phat that's fat with a PH the cool kind! Great build I can't wait to see what you do next!. Oh and go to the chat room if you can!